Part 212
Dadi called on his phone,
“When are you getting home? Aur Khanak kahan hai?” she
started accusing…
“Shes with me” he said, correcting it to “I am in in
Chembur” he said…
“Who abhi wohin hai?”
“Jee” he said like his wife..
“Did you not go last nite?” she asked, shocked..
“I had meetings until 2, and then Ehsaan and I went to the
site for an hour”
“This is just wrong Beta” she complained… “Your marriage is
always on tenterhooks, yet you take such risks”
“I am fine… she is too” he said cutting Dadi off as she
aired some fears HE had as well….
“Sunil aaya abhi usko pooch raha tha, he will be calling her
I think, You guys are pushing it” Dadi was unforgiving…
“You think I should buy this Chembur apartment?’ he asked
preoccupied, not encouraging Dadi any more…
“Whhatt?” she asked confused “Keda flat?” she continued in
Punjabi…
“He explained that the apartment she lived with Ritu before
they met…
“You want to basically give her a refuge when she runs away?”
Dadi asked as if she was talking with a juvenile…
“Dadi” he began…
“You buy it for her, she will as much as move in” “You know
that Shantanu Gujral” “You don’t want kids, she does, sure send her to a middle
class neighborhood, where everyone around is pregnant or..(stops, subtly
hinting that people are having sex) tere paas to time hai nahi… dono kaam ke
liye
“I came her to get her alright” he argued…
“Ghar chhodkar usko tujhe site jaana hoyega” Dadi supplied
punishingly…
“NOO, I actually wanted to stay in bed with her until
morning… its been five days” he said shamelessly..
“Khotha” Dadi yelled, as her grandson laughed out loud…
“Don’t buy it forher, she might actually start loving you
because you have given her a exit door from the situation she is currently in”
He stared at the calendar and baby pics on Vithal’s walls,
Khanak walked in and out of the tiny one bedroom, smiling and ack, somethings
the women were saying…
He stood up, sauntered out… “ She might do it on her own” he
muttered..
“I don’t think so, atleast… ermmm.. ummm… financially… umm…
beta… she is stretched thin… I” Dadi shut up
“Do you know something?” he asked in a brittle voice…
“Nahi… nahi I am just saying based on what I know she does
for her family, parson Shirdi gayi Tejeshwar Gujral Trust ke kaagaz dekhe, she
is barely 1/3rds done there”
“Pardon it Dadi” he suggested, deviously…
“Teri biwi Malabar Hill, hi nahi, Mumbai sheher chhodkar
gaayab ho jaayegi, tuannu kadi nahi milegi” (she will vanish from your life if
you try to buy her)
His Dad began calling…
He hung up on his other favorite gal… and took his Dad’s
call..
“What did YOU do?” was his Dad’s first Q when he told him he
was at Chembur
“Not a thing” he said plainly irritated…
“Who to pata lag raha hai janaab, I don’t have a grand baby
yet” his Dad responded snarkily…insulting him in a veiled manner...
everyone is worried abt dem now :((
ReplyDeletei like if he brought chembur flat for her she can move in there when she is angry wit him :p
aww even he knows the risks he is takin but can't help it shaan can spend time n give her attention at least if he still doesn't want the baby she be happy like dis too :)
really loved readin his n dadi talk everyone is seeing the problems btw dem nw I hope he doesn't let hergo forever before it is late :((
jaldi update karma Aditee loved it
Loved it!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ Shaan is too much into work..Such a workaholic..He asking for Dadi's advice of buying her the apartment..She didn't like it at all..
ReplyDeleteGosh..He talks so openly with his Dadi too..
Btw once Khanak asked puppy right..He should get her one..Her focus might shift to it for a while..
She definitely cant buy that flat..It must be way too costly..
Ha.Ha..:D His Dad taking a dig and mocking him..Poor guy..Except his mom none understanding him regarding baby issue..
Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update!!! ♥♥♥
thank you so much aditi.....shaan is sailing a boat through the waves.....he is aware of the risks and outcome.....I hope he is not being delusional about it.....there was so much reality within the conversation with gujral dadi and him.......i think he might buy the apartment for her safest bet to turn towards.....he should be aware the outcome is what he and his family fears and work of not falling over the edge....enjoyed reading the update between the guy and Gujrals...got to see from how they view the relationship interesting....do update soon aditi :-)
ReplyDeleteyayyaaa everybody is giving him a piece of mind maja aa raha hai hheheeee
ReplyDelete"he said cutting Dadi off as she aired some fears HE had as well…." NOW he started to fear ? but better late than never
waise everybody used to give before also but he didnt care but now it seems he is taking it seriously very good this is only the good time to think about it shan :P
awwww he is ready to buy the apartment juz for her aww so sweet but dadi is damn right khanak chali jayegi if he but that house :(
good he spoke with dadi first :)
haww shameless hahahaaaa but i love it ;)
omg now what dad will say :P
awesome love it want more updates like this what shan thinks is he serious or not how shanak will come through this everything :)
update soon :)
I enjoyed reading the update! Especially the hints revolving around the story.
ReplyDeleteI think he'll buy Chembur to let stay in the safe side and easy to find her if they separate :P
Some insight to his mind and him telling Dadi, to excuse all her loans! How adorable...He does really want to be EVERYTHING for her.
He is conscious about the trouble brewing between them...He is either being idiotic or has the gall for jeopardising their relationship :O
Continue soon Aditee...Really loving the crack developing in their story :)
Superb update Aditee
ReplyDeleteEvery one is worrying about them except Madhavi
Loved the convo of Dadi Gujral and Shantanu
Shantanu is workaholic and when dadi called he said "I am fine.....She is too" cutting dadi off as she aired some fears ..... he had as well" ....... now shantanu is starting fear ...... its better than latter.
Shantanu asked advice to buy flat but Dadi didn't like it and said if he buys apartment she will move in whenever they fight.
Shantanu is so shameless!!!! he even talked that with Dadi
Shantanu asked to excuse Khanak's loan but what dadi said is true.
Sunil is mocking Shantanu.
Please Aditee write Shantanu POV at this point reg his fears, baby and Khanak
Eagerly waiting for next update
Dadi understands Khanak so well......... loved each and every point Shantanu and Dadi discussed and she was right each and every time.........it was an excellent conversation........enjoyed it.......really getting worried about the couple!! also loved Sunil's reply.......waiting for the next part!!
ReplyDeletereality check by Dadi and Sunil... waiting to read more...
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