Saturday, October 29, 2011

Scoop of Life Part 5

Gopaldas Bhavan
Connaught Circus
3rd January 2011
11:45 AM
9th Floor


Monday


Nayana: You came to work today (smiles)
Raghav shrugs carelessly. He didnt care to speak unless it was utterly necessary. Lots can be achieved with body language and silence was his motto.
Krishan: Lots of documents to review........ (doesnt bother nodding at his son)
Pavan: Krishan,  Anuttam and Ateendra (his sons) return tomorrow from the textile mill scouting trip. Wool is definitely not our strength. I am nervous, how is the collaboration talk coming along?
Krishan: I had a call last nite and have one later today Bhayya
Pavan is pleased, he turns to Raghav
Pavan: SO? What do you think Mr Kapoor?
Raghav: Am I supposed to? (shuffles his papers)
Nayana lingers, tucking her blouse in a affected manner.......... Krishan looks at her and says "More fresh coffee please Nayana?"
Nayana looks at the young kapoor who is now leaning on the window seat, gulping his coffee.
Nayana: For you? Raghav?
He just raises his cup to indicate he is good
Krishan rolls his eyes, he is fully aware of his son's cynicism AND charm.
Didnt care to deal with either this morning
Pavan: Just say something raghav
Raghav sets the papers on his Dad's huge shiny cherry wood desk, " Looks like the paper work is quite messy"
Krishan: WHY do you ask him Bhayya?
Pavan:Shhhh! Ek min (stops his brother)
Pavan:  Good point Raghav, we are trying to buy it from the holding company, but the moment we pay the earnest money they will let us start operations at the tannery
Raghav: two businesses we have NO CLUE how to manage?
Krishan: thats enough Raghav
Raghav shrugs non chalantly and starts walking out of the room
Nayana follows him with the coffee pot........
Krishan: Shut the door behind you, thanks!
Raghav: 3 tanneries have been shut down in Jalaun and Dehat Kanpur by some lunatic Hindu fundamentalist org citing water pollution....... in the last year....... good luck
Lets himself out lazily, does NOT shut his dad's door
His Dad and Uncle exchange shocked looks, despite their rigorous research, and paying for the "consulting company, this fact, they had NO clue about...........
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Noon 3rd January 2011
Monday
Kilokri Village, near Malviya Nagar
Clean Water Initiative --Office
Radhika sifts through files stacked almost mile high on her desk. She looks up dismayed at Umesh the admin "Isme UP ke files kahan hai?
Umesh: yahi the Maam
Radhika: UP mein kitne saalon se kaam chal raha hai?
U,mesh fumbles, Poonam Research Coordinator, answers confiedently " Radhika Etawa aur Bojnor, Amroha, aur Jaunpur mein kam se kam 4 saal se
Radhia (frustrated) To ISME sab MP, maharashtra ke files hain?
She looks around her office, its a huge mess, the premises are dingy, musty and not fit to house more than 5, but over 20 are cramped into it..........
There are open shelves lining the walls, a old beat up Khaitan cooler, juts out of the window. The tube light is half dead, the room is pitch black without electricity.......
Radhika looks at Umesh: Ek chai mil sakti hai?
Umesh is happy he has been asked something that he KNOWS, he vamooses
Radhika picks up her curls and knots it high above her head...........
Looks at Poonam........ "Jalaun ke files ke liye kisko call karen?"

12 comments:

  1. so he manages to tell his dad and his brother abt shut tanneries.. he got the info from Radhika :)

    so the ground work is done for RR meet... waiting for it..

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  2. I already left my comments. It's not here anymore :( :(

    Raghav seems to have attitudes and a big ego. But liked how he surprised his dad and uncle with his information.

    So finally Blue & pink are going to meet soon regarding Jaluan project. Can't wait to see how their first takkar would go. Please update soon.

    Thanks Adi :)

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  3. loving this story so far, a rich guy who is bored with his life and a middle class girl making the best of her life and has time to enjoy everything around her. This meeting will be interesting!

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  4. Shalini he has NO clue about her. The info he has is not sourced by her, just his independent fact finding.

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  5. Very interesting update Aditee
    Got to know about Raghav's job he is not interested in his Dad's Textile business
    He is very smart he is trying to explain things to his Dad and big Dad and Radhika is a Journo
    Different professions
    Love ur ideas Aditee
    Thanks for the update :)
    Love u

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  6. so ground s ready 4 dere first battle!! :)
    interestng.... lukng frwd 2 it..
    he speaks less?? silent killer hmmmnnnn ;)

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  7. Hey Aditee i just read all the updates here......love ur storyline and description of the lead characters :)......i liked the relation between bro and sis ,it made me wish that i had a bro:)..i liked the description of Raghav's attitude at work...i felt he was someone who went by his own interest and principles ....loved that part.....all updates were good...waiting for ur next update:)

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  9. that was nice..
    even though raghav looks detached with work he has valid point..so he too have did some research on this..
    attitude of raghav is superb..
    radhika in between bundles of files..
    waiting for raghav-radhi meeting..

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  10. Aditee thanks for starting "Scoop of Life". I am loving it. So radhika and Raghav are the main chars here. I am wondering when an dhow thses both are going to meet.

    I am loving siblings part a lot.

    Thanks once again.

    Karishma

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  11. So we are getting there. Slowly.

    Hmmm, she is going to be sparring against him. She will talk incessantly as he will be riled, his slience taking a good thrashing. Good. Mission accomplished.

    Am looking forward to the clash of the Titans. whenever. No rush.

    Bravo aditee. Splendid update.

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  12. Loved the update. The stage is set for RR to meet. looking forward to the meeting. I am sure it is going to be one of a kind meeting.

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