Monday, September 30, 2013

Part 168


8:48 PM
March
Evening after Holi…
“Good luck with his new look” Bhayya laughed….
Her husband had a shadow of a goatee now…. “No” she shook her head vehemently…
“He even had Rishi bring over beard softeners from Dubai..” Akshay laughed uncontrollably….
“Shortest lived beard in history man!” Akshay mocked Shaan…
Shaan grinned smugly at Akshay’s implication (since its impossible for Shaan to go without sex… the beard would have to go)
“Noooo” Khanak gesticulated looking at him…
He rubbed his palm… the rasp echoed….
“You have to be kidding, if you think I am letting you anywhere near me” she flinched, as he approached…..
“Good luck” Akshay laughed again as he left them alone….
Shaan’s phone rang in the other room…. He ran to grab it… Khanak shuddered at the thought of the beard burn…
Nivedita and her boyfriend ahd just left after an early evening snack dinner event… Khanak winded up at the rec room, she wore pearl drawstring capris, and a orange and gold chiffon blouse with a gold cami underneath…. Her hair was tied in a loose ponytail with a ivory clip… (real ivory ofcourse)….
A Gujju friend had suggested a show on Zee Gujarati… she suddenly remembered it… turned the TV on, there were half a dozen remotes on the glass coffee table… she powered the TV on…. It listed atleast two dozen game updates, soccer and American football… and ice hockey……… she didn’t know how to exit out of the menu…. She toggled and struggled…. And tried other remotes….
Her parents were downstairs…. Since it rained a lot late in the afternoon, Dadi brought them back from Bandra…. They were heading out tomorrow… Sonali was gone………. For now….
“Tchh” Khanak expression frustration…
“Hey hold that….” He said as he entered the room…. “What was the score?”
“Season’s over, Super Bowl ended in January” she responded without turning to look at him…
He laughed….
“Shantanu, I need to get out of this thing” “Why do you have to record SO MANY games?”
He didn’t respond… just leaned on a pillar and watched her struggle
“How do you know its me?”
“I know of no one else that’s so obsessed…”
She continued “With work, and with sports”
Shantanu!” she complained…. “And you forget another thing….I might be a tad bit obsessed about”
She knew it the moment the words popped out of his mouth, but her leap was a second too late, he pinned her down on the couch, knocking her breath out….
She laughed first… and then he did…. She forgot Bua’s phone call to Aada and Aada finding out about Sonali…. His heart break… at his niece’s behavior…. Bua’s taunts and challenges…. Bai’s worrying and fuming….
Bua bad mouthing “Punajbis” “how Khanak’s var had shamed the entire family”
She forgot about it all…..
“”My team lost” he said peering at the screen…. Pinning her down tight….
She felt his chin…. “CACTUS” she said aloud….”Eeekks” trying to escape….
He bent down….hungry…
“Its only been a day and  a half she said”
“One day too many” he responded… scoring a path down her cleft….
Her hands pinned up over the plush silk armrest…..
“Stop fighting Khanak”
“Not a chance” she said trembling….
She moaned as his raspy jaw was everywhere…. “I am keeping it” he said…
“ Sure” “I am sleeping with Dadi”: she said…
It was green and bristly… .. it rasped over her chiffon….
“Shaan” called Dad knocking politely on the rec room door… he knew they were alone in there… Akshay had told him… he knew what his son would be upto after a long day at work… tired… and hungry…
Khank clung…. Moving under him slowly…. Smiling like a goddess…
He swore, pushed her blouse and camisole up and kissed her…. Swore again… as she cringed under the force…
“A minute Dad” he responded…
Pulling his tee down… as she coiled into a shy knot….
He exited out of all the sporting updates and set the guide to “Gujarati faves” and went to the balcony with his phone….”I think I will keep it” he said again rubbing his jaw…… as she searched for her ivory clip….













8 comments:

  1. Oye hoye... CACTUS over SILK ;)

    hottie got a gottie....lol... Khanak warnd alrdy... Will shan still hv it ??

    Sonali n Bua... Grrrrrr....charity from khanak is welcome bt sense not !!

    Hz dad is thr... So agn money issue coming it seems....

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  2. omgggg!! that was soooo steamyy :P
    he is just sooo good and keeps her very happy his own way :))
    me sure he be looking handsome in his goatee i want him to keep it :P
    hahahaha khanak reaction wen his dad called i bet she did on purpose as she knws he'll had to go :D
    i wonder what did sonu ki bacchi actually her mum aada needs to shut his sister for once n i see khanak will side shantanu she wont tolerate anyone bad mothing him :))
    he'll be in joy to see that!
    amogh kahan hai!! i <3 the threesome together itssss soooo cuteee!!
    sunil might be coming to talk abt the deal or ulwe not sure but liking bth of them so cheery for nw
    thans so muchhh aditee it was a fabulous

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  3. it was steamy and hot
    hayeee love it
    her frustration and his hunger *blush * ;)
    sonali and bua aarrgghh
    shan ko abhi kuch pata nahi
    when he ll get to know about it
    plzzz aditee i want to see him to slap sonali argghh
    love akshay's teasings ;)
    dad ne bulaya and woh balcony me gaya hehehehee
    update soon aditee :)

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  4. Wow!!! Loved it so much!!! ♥ Shaan having a goatee..And Akshay is wishing Khanak!!! LOL..:D

    Awww..Akshay left them alone as Shaan approached his wife Khanak!!! Very understanding bro..;)

    Shaan ran to fetch his favorite thing..His phone!!! Khanak must looking stunning like always in those attire!!! ♥

    He watches so many sports..And he manages his time so well!!! Her parents are back..And Sonali is gone..Glad!!!

    Wow..She knows the Superbowl season is over..Learned many things from her hubby it seems..:)

    Shaan is obsessed with work, sports and with you Khanak the most!!! ;) ♥♥♥ And he caught and pinned her down..♥

    So her Aada finally got to know about Sonali..Bua is taunting and complaining about Punjabi's and Shaan..:x she should ve knocked some sense in Sonali and be ashamed of her!!! How did Khanak tolerated all these? Did she say anything or not?

    Awww!!! His team lost!!! CACTUS!!! Awww..

    He gonna keep the goatee!!! Really Shaan? ;) His dad knows about Shaan too well..Is he gonna discuss about signing of mining papers in Peru?

    Khanak is happy she escaped but Shaan got what he needed!!! ♥ *blush*

    After that he kept her fav channel..Cute!!! :) So he decided to keep it..For how long? ;)

    Looking forward and thank you for writing a romantic and fabulous update!!! ♥

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  5. that was awesome Aditee..........kyun khatam kiya.............you are a magician.......just a goatee and you come up with such a romantic update!! and Khanak getting naughty when Shaan's dad called was lovely........his family knows him very well!! looking forward for the next part!!

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  6. Btw Nivs still didnt get married ah?

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  7. Cactus?? that was an awesome one.. Bua talks ill about Shaan & Punjabis... hope Shaan gets to know this and thrashes her.. how dare she?? as though her daughter is innocent.. pls Khanak... dont handle this yourself.. ur CACTUS needs to know...

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  8. Loved both the updates aditee!! :)
    Sorry for being late..
    Finally Sonali is out..Aada should not care about bua's taunts..i know that's not happening..:p
    Loved the last update also aditee..their fight! Their pastime! :D
    He will make her sign!
    This one..beard burn!! too hot to handle!! :D:P
    He's growing his beard..we'll see if Khanak allows it or not;)
    Missed casa so much aditee..:)
    Continue soon:)

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