Wednesday, August 21, 2013

Part 157


8:09 PM,
Khanak dried her hair as she sneezed away… gold flecks glistened in her skin, it sparkled under the giant vanity lights… she was quiet, as she rummaged through “her” cabinets for a hair accessory.. found a orange velvet like string with bells on each edge… she braided her still damp hair with it… her magenta kurta had an orange trim, it was full sleeved… she reached for it, looked at herself once before she slid it off the hanger… there were red welts on her neck and on her arm, there was on her left breast…………
She wore her kurta in a hurry… found a orange crystal like bindi… shut the lights out, rubbing lotion on her sore spots… it singed…
She walked back to the bedroom, he lay sleeping on the bed… face down..her gorgeous green saree a crumpled mess on the floor, leaking gold color………..
She didn’t know where the blouse was, both were soaked in the gold sparkling dye he had used………..
She had gotten off the elevator, the Gujrals apartment was also at the penthouse level, but the common terrace area could also be accessed through an elevator, Gujrals had their private terrace, accessible through a spiral staircase, all bedrooms had an exterior door leading to the corridor to the terrace………..
There was NOBODY… no cleaning crew… no servants… the place looked spotlessly clean……… like no Holi was ever celebrated…………
She wandered, the afternoon breeze teasing her green pallu and wet hair……….. smiling, she walked to the 15 foot rails………. Peeking down…….. started looking for the bracelet………… spends over 20 mins poring over every nook and crany, disappointed she punches 912 on the intercom, Dadi answers, she tells her she cant find it, Dadi asks her to search harder…
Khanak is tired, but agrees quietly….
Hangs up the phone, the overhead misting tubes, suddenly start spraying a gold liquid… she tries to scamper under an awning…. She is soaked in gold water…
“Happy Holi Khanak” Shaan appears grinning, in a white V neck vest like tee, and a crushed cotton tan knee length shorts…. All DRY…



17 comments:

  1. thanks a lot Aditee :)
    Loved the update!!
    shaan got to her!!! lol!! he wasn't going to give up on her!
    and aftermath was as usual hot! I knew he let her win for his own selfish reasons ;)
    I'm wondering ki aab if Sooraj is still there me sure it will come back on point again....abhi tho itni issues hain inn doon mein!!

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  2. OMG.... Ds is so perfect !!!!

    Shan's style holi.... Golden golden.... So romantic n hz all dry....

    Aye haaye.....loving d golden celebration.....

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  3. omg shan ne aakhir khanak ko rang hi dala sooo unique and the way he said happy holi khanak awww naughy naughty
    eekss so hot it was
    waiting for further parts plzz update soon :)

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  4. Happy holi! Indeed;)
    Loved it a lot aditee:)
    Golden is the color for her;):D
    Description about the terrace gave the idea how they ended up in his room;)
    Did they speak about her ex-in law's??
    Continue soon aditee:)
    Thank you so much for updating:))

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  5. Hey....one more pls....this is incomplete...

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  6. Wow!!! Loved it so much!!!♥ What a Holi celebration by our ShaNak!!! ♥

    Shaan smeared golden sparkle color!!! Wow!!! That is so unique..Want her to be all sparkling it seems..:)

    Gosh..The subtleties is more sensuous and so hot!!! ♥

    Awww..She searched for so long even after knowing the place is clean for bracelet!!!

    Dadi wanted to search more..;)

    Awww..The color got splashed and Shaan wished her holi!!!♥

    She is fully well and he dry!!! ;)

    Looking forward and thank you for writing a fabulous update!!! :)))

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  7. I knew it he will get her!
    I love how it was a unique colour! It felt original and classic just like this story!
    Holi is complete now and I knew he had as usual his own way of compensating for letting her win :P
    I so want all of Khanaks kurtis!! They sound so beautiful! more so I love the technical aspect of Casa of how you describe their clothing as if it tells us a lot about their personalities and on top how gorgeous both of the are :P

    I'm excited how some of the issues between them will be explored...like the Sooraj one both easily pretend it didnt happen! I don't expect understanding yet as it takes years for a marriage to reach the level but I want to read a moment of where for once both might consider each other first in some situations not her family or his work!

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  8. the holi was just the way it should have been for them and only you could have written it this way..........loved it.........but Aditee, we are a greedy lot and so "yeh dil maange more"............more of this awesome couple and their romance, your style!!

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  9. oh..ho.. loved it..Shaan and his way of revenge.. too good... u too Dadi!!

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  10. Missing daily updates of Casa!!! :(

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  11. seems u r busy update wen free

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