Friday, March 30, 2012

Part 37 Scoop of Life-- 101

Feb 5th 2011
Boombox Cafe
Khan Market
9:00 PM
 Onwards.........
She wipes the frosting off her mug when seated, he seats himself across her.
He waits for her to respond to his "Some place quiet" but it doesnt come......
He breaks the brief silence "Do you come here often?"
She looks up at him " Usually once a month, one of my friend's cousin owns this place, he came for the inauguration and is hooked ever since. I love the beverage menu of all the things here" giggles as she raises a toast with her mug. His is over half full......
She continues............ he listens........
Rag: Waise what do your sisters do?
Rag: Ruchira is in Gargi College......
Radhika: Eeeeeeeeeeeee (shrieks)
He is startled
Rad: GARGI mein?
Rag: ya?
Rag: Ma Gargi mein padhaati hain...... what is she studying?
Raghav: English Hons.
Raghav: Rohini will start college in Fall.
Radhika: in "Fall" did you study in the US (mock upset)
Raghav: CMU.......
Rad: FALL, I mean.......... yahan to hum Fall nahi bolte.......
Radhika: Waise tumne CMU mein kya padha? (before he can answer) sounds impressive yaar. You look very studious (looks at his glasses, but his eyes hold hers captive).
A brief moment of wordlessness quickly slips in.......
Raghav: Computer Science Radhika........
There is a pause again...... forming a rythm of sorts......
Her "heart pounds for some strange reason each time he says her name like that.......... or even speaks" she concludes.....
"Yikes" slips off her mouth......... "You are a geek" ("A sexy one nevertheless" her heart prompts)
He smiles, his usual half smile
Radhika: Do you work in Gurgaon? Let me guess......... Apple? Google? Microsoft? Nothing but the best will do" (declares with her index finger raised) Gosh! an IT guy? MY first. I seem to attract the vagabond, social activist types usually u know, DU mein dekha hoga tumne" (giggles)
Her earrings bob and sparkle........ he watches "she doesnt pause for taking a breath, super woman" he thinks
Radhika: CMU matlab grad school nahi? Tumne undergrad kaha kiya? DU?
Raghav: CMU....
Radhika: UNDERGRAD BHI? It costs $200k (stops in shock, checks herself and continues politely) sorry, didnt mean to pry.......... none of my business (embarrassed)
Radhika: I cant believe you are in IT...... Ritwik will get a hoot out of this... (smiles to herself shaking her head) NOW I will tell him I am not so "odd". (giggles)
Radhika: Tumne bataya nahi where do you work? Was any of MY guesses correct? (eager)
He smiles twitches his lips " Actually No......"
Radhika: To phir kahan?
Raghav: I moonlight in my Dad's business........
She continues looking at him without batting an eyelid as if she were wondering how the words were forming on his lips......... he wonders if he fascinates her for some reason...........
They both wonder and cause yet another nonverbal event
He is done...... she waits and waits as if some more will be said soon.........
Raghav: Radhika? (nudging gently with his voice)
He finds her face glowing with a warm rush of color as she averts her eyes back to her mug
"My beer is almost all gone" (pretends to sip from an empty mug)
The waiter arrives with the food menus
The votive candle in the center flickers in the sudden movement/gush of air displaced by teh waiter.......
Waiter: Ready to order sir?
Raghav: I think so......
Radhika: I LOVE LOVE LOVE the lettuce wrap here........ (gushing) you must try it, they have 4 kinds
He reads patiently.......
Radhika: Vegetarian? (as usual extremely confident in jumping to conclusions)
Raghav Rarely....  (meets her eyes........ and smiles as an afterthought)........Radhika!!
Her insides hurtle  and plunge yet again............

9 comments:

  1. oh..ho.. payyanukku therinchi pochu ponna eppadi madakkarathunu... inime kondattam thaan :)

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    1. Shalini great going in Tamil :)
      How are u?
      I read urs and friends posts missed u '
      Its being long time we all joined together and chatted in forum lets do it sometime soon..
      Aditee i am loving this story want u start Casa new season in IF miss those golden days...

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    2. good Krithika.. hru??
      Yup.. Casa days were fun... waiting for Adi to start Casa 2!!

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  2. just loved the update the date seems to be going well

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  3. Aditee loved this part their convo is beautifully written :)
    I loved this
    Her "heart pounds for some strange reason each time he says her name like that.......... or even speaks" she concludes....
    Even i feel so happy when he calls her Radhika
    Pink and blue lines haaye :)

    Radhika: Vegetarian? (as usual extremely confident in jumping to conclusions)
    Raghav Rarely.... (meets her eyes........ and smiles as an afterthought)........Radhika!!

    she thinks he is a vegetarian but he answers rarely so he is not and she is a vegetarian :)

    Thanks for the lovely update <3 <3

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  4. Aditee thanks for writing this wonderful "SOL". The story is getting interesting and intense as well. Loved convo between R-R, their date and the pull both of them feeling for each other but still unaware of their feelings. Radhika seemed to jump into conclusions whereas Raghav was the opposite, so cool and thoughtful. But this chatterbox seemed to got into his blood and he wouldn't be stay away from her at all. Please let their hearts pound together. Can't wait for the next parts. Thanks once again.

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  5. Hi..
    Regardless to say,I'm one of the hard-core silent reader of your writings,especially on ShaNak.Actually i started to read CASA only after you completed it.what an amazing story that was..I was little busy in my studies,doing my PG final year project now.Today thought of commenting on all blogs which i follow on ShaNak.will comment regularly once I'm free.I like SOL too.. You are one good writer,your screenplay and dialogues are simple but yet amazing.And a small request if you have any plan of bringing CASA season 2,please write it.I'll be waiting for that day as you know better than me ,there are still many things to explore in that story.

    Regards,
    Poo

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