Her mother appeared like a deer caught in headlights…
speechless and dazed…
Khanak showered and changed into a pretty salwar suit she
had bought for her for Holi… she sat in Shaan’s room only after Khanak
threatened her to handcuff her to her couch….
She feared what will she say if her “var” came…
Dadi laughed heartily, “Look him the eye and say, do you
mind? I would like some alone time with my daughter” she taught Mrs Mistry
Mrs Mistry stared horrified…
Dadi:He bothers his wife… he doesn’t care about any of us!
(winking)
Khanak shook her head disagreeing… but she was in her
closet…
Mrs Mistry: If he wants to relax? And spend time with my
beti?
Dadi:He has her all nite (cleared her throat)
Mrs Mistry blushed coyly “ Ummm… aap”
Dadi:You can call me “Mummy”
Mrs Mistry:Ma?
Dadi:Kyon nahi (hugged her)
Dadi:Don’t believe a word of what your daughter says, she
cannot live without him
Khanak:Bai… Dadi I am going to take a shower..
Hubby walks in… in offwhite crushed , long, too many
pockets, shorts… and a brown tee… they saw each other…
He was startled to see his MIL though…
Khanak ignored him and began to walk towards the long
hallway leading to the massive bathroom..
Dadi:Dekho kaun aaya hai
S:I see that (smilling)
Mrs Mistry squirmed…. Ready to jump out f the couch…
Dadi:Khanak…. Ruko…. Kahan…. Ruko beta
Khanak:Nahi dadi
Dadi:AAP KHUD DEKHO kitni ziddi hai yeh ladki
Bai: Khanak..
K:Tchhh…
Dadi:Touch her feet beta(hissing)
He did… turned to look at his wife
“Don’t look at me… I am not stepping anywhere close to you”
she told him with her eyes..
Bai blessed him in Gujarati… and started to gush…
Dadi: greet her beta
Khanak sulked as she stood by Dadi..
K:He needs to shave! (muttering)
Dadi giggled… “Khanak!”
Bai avoided the hug…
Shaan:WHERE is my 7mm lens?
Khanak acted like he asked Dadi
D:Don’t ask ME… ask your room mate!
K looked at hubby…
Shaan:I am missing three Khanak! (exasperated)
Dadi shoved her in his direction, as he went to search the
ginormous chest of drawers…..
He rummaged… messing everything up… she complained and
whined… they stood together bodies rubbing on each other… lingering….
S:Aada is not here?
K:Downstairs…
Dadi and Bai watched the couple mesmerized…
Khanak searched daintily…he pulled on her bangle…………as she
stole her hand back…they were facing awall… so the antics not visible to the
women on the couch…
S:HL needs to mind his own business (angry at not finding
the lenses)
K:Its not HL, its me… I need to move out (blunt) (so you can
have your room back)
Shaan bent down and rubbed his stubbly chin on her bare
neck/shoulder… as if searching carefully for his lens… trapping her between the
chest and his body…
The raspy jaw scraped the smooth glowing skin… bruising it…
“Mom’s watching” she warned… terrified… embarrassed…furious
“Dadi is too!” He told her chuckling
Ha! Loved it aditee:)
ReplyDeleteHe choses a perfect time to make an entry:p
Bai's already terrified..hope these two patch up sooner:)
Thanks a lot for update:)
Will he seriously play holi?? Eager to know..
Dadi is too adorable..:)
Continue soon:)))
Finally thy came across !!!!
ReplyDeleteHer Bai must b in totally wrong/beshram world .... LOL...
Dadi alwys plays cupid...
Shanak rubbing teasing whining.... Hayeee...... Bless shanak....
Loving it.... Update soon..... Waiting fr shanak style holi....
eekss omg miss him so much
ReplyDeletei love the last two lines omg kitna besharam dadi aur MIL ke samne bhi ;)
plzz update soon and few updates only and only shanak kitna miss kiya unhe :(
thank u aditeeee :)))
ReplyDeletebai is in wonderland lol!
dadi and bai are soooo cute acting like fans of this couple n watchin dem :)))
I loveee shanak!! super adorable they are
hahahaha! he doesnr care n is so mischievous even infront of her bai :P
slowly bth are gonna patch up and forget the fight hopefully the dnt avoid it n tlk abt it :D
update soooon n waiting for holi :))
He is too sexy to be true sometimes...Love how he is always the first one in a argument trying the close the gap between them even though both wont talk about the issue but he is relentless in making her agree obviously for his own benefit ;)
ReplyDeleteBai is in awe and Dadi commentary is adorable...even she can't get enough of this couple :)
Aditee...can you make the talk about at least one of the issues in the round about way? I so want them to actually talk whether its harsh or completely blunt!
LOL!!!! Loved it.. will these two ever give up their fight..
ReplyDeleteDadi kya sikhaya Mrs.Mistry ko to say to her damaad...
Lovely... Awaiting the next part...
those were two terrific updates Aditee!! both of them have their reasons to be upset and the way you have written about it in the last update was awesome!! infact whatever you write about this couple is awesome..........uff........their little talks, their little gestures are simply killing.........!! loving Khanak's parents visit....loving her mom's reaction and Dadi is the back bone of this story.......... such wonderful characters you have sketched Aditee!!
ReplyDeleteWow lovely update aditee...
ReplyDeleteShanak are fighting like kids....
Loved their romance even though they are not alone in the room...
Khanak's mom might get surprised seeing her Romantic SIL..
Waiting for the next update....
Aditee...u okay? Update sooon :))
ReplyDeleteUpdate please!!!
ReplyDeleteUpdate soon Aditee!!!
ReplyDeleteupdateeeeeeeeeee
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