Wednesday, November 23, 2011

Scoop of Life Part 8

Hyatt Regency
3rd January 2011
6:22 PM


Bartender: Would you like another one of those sir?
Raghav: make it two........
The bartender lingers, Raghav just stares blankly.......
The man walks away
His phone beeps and pings periodically, he looks at it but doesnt answer or respond.


Just feels his chin and jaw........ he hears a rasp......... "I should grow one o those soul patches"
He smirks........ and plays with the snack bowl, rotates it like it was the roulette at las Vegas..........


He hears chatter, squealing and loud voices....... looks up to see, a bunch of 20 somethings were entering the bar
May be 7 may be 9 he was not sure, a few guys, but mostly girls


He notices a mass of curls on a tall curvaceous chick
He tries to recollect where he saw her before
His memory fails him, he just settles his eyes on her body, allowing his visual instincts to admire her.
She seems to be talking non stop.......in Hindi and in English
She gestures, she jumps, she giggles, she leans..........
She doesnt wait to be seated, just walks in and sits down, her guy friends and a couple of girls walk up to the bar and look around.....
She waves and jumps up


Raghav notices her chest bob, he feels slow heat crawl up his face for some reason
She has a perfect set of teeth
His phone rings.......... its Nayana......... he looks away from the phone....... at the more appealing sights in front


The puffed magenta sleeve blouse approaches him, and turns away
He can see almost all of her back of her thighs.......
He sips slowly....... pushing his glasses, in a OCD motion.........
Some girls look at him and comment amongst themselves
Radhika talks and talks.........,
the wine glasses hang upside down, forming a sparkling necklace around the bar

Its a busy evening, people are drinking to make resolutions, some are resolving never to drink again..........


Radhika: I DONT think we had it here!
Girl 1: I am not challenging you, mujhe haarna nahi hai, agar yaha nahi to, we had at the Bristol?
Guy 1: You girls are taking too long, we are just going to get our beer
Radhika walks up to Raghav again, she hasnt quit talking "Main aaj itna chali hoon, I need to bathe in that drink"
A quick image flashes through Raghav's brain, of her curling tresses bathed in wine or whatever she wanted
He looks at his phone again, its Nayana
He just spins it on the bar ..........
Radhika: I called my Mom and told her Rachu ke saath aap log karo dinner, I am not going home to that pig"
Girl 3: Radhikaaaaaaa Ek second chup hoyegi kya?
Radhika: ONLY when I find my drink, if we dont find it here, who wants to go with me to Bristol?
She manually lifts some reluctant arms "I got 5" she says smugly
She again walks up to him........
"Oh! BTW, Rachu brought iPhone 4 for me, I am driving myself sick playing angry birds"
She giggles......
Tugs at something, Raghav's elbow slides
He turns to find her an inch away
She is still talking........."I am going to play all the moronic games tonite, thats my plan, kaun hai mere saath"
"No excuse me" "No pardon me"
NOTHING
She just pulls the beverage list,  his phone slides off the marbled counter, and dives........just as he catches it mid air.........
"I have been looking for this, if you were sitting on it, you could atleast tell us. Are you planning to drive home with it?? Not before I find that stinkin drink, then.......... (its) all yours!
Raghav: Hmmphhh!
As he watches her sit down next to him and begin scanning the list as she talked.............

42 comments:

  1. oh my god..kitni bolegi ye radhika..
    raghav seeing the glimpse of her realised that he has seen her somewhere..good..
    n drinking on her features..when r they going to converse properly..
    continue soon..

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  2. saw ur reply in prev part..naanum shaliniyum thappa purinjukitom pola..i thought they met when she was to cross the road n wud ask lift to him..so this was their 1st meeting..ok..

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  3. Aditee.... yaar 5 rs.ku pesa sonna.. Radhika 50 rs.kku pesaraa... but I'm loving it.. how she totally ignores him... how he checks her out without trying to remember where he saw her..

    Nayana stop bother Raghav.. dude is checking and sitting next to his 'girl' ;)...

    kya jodi hai RR... its only 6:22 and then are already in the process of getting drunk... too good..

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  4. Hi! you two..........

    Ha ha I am glas you love the jodi already!

    I am really excited about this tale

    I am thrilled to be out of the Shaan and Khanak coma.........

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  5. Adi... Shaan and Khanak coma... *angry*.. need to start casa season 2 soon... mariyaathaiya nyabagam vachikko..

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  6. Acc. to me anything written by Aditee is bound to be exciting and so is SOL.Raghav and Radhika will be one rocking jodi there is no doubt about that and this part has already shown us a glimpse of it.Waiting for their conversation now, in full on Aditee style!!

    As a writer you may be thrilled to be out of the Shaan and Khanak coma but what about us readers Aditee? I am still entangled in the web of the magical tale called CASA DI SOGNI!!!Any number of times I read it, the story just keeps growing on me.Your writing is just extraordinary!!!CASA 2 toh chahiye hi chahiye!!!

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  7. yup..dont think that we will let u go away from shaan-khanak..it is not enough for us..we wont be satisfied without them..else smple thing to do is read the lead names as shaan-khanak if u r stubborn to come out of shanak....

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  8. awesome loved it, this is different yet we can relate to it, keep it up! like this new tale

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  9. raghav dsnt care abt responding 2 calls n msgs..
    gud 4 future ;) wnt b ny disturbance..
    bt ye radhika chhup hogi to na..
    i m already loving dis couple..
    aap kahan chali gayi aditee.. ??
    miss ur writing sooo mch

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  10. THANKS all of you! I LOVE this jodi now. I have been busy at home hence the lag in updating should pick up speed and start zipping away soon! :)

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  11. Lovely updates Aditi.... I am kinda liking this jodi .... Update soon...

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  12. gorged everything i read!!!already visualising both the Rs in my mind!!!am sure they are going to crackle together.update soon.

    p.s:aditee,don't kill me for this but who's this Nayana?is she his father's friend's daughter?

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  13. Hi Aditee
    Awesome parts 6,7 and 8 i had read all the parts earlier but could not post
    I am loving Raghav and Radhika they are different Radhika talks a lot but Raghav does not i felt he is similar to our Khanak quite guy nice different very excited for the upcoming parts
    I miss U,Casa, everyone and everything about Casa
    U know i am addicted to Casa our Shanak i cant let go off them they are always in my mind and heart I definitely want Casa Season 2 will wait patiently but please we need Casa back in our lives
    I love ur writing always its pure bliss...
    I know u are busy u take ur time and update whenever u get free time :)
    Love u always hugs

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  14. Hi Aditee,

    I am loving this Radh-Ragh pair, one is walking-talking disaster and other one is Maunavrat aka less talkative. What a combo!!! It rminds me of heat theory like Heat Gain= Heat Loss :)

    Waiting for next part.

    Btw, you haven't updated SOL it's been a while :( :(

    Thank you.

    Regards,

    Karishma

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  15. adi how long should we wait for the next part??

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  17. Thanks you guys! Its been sheer madness. Will start updating regularly starting this week. THANKS SO MUCH FOR READING AND FOR DEMANDING UPDATES :)
    Yep!
    ALL CAPS,

    No apologies to Veena ;)

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  18. Hi Aditee,

    waiting for update. soon missing ur writing so much. pls do start CASA season 2

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  19. This is not fair ,Aditee!First you get us hopelessly hooked to your writing, and then expect us to wait patiently forever!!Well,no worries,will be waiting forever!!

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  20. I am sosorry guys will update a part or two tonite DEFINITELY

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  21. its been quite a long gap we got updates adi..hope everything is fine..do continue soon..

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  22. adi hope everything is fine at ur end..do drop in pls..take care..

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  23. Hi Aditee,
    Long time no see, Hope all is well...
    Nimi

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  24. I will update either tonite or tomm nite. I apologize for the HUGE gap. Have been really busy

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  25. hey aditee,

    hope ur doing good. its almost a month u have updated. long time . take care

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  26. Aditee.. update engha?? new year new beginning pls..

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  27. Hi Aditee
    How are u hope u are doing good
    I think of u,our Casa and everyone everyday
    Missing u loads....
    Post something when u get time
    Take care
    Happy weekend :)
    Love u always....

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  28. Adi looking forward to see ur post minimally..its been more than a week since ur last msg..

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  29. Hey Aditee,

    Happy New Year. Hope u r doing good. hope to c ur update this year soon. Take care

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  30. Thanks you guys, if you are still interested in reading this one, I can continue writing it......... Please let me know......

    Thanks so much for checking back, I apologize for your disappointment

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  31. Yes,yes, Aditee, Iam very much interested for a romance written by you any time!CASA romance is by far the best one I have ever read or even seen! It can be read innumerable times and one can still feel the sizzling chemistry between Shaan and Khanak Gujral!!So, please continue......missing your writing!!!Happy New Year!

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  32. I agree with vineeta. plz continue aditee. Whenever i get time i willcherish by reading CASA, its really amazing.

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  33. adi saw u posting it in all is well forum..but again u went gayab..do continue na..we r there..

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  34. Hiya Adi...A Very Happy New Year to you and the family and to all Casaians too!!!!

    Adi hope all well....I thought I'll have loads to catch up here...very unlike of you not to carry on the task you have taken up!!!!

    I still haven't read the last update of Casa....avoiding it on purpose awaiting maybe you'll be back with season 2 soon!!!

    Take care...hopefully you'll revert back to SOL soon....and Casa season 2 as well!!!!

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  35. where did u go adi???
    dumped this one kya??

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    1. -ditto-

      Adi hope all well....was on aiw forum yrday...you have posted the parts there as well...are you going to continue there????????

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  36. Hey you guys!

    I am here and doing well. My parents returned to India on Friday. I am finally not so busy...... and have enough time to write, so starting in a few mins I will start writing seriously

    THANKS SO MUCH FOR WAITING AND HOPING I WILL CONTINUE

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