The kids jumped up and spoke in animated Marathi upon
looking at him, he smiled… “Hindi mein baat kar sakta hoon” he offered…
He sat down by her, leaning on the wall… with his legs
stretched out…
“Are you really staying here tonite?” she asked…
“You don’t want to go home” he responded…
“You shouldn’t waste time, work maybe” she offered, stacking
Ritwik’s Lego blocks….
“Khanak we should wait until the night to start fighting……
Ritwik: Mausi are you going to stay here now? (Marathi)
Shaan:Aaaj raat ko…
Khanak: If you pack up all your toys, I am going to give you
something…
The kids scramble…
“We could go for a walk” said her husband…
“I have to help Vaishali Aunty with dinner” she said
His phone rang…. He took the call by her favorite window….
She went in and found his gym and laptop by by her things,
Ritu called…
The phone was where Sooraj’s pic used to be on the mantel….he
watched her reach for that spot… the screen glowing, as it stood like a picture
frame…
She yanked it off the charger as she answered… “It was
charging” she told Ritu… or was she telling her husband…
She knew she would have had two kids by now, one would be in
school… she would have taken them to school and gone off to work… life with
Sooraj may have been very uncomplicated… lots of family politics… yes… but she wouldn’t
have to grapple with issues she is right now…. An intensely ambitious man…
other women finding Sooraj attractive… all this wealth… no desire for children…
“Hes staying here too” she told Ritu..
“So you guys are dealing with this like adults?” Ritu asked
grimly
“How ironic, dealing maturely about wanting kids” she told
Ritu…
Shhhhhhhhhhh” Ritu stopped her… “He kinda hinted babe right
from the beginning”
Khanak knew, but didn’t care to agree…
“Atleast there is no mistress or one night stands” Ritu
giggled…
“I would be gone faster than he could say miss in mistress”
she said biting…
“Go back home, and use his family to pressure him”
“Sab saath rehte hain Ritu, he still wont budge” frustrated…
“MAIN baat karoon?”
Its of no use”
“DO NOT THINK OF LEAVING HIM OK?” Ritu shrieked…
Khanak stared out the bedroom window… Ritwik and his pals
were playing hide and seek around the VW Toureg…
why why is she behaving soooo stubborn ? when he asked for a walk...she shoud hv agreed but NOooo.
ReplyDeleteplease give longer part soon.
Loved it!!! ♥ Khanak still can't believe Shaan is staying there with her..He even correcting the Ritwik that they are staying only for today..Walk would be good..They could talk..:)
ReplyDeleteBoth remembering Sooraj..And her clarification..Awww..And yes she would ve had kids by now..But it is destiny that she is with Shaan now..:)
Nope..Shaan can never cheat on Khanak..He'll remain faithful..♥ He was even during their separation..:)
No one can convince him for having a kid..And matter of fact its between ShaNak..
She'll leave if she get pregnant..;)
Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update!!! ♥
awww i love his gesture sitting down by her leaning on the wall legs streched out :)
ReplyDeleteIS she thinking of leaving him again ?
if so then this time i dont support her what is this ? *angry*
galti kisi ki bhi ho whether shan or khanak but leaving like this again and again is childish and immature :P
whatever she is doing right now ignoring him and all that is ok seeing shan's behaviour this reaction is normal but leaving is not :(
i m very tensed now jaldi se ye problem solve kardo aditeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
update soon
waitin waitin for wat shaan has to say to khanak :))
ReplyDeleteme sure he wont be ready but he fears she would leave him and everyone is hintin at it too :((
hehehehe! ritu is right too he never wanted a baby but khanak should be happy there is no mistress lol!
awww now she is reflectin if her life wit sooraj was better off with him i guess she is really unhappy for many reasons him not givin her time and upar se no babies at all she does have some expectations :'((
thank u aditee plz plz update soon plz plz
brilliant aditi......shaans fear is reflecting by his behaviour now....while everyone is reflecting the fear i think she will reach to a conclusion soon....shaan no coaxing or talk to no baby wont change her desire for a baby......all of us want the one-to-one now please do update soon :-)
ReplyDeleteLoved the update Aditee
ReplyDeleteLoved the way Shantanu sat by her side and also corrected Ritwik and Khanak still didn't believe him that he is staying that night
Shantanu fears of her leaving as all hinting him about it is reflecting by his behaviour now
Khanak is too stubborn she should have went for walk with him and hear what he wants to say.
Both remembered sooraj but I didn't like her thinking her life would have better with sooraj with two kids. Now she is with Shantanu its her destiny.
Ritu wanted to talk with Shantanu about baby but no one can convince him for baby
Is she thinking of Leaving him?
Awww Shantanu is faithful to her and he will be always .
Loved the update Aditee he sat by her side she can convince him by her behavior if she plans to stay here more longer Shantanu will listen to her or atleast try his best to be with her he fears she will leave him and he can't take it! They need a long convo and i loved how they remember Sooraj i can understand how Khanak must be feeling Sooraj will always be in her memories but Shantanu is her present and future she needs & loves him more than anything! I want to know Shantanu's thoughts and feelings! Ya she would be gone faster than he could say miss in mistress i loved this line and i am sure he won't cheat on her he loves her!
ReplyDeleteAs always Ritu & her phone convo was perfect!
Eagerly waiting for next update!
Love u always <3 <3
Ritu is like a mirror to her.. lovely update..
ReplyDeleteRitu is the only one who can say the correct things on her face............Shaan is trying to fit in that environment for his wife..........waiting for their lamba wala interaction.........loved their conv. in this one too........loved the update!!
ReplyDeleteaditeee update plz plz plz whenever u get time
ReplyDeleteloved the updates Aditee!
ReplyDeleteupdate soon aditee :))
ReplyDeletewaiting eagerly for the nxt do update when you are free aditi :-)
ReplyDeleteplease update soon....cant wait.
ReplyDeleteUpdate soon Aditee..Missing casa very badly!!!
ReplyDeleteHope you are OK Aditee
ReplyDeleteUpdate soon please