Sunday, September 23, 2012

Part 97-- Inscrutable


Part 97
April 3rd 2011
Golf links

Padmini:  Did your sister call Bhabhi?
Mrud: Actually she was supposed to take the 4 O clock flight, airport pahunchkar uska phone aaya.
Dadi is tucking the flower string around her jooda, Mridula had strung it for her, they had a expansive terrace with multiple jasmine vines all over….
Ruchira: Mom mera mauve purse kahan hai?
Mridula: Ek second hon!
Padmini: I think Anvita has an orange and mauge clutch you should carry hers
Ruchira makes a face waits for her Mom’s response
Padmini is a lil miffed but is careful not to show it…
Dadi: Ruchira not done, apologize to Chachi..
Ruchira: I had AL my stuff picked out already, Rohini took off for the spa, and so many things are missing.
Dadi: Yet another accusation
Mridula is trying to call the airline
Krishan and Pawan are deep in conversation, with some Babu dressed like a nouveau riche, in white trousers and white sandals
Raghav walks in casually
Padmini (in Punjabi) Lo jee dulha aa gaya
Dadi is all smiles
Mridula walks to him while holding the phone to her ear….
Krishan smiles a half smile
The Babu makes a loud obnoxious comment, some people, joke laugh, clap
Raghav rolls his eyes almost… but doesn’t say a word
He needs a shave, and a shower
Mridula: Yaad hai sagai hai?
Raghav: Yes Mom (obedient)
Mridula: Who log chal pade Saket se, they also have some pooja planned, wear something nice
Raghav: Hmmm
Krishan walks over “Did you win?”
Raghav nods casualy
Mridula looks at her husband… wonders what must go through his mind…
Ateendra and Anuttam are chatting with some Golf Link socialites
Raghav’s phone rings…
Raghav:Hey!
Mridula: Who is it?
Raghav: Its Radhika! (firm, but cool, shrugs)
Krishan looks impassive
Raghav: I am home now J
Listens…
Mridula is talking with an agent, Dadi sends something to drink
He grabs a glass and rubes his forehead with the frost………
Listening……….
Raghav: I won both games… groom’s luck I guess (grins)
She chatters
Raghav: No! (soft)
Raghav: Radhika…. Hang on…. Radhika…
Mridula watches him smile and wander…
Raghav: See you in 20?
He hangs up
Ruchira: Bhai, why are you not in your outfit?
Raghav messes her hair fondly…
Ruchira: BHAIIIII…
Dadi: Go get the shower…. I cant believe you are the only one dragging your feet…
Ateendra: Its not shaadi..
Dadi: Funny!
Dadi: Is haal mein who shaadi tak ready hoga
Raghav walks towards the stairs
Krishan: Hey hang on…
Raghav: Ya?
Tucks his hand into his pocket, surveys the room……….. sees many faces he knows, some he has “dated” casually……..
Krishan: DM ka phone aaya tumhare pas?
Raghav: At 11, yes…
Krishan: Who NGO ne stay lene ki baat ki, CM ka secretary aaj sham ko text karke dukhi kar diya..
Raghav is bored…
Krishan: Speak with the agent tomorrow, tum ghar raho to koi baat bhi karey tumse
Mridula: Tchh tchh, Krish… he needs to be ready
Krishan: Oh ! right! The wedding
Raghav looks at his Dad not angry not unnerved just plain indifferent, he understands his Dad subtle taunt… he knows his Dad doesn’t trust his motives
Pawan: Bhayya, shaayad who log Lodi Rd pahunch gaye, we should head out to the Club…
The crowd at home has started to thin, the Club is three blocks down, most have headed there.

Mridula thanks someone on the phone and hangs up
Raghav: So… can I get ready now?
Mridula: Ofcourse beta (amused)
Raghav smiles… walking up the stairs
Krishan: Ek to itna kam bolta hai, pata nahi kya chal raha hai iske dimaag mein
Mridula: Aap ki daughter in law is a freight train (happy)
Krishan Hope she doesn’t run us over (not amused)
Raghav retruns to find Ateendra and Dadi and Pawan Uncle
He is wearing a silk kurta in navy and offwhite churidar, and offwhite jootis his soul patch more pronounced after the shave, with different glasses, Dadi is arranging some arti……….he scans his phone for Radhika’s picture, she is bent over staring at some files at the East of Kailash records office……….
The evening they kissed first………..
His heart skips a beat, as he recalls the scent, the feel of her skin…
“Sshhhh!” he had said asking her to be quiet
“Why?” she had asked innocently
Just as he had captured her lips
Atee: Hey man! Ready?
Nods at the picture “Completely!” he said under his breath…


6 comments:

  1. finally Dulha is here.. and
    krishan talks ab NGO.. waiting to c what happens..

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  2. Superb!!! Raghav is all set to get engaged to his love Radhika:-)

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  3. Shal & Vineeta and the rest:
    OFCOURSE it cant be all rosy!
    Whats the point in making them live happily ever after so early on? :-)
    Koi to twist hona chahiye na? :-)
    The twist will come soon
    May be you al have already predicted it but it will come....
    I have no idea how much he loves her
    Or even if he does....
    He has been a flake thus far

    She is ambitious but she is naive.....

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  4. Hey Aditee, loved reading your POV. twist toh bilkul hona chahiye and i know that your twists are very interesting(the CASA experience can never fade away) but, iss dil ka kya karoon, main kya karoon!!

    loved the 97th part and especially the Raghav part, waiting desperately for their journey together!!

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  5. Hmmmmm..So shaadi ke liye sab tayaar..
    Krishan never misses a chance to taunt Raghav..
    Awaiting the next part..

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