Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Part 158


“Happy Holi Khanak” Shaan appears grinning, in a white V neck vest like tee, and a crushed cotton tan knee length shorts…. All DRY…
“This doesn’t count! Holi’s been over for a while” she said calmly draining water from her hair, pretending to check time on her bare wrist……….
He approached confidently, reached out and felt the gold dripping off her skin…
“Gold?” she asked carelessly…
“Its “Organic” he chuckled doing air quotes mockingly…
They circled each other… primitively…
“I am here to look for Dadi’s Krishnaji bracelet”
“Is that what she said, she lost?” he asked laughing openly…
“I should have known” she muttered…
“Amen” he said…
Watched her shiver… but didn’t offer his tee or a towel… she continued.. her teeth slowly beginning to chatter..
She started to speak, nervously… “Ujju said you play a mean Holi so I had to get you”
He didn’t say a word…
“I did” she continued…
He leaned on the sauna’s back wall…. She could see the steam swirling inside… through the glass door…
“Shantan” she began…
“If this about going to Mansa or to Ahmedabad, it’s a “No” Khanak”
She stared, startled…
“I am hoping we can make love” he said, as if he just asked her “Do you need a ride to work?” or “What time is Bai and Aada’s flight back” something as mundane and trivial…
Her jaw dropped as he approached, hands tucked in his pocket….She took a step back tripped on a wrought iron chair… and fell back as his arm snaked out…



















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13 comments:

  1. UnknownAugust 28, 2013 at 8:32 AM

    Thanks aditeee :)
    reading casa after a few days is bliss :))
    I love dis couplee! he is blunt and clear abt what he wanted all dis time :P
    uff but abhi nahi kabhi tho baat karien unki problems ki
    really enjoyed the update n crackle btw dem :))
    thanks soooo much for uodating even if u are sooo busy :))

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  2. monika aaryaAugust 28, 2013 at 8:39 AM

    Hayeeee...... Classy !!

    Hz focusd on wat he loves d most !

    Shz surprsd ! He dsnt wann talk abt mansa... ?

    Hz avoiding d issue keeping thm apart !

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  3. pooAugust 28, 2013 at 9:08 AM

    Thank God you updated..:)))

    Shaan appeared so cool and casual after getting successful in getting Khanak drenched with color!!! :)

    Now she knows Dadi played a trick..Lol..:D

    And he plays mean all the time..;)

    Awww..He again avoids talking about the trip and her past..

    He just get straight to the point what he wants..*blush*

    Looking forward and thank you for updating an amazing update!!! :)))

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  4. chandu8881August 28, 2013 at 9:12 AM

    Wow!! So good to see u back aditee!!!:)
    Hope ur doing well:)
    That was splendid aditee..
    Why is he ignoring the stuff between them?? Will they ever talk..?
    Loved this one a lot..
    Will be waiting for the next one..update soon:)))

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  5. UnknownAugust 28, 2013 at 9:24 AM

    Thanks!
    Hope you are well
    He is straightforward and very clear on his intentions ;)
    I loved it! Casa sounds so poetic and beautiful all the time I dont know what it is but there is something...
    Again the main point was ignored! It doesnt make their situation any better!
    Waiting for the next :)

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  6. jalisAugust 28, 2013 at 9:51 AM

    i think i died after this line “I am hoping we can make love” ;)
    its fine if she is tounge tied whenever he speaks like this but whenever he just cuts her out without solving the problems she should fight back and make him to listen
    hope next time she does that :)
    update soon :)

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  7. vineeta2108August 28, 2013 at 10:24 AM

    Thanks a lot for updating Aditee........superb part as always.........loved it..........enjoyed reading it!!

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  8. adventure_gurlAugust 29, 2013 at 4:33 PM

    lovely job

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  9. Shalini_SAugust 31, 2013 at 6:34 AM

    wow.. this guy is so mean... loved it..

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  10. UnknownSeptember 2, 2013 at 8:13 AM

    aditeee update soon plz :)

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  11. VijuSeptember 2, 2013 at 8:59 AM

    Beautiful update. plz update soon

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  12. pooSeptember 3, 2013 at 1:00 AM

    Update soob Aditee..Missing daily updates of Casa..:(

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  13. UnknownSeptember 3, 2013 at 9:58 AM

    Missing Casa! Do update whenever you have time :)

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