March 3rd 2011
Jor Bagh Road
8:30 PM ish
Raghav: Kyon nahi...
They stood facing each other on a sidewalk of a busy road.... nothing was said, despite the world's most talkative person being present....
Raghav: Do you want to go to Hong Kong or Singapore over the weekend?
She stares at him startled.....
Radhika: Itni DOOR?
He smiles....
Radhika: I just.... (as she took a step towards him)
He reached out and clutched her hand.....
Raghav: I do too... (softly)
What ever they both wanted..... they BOTH wanted it............
Radhika: My parents think I am infatuated with you....
Raghav: And?..... (do you agree)
Radhika: I said I was "obsessed" (laughing under her breath)
Raghav: Hmmm (still struck by her innocence)
Radhika: Tumhe mera nose ring pasand nahi?
Raghav: I am obsessed (he laughs under his breath) with it
Radhika feels it just as he reaches to do the same.......
Cars honk as they steer closer to catch a glimpse of the two........
Auto waalas sneer and snigger
The night sky is almost purple.... stars appear faint and distant.........
The Kwality Wall's icecream guy just stops his cart by them.... hoping to rid his box of the few treats left
Raghav: Its been so long... (muttering)
Radhika: I know...
Their eyes communicated the rest...... as it rested on each other's lips........
Radhika: mere saath UP chalo next week (giggles)
A brief look of something serious passes through his face.......... he just pushes his glasses in........
"For how long"
Radhika: Jab tak hamara man kare....
Raghav:Can we move in together after we return?
He had done that a couple times..... his parents didnt care for it much.......
Radhika: mere parents to mujhe maar daalenge (afraid)
Ice cream guy :Ice cream Sir jee?
He haves a dismissal.........
The man swears under his breath as he wheels his cart away
Raghav: Radhika, there has got to be a way..... (pained and troubled)
Radhika: Lets get hitched..........
She almost clings to him after saying that.... he takes a step fwd to receive her body.......
Never known to think before she spoke, the
words even shock her ....
wow..radhi...
ReplyDeleteraghav asking abt living in n her reply..
yeh dhonon patake hain..
so i wonder when will radhi come to know abt wat raghav came for to UP..
awaiting the next part..
wow what an update!
ReplyDeleteAditee.. 1 more update.. its raining in Chennai and its raining updates in SOL.. loving both!!
ReplyDeleteMaakkan and Rads are very much 'hitched'.. he wants to live-in and she is obssessed!! what a pair!! waiting to see what will they do about their 'wants'...
loved the update Aditee. Im so happy that you continued. please update soon
ReplyDeletecheers,
priya p
Wow!!! The update is AWESOME!!! Their conversation is always intriguing :)
ReplyDeleteThe "obsessed" reference is lovely..
OMG!!!He already tried couple of times the living together..Poor Radhika her heart is gonna break when he says it all..looks like she'll get to know abt him one by one after their marriage..But I so want her to know it before they get hitched..will she be able to back out then??? quite tough as it may be too late..
Where he wants to "live-in together" she opts for "marriage"..these too are so different yet drawn together like a magnet..
In reality one might hate a character like "Raghav" but in fiction he is very fascinating and we all adore him..LOL..irony!!!
Looking forward more:)
Thanks for the update:)
Regards,
Poonkuzhail
yes, yes, get them hitched!! waiting for the next part!
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