Sunday, April 22, 2012

Part 47--Scoop of Life--Longing

Feb 14th 2011
Monday
Golf Links
8:08 AM
Kapoor Residence


Dadi: Do you need another omlette Raghav? (turning towards him)
Raghav chews on his toast while Ruchira clumps up his hair and tries to tie it with her scuncie
Ruchira: Ma, Bhai ke baal mere se kitne thick hain.
Her Mom smiles, "Like your Dad's" she says, proudly....
Ruchira: Why couldnt it have been MINE?
Mridula: Phir tum bhi iski tarah chup chup rehti
Dadi: Koi mere Raghav ko kuch nahi kahega.
Ruchira: Par Nayana to bolti hai (giggles)
Just as Mridula, signals her to shut up as her husband approaches....
Dadi: Are you still seeing her Raghav?
Raghav: With my glasses..... yes.... I do.... (bland)
Dadi rolls her eyes
Mridula: Raghav, yeh kya jawaab hua Raghav?
Raghav just looks at his Mom. She is wearing a crisp blue cotton saree, pinned on her shoulder, like a teacher..... she is TALL and attarctive.... just like his Dad, who approached the table.....
Krishan: Aaj to full force? (signals his first born with his eyes)
Dadi smiles proudly..... "He cant always be the slacker!"
Krishan: Arey wah!
Raghav continues to eat.... he helps himself to another omlette..... digs at something green on it..... looks up at his Mom and smiles..... "Parsley and cumin?"
Dadi: THIS is your calling Raghav... Join forces with Mom!
He smiles and chews........
Ruchira takes a bite from his plate........
Mridula: Ruchira!!! Where is your manners....
Ruchira: Bhai borrowed it!!!
"Bhai" chuckles
Krishan: Just like everything else, he must not have returned it....
Dadaji walks in with Gin and Tonic in tow, they lunge at Raghav.........
He feeds Gin a bite of omlette.......... She chews hungrily.......
Krishan: There! Thats exactly what I am talking about
Krishan's phone rings "Nayana... I was supposed to meet with an Info & Broadcasting Under Secy at 11, zara push kar dogi usko until 2. Pawan and I are meeting the cotsyn lawyer with Sushil....
He listens..........
Krsihan: Raghav? (into the phone)
Raghav's face takes on a look of controlled awareness, he is sure his Mom and Dadi are watching him closely.........
Krishan: Pawan se baat kar loon main? (into the phone)
Gestures his wife to stop the pouring of oatmeal........ she garnishes it with fresh ground cinnamon.......
Hesays no brown sugar......
Raghav reaches for coffee.....
Mridula: Thrid cup beta?
Raghav nods....
Dadi: He was up until 2 ish this morning......

Dadaji: Shaadi kar do iski, biwi bistar se uthne nahi degi
Ruchira: Woh kyon Dadaji?
Dadi smacks her husband and smiles at her grand daughter..........
Ruchira: OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I KNOW!! (giggles)
Raghav smiles, his half smile.........
Dadaji: Nayana is already working him too hard (guffaws)
Krishan: Dad DO YOU MIND? (hisses, indicating, she is on the PHONE)
Dadaji, unfazed.... "Laga reh puttar," (swears in Punjabi, and follows with a risque joke)
Mridula clears her throat and leaves the table.... Krishan almost blushes...........
Dadi admonishes her hubby in stern Punjabi
Ruchira is trying to make sense of the thick native Punjabi.....

Raghav looks at his Dadaji and half smiles.......... completely unfazed just like the septuagenarian
Dadaji: Jisko samajhna tha woh samajh gaya
Krsihan: Hes pretty good.... shows a lot of spark..... good leader ship skills (into the phone)
Raghav realizes it must be another call, as Nayana would care about how skilled anybody is, except HIMSELF in BED........ ofcourse.........
He thought about the last time they slept together, over a month ago..........
He hadnt been celibate this long..... since.......... he understood the meaning of the word.......
Mridula: Your coffee beta!
He nods and smiles........
Mridula: Kidhar kho gaye?
Rohini walks up to her and hugs her...........
Mridula: Scrambled eggs?
Raghav pulls on her longish braid......... as she yelps
Rohini: MA! Bhai is a pest!
Dadi: He is my most fave.........
Rohini (snotty) That doesnt mean anything dadi
Mridula: Rohini!!!
Raghav lets his sister Ruchira clean up his plate, feeds teh crumbs to the sleepy canines under the table...... while Mridula "Tchh tcch" es.
Mridula (slightly nervous) Aaj ja rahe ho Corp Office
Raghav sensing the curiosity "Maybe.... in the afternoon"
Krsihan: Subah kis kaam mein busy ho? (bluntly, as he hung up the phone)
Raghav: Not busy........ (evasive)
Krishan: then you can meet with us over the cotsyn thing.......... the Ops Director..... Tripathi can use some assistance"
Raghav looks up at his Dad.......... his Dad returns the shocked expression........
Krishan: What? We have people working for us.... you know.... (mocking)
Raghav shrugs.......
Krishan: Hes been with us for a month now? Apna kuch business tha kabhi he says......
Dadaji: Great! I am happy you filled that slot.......
Krishan: Hes quite good! (guarded)
Dadaji: Did you have to pay relocation?
Krishan: Nope! Hes from Delhi....... 4 jobs in 4 years (mocking) Not sure where he lives......... IIT grad......
Dadaji looks impressed
Dadi and Mridula are talking about a writer's Forum Mridula wants Dadi to go with...
Raghav: Whats his name?
Krishan: Sushil Tripathi...
Raghav vaguely recalls seeing that name.... SOME WHERE.....

Krishan: Pawan had to meet the Safety Director for the Yavatmal plant..... koi naya DM appoint hua hai.......... he is planning to cite us for safety violations and unsavory working conditions" (incredulous)
Dadaji: Usko khilao pilao, rafa dafa karo maamle ko!
Krishan: pata nahi ji.... kisi baat par settle nahi ho raha banda....... 4 saal hue IAS karey hue... (mocking)
Dadaji: Josh mein hoga! (admiring)
Krishan pointedly looking at his son "Yep! Some of them have the passion"
The last word triggers a hunger in his body.........
Raghav is for some reason reminded of his vision from his dream....... of being in bed with a tall curly haired.... edgy, non conformist style..... goddess that talked like it was nobody's business..........
He picked up his glass and sipped his water............ a huge chunk of ice..... slipped into his mouth........ he chewed and crunched it confidently........ as he stared at the center of the table...... pushed his glasses on the bridge of his nose.........
"When is the meeting?" asks Raghav....... as he scrolls on his phone to find Radhika's number

7 comments:

  1. loved the update Aditee, wonder what Raghav has planned

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  2. i was waiting for update..got it finally..
    so is raghav going to attend the meeting with cotsyn r with the IAS officer is he going to do something..
    hhmmm..passion reminded him of radhi..cool..
    tripathi still didnt rang a bell for him..may be if he meets he could get it..
    awaiting the next part..

    loved the siblings bond..

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  3. Lovely Update..I liked the entire breakfast table conversation between Raghav and his family..

    So he'll be first one to find abt her dad working in his company:)

    Is Raghav gonna surprise Radhika for the valentine's day???

    Thanks for the update..

    Looking forward:)

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  4. maakkaan is celibate only for a month now and Madam is thinking he hasnt done it yet!! poor girl... heart break is on its way Rads!!

    loved maakkaan and his sister's and his dadi and dadaji!! basically everyone in the family!! they r too good!! but then no Madam in this part!! hopefully next part will be only MM!!

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  5. loved reading about Raghav and his family. nice one, Aditee ! waiting for the next one.

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  6. Lovely update Aditee. Waiting for his meeting with Radhika.
    Thanks for the update.

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  7. Hi Aditee :-)
    Loved the update Raghav and his family's breakfast was so good loved their family bonding and convo so real as always
    I love Shalini 's comments celibate only for a month poor Radhika she will get a heart break honestly i too would get a heartbreak i don't approve this action of a guy or a girl but it happens in reality its just my view i was expecting this in this story i just love the way u write my dear Aditee u are awesome as always!!
    Eagerly waiting to know how Radhika will take it and react she would either take it lightly and be cool or be upset i am thinking too much very excited for Valentine's day special like @Pooja said :-)
    Passion, love and everything else....
    Love u loads Aditee thanks a lot for the awesome part :-) :-) <3<3

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