Thursday, September 12, 2013

Part 162


Part 162
Saturday
The Day after Holi… almost Noon
March 3rd 2012

“Its not how we snare rich guys” Khanak muttered…humiliated…
He froze in his tracks, his back was facing her, he turned around ever so slowly… blistering…
He began to approach talking softly almost inaudibly… Khanak felt like she stood in front of a high-speed bullet train….
“We are not talking about you are we Mrs Gujral?” he bit out…
“You could freeze off wild raging volcanoes with one look Ms. Arctic Queen"
“You don’t touch your husband’s money 2 years after marriage” furious.........
She stood pasted to the wall, like one of his huge American pop culture posters framed along the way to the master bath…
He placed his hands on both sides of her head…. She looked at his button…
“We are not talking about YOU are we?”
He repeated, fully angry…
“You clock speeds of Olympic sprinters, when you see a rich guy  approach”
“You lie to yourself about how attracted you are to him” he spit fire on her soft bare neck… she cringed… turning her face away…
“Being alone with the guy bothers you, but being with him in a room full of people agitates you more… SO  this is not about you”his open mouth landed moistly on her shoulder… she immediately brought her hand out to push his face away, he struck it down, captured it behind her back… her multi colored bangles, adorning both hands…matching her beautiful phulkari kurta… snapped and shattered on to the Belgian marble floor………… the grip was firm…his words scathing as it scorched a path over her collar bone…….. reveling in the audible groans of pleasure it invoked in his wife..
“You Mrs Gujral, have the audacity to transfer hundreds of thousands of rupees to your husband’s account a day after the wedding”
“We cant be talking about you,Sonali is a joke (derisive)… you would dress up in a saree and go meet a suitor on Daddy’s insistence completely ignoring your true feelings……… nobody would know your true feelings…… you loathe rich men, Mrs Gujral” his lips closed on hers… hungrily…… her bangles continued to snap and shatter…….
“If I hadn’t accosted you in the hallway that nite, you would have married Nirav Patel” he bit her lower lip…….. crushing her to the wall…….
“You would have taken your lil secret (of being attracted to a wealthy coworker)to the grave” he said bitterly….. continuing to plunder….. her struggle at the back stopped… he gently caressed her hands… as she let herself relax….he began to consider releasing her hands…they stayed that way interminably, drinking from each other……. Like lashing rains after a thunder storm… “She is not you” he said firmly.. reminding her of that cringe worthy behavior all over again

















8 comments:

  1. Wow.....

    Mrs. Gujral is just out of d world !!!! D way he describd !!!! Hayeeeee......

    Just love d passion in shan !!

    Volcano became thunder strom !!

    Loved it !!!

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  2. : O :O :O
    sighhhhhhhh...speechless!
    this was not meant to be emotional but it left me sooo wow!
    to find a replica of him is too hard nw aditee :(
    his passion towards her leaves me wanting for more them :P
    i <3 his u's and y khanak is khanak! thats why khanak is mrs gujral and it shows through his passion towards her :)
    i knw he would never think of khanak like dis but khanak even thinking abt it left him livid its like his saying how can you!!
    ure giving us a awesome and best updates one after another where do u get such good ideas from? i wish casa gets published it deserves every attention :) :P

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  3. Wooow!!! ♥ Loved it sooooo much!!! ♥ ♥ ♥

    Shaan just froze and got more furious hearing Khanak's word!!! Awww..The way he replied to her..Classy and Awesome!!!♥

    Shaan looks so hot even when he is angry!!! Freezing of valcanoes part..Wow!!! Too good!!!♥

    As he said everything all those flashback flooded back..Sigh!!!♥

    Right..Sonali is a joke!!! :x

    I loved how he kept on pointing her as Mrs.Gujral!!!♥

    And the kiss!!! ♥ ♥ ♥

    He knows everything about her..:) And his last sentence, "She is not you" is so true!!!

    Looking forward and thank you for writing a fantabulous update!!!♥ ♥ ♥

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  4. Aditee.........what was this............Shaan's fiery outburst was to die for........he not just passionately loves his wife but respects her too and so he could not take Khanak's "we"........and the way you have written and described........splendid......this one was too good!! also loved 161th part too.......Sonali has crossed all limits.........she was irritating and disgusting but i did not think she was capable of this........Shaan is right......Khanak should do as he says!!

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  5. read both the parts WOWOWOOWWOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
    OMG
    first i was like ab kya hua
    i hate hate hate sonali
    i love shan muuaahh good that he warned khanak and more than that he was angry bcoz she was checking his wife's closet awww i love this fiery shan ye gussa bahut achha laga :)
    khanak is ashamed at the same time defensive what is wrong khanak hubby is right this time yaar

    eekkkkksss part 162 is awesome
    i just love his mrs gujral all the time hayeyeeeee kitne haq se bolta hain it just u know dil me kuch kuch hota hain hayeee
    and the kiss eeksss
    the last line is so true stop thinking like this khanak
    love love love both the parts:)))
    plzz aditee update daily even short updates are fine :)

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  6. I don’t know where to start or even compliment... small conversations can create classic scenes and this is one of them!
    I loved HIS you’s...Mrs Gujral...his hands and him! I thought he walk out on her but he was firm on WHY She is YOU...every word he spoke was his affection devotion whatever you call towards her!

    Even though he was aggressive but there was something too prominent and motionless about this moment...in the beginning both were mystery to each other but it’s like he knew her all along of her strong principles and resolute to wealth!

    SIGH! There is no reason to love this guy more he didn’t let Khanak humiliate herself infront of him and justified HER existence so beautifully...this is one the reasons he was fascinated by her and he expresses in most simple words without any ILY or platitudes!

    No wonder Casa is such a addiction and one of the enjoyment of my life!

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  7. oh..ho.. Shaan is awesome in his replies... Khanak has got her answer of course...

    i wonder how many more bangles he will break.... hahaha

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  8. Wow amazing reply by shaan.......
    Shaan's reaction is outstanding and well described!!
    Yes SHE is different from HER.........
    He made her realize with his words....
    Loved it aditee :))

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