Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Part 165


March 3rd
1 PM
Saturday
Day after Holi…
“Arey mother and daughter quiet?”
Bai looked at Khanak ashamed… Khanak hinted that Dadi does not know…
Bai looked relieved…
But not for too long, as Sonali came storming into the room, sobbing.. Khanak and Bai’s face paled instantly
Dadi enquired in shock…
Bai, started to scold her in rough Gujarati, words that were reserved for Sonali’s childhood…
Khanak continued to fold laundry, expressionless… something told her this was going to become a big issue… she wondered if she had to pull in Aada for some advice…
Sonali in between sobbing”I am going back to college Mami” she wailed…
Bai kept shushing her
Dadi:WHAT happened beta? Kahin chot lagi kya?
Sonali looked at Khanak accusingly and in a drama queen voice said “Haan Dadi bahut badi chot”
Dadi looked at Khanak
D:Where puttar, I thought HL was done mending that balcony rail? (she asked in Punjabi)
Khanak responded in Hindi “Jee Dadi, balcony theek hai”
It irritated Sonali that Dadi would speak to her in Punjabi, it indicated a special kind of intimacy that she DID not share… it bothered her that Punjabi would not be a language she would ever get comfy with… like Khanak Dee
Bai:Shut up right now, Sonu…
Sonali started to pull her clothes out of the folded pile…
Sonali:I am leaving
Bai: Shhh… stop it!
Dadi:HUA KYA?
Khanak:Who Dadi… it might be me… (squirming)
Dadi:What did you do puttar?
Bai rushed to shut the door… and as soon as she did, put her own daughter out of misery by quickly blurting “Sonali was in Shaan’s almari (closet) and her var told Sonu, she shud be downstairs”
Dadi looked mighty confused…
Sonali:HE DID NOT SAY ANY SUCH THING!
Khanak:Sonu… stop! (finger on her lips)
Sonu:Its you dee… you want me out of here… I make you insecure..
Dadi:Sonali… stop it beta…
It suddenly struck Dadi… she understood…
Sonali: She never invites me here… never shares…
Dadi:ISKE bare mein to aisa mat keh puttar… she is putting you through college..
Sonali:I know Mummy says “its charity”! (disdainful)
Bai sat there cringing… as the Mistry dirty linen was being washed in public…
Khanak’s quiet dignified quality came from both her parents… they hadn’t flinched once… even during Khanak’s widowhood… but this twit of a girl was dragging the family through dirt…
Dadi: Beta I need you to stop and listen to me… wipe your tears first…
Dadi sat by Sonali…
Sonali loved the attention… for a brief moment she felt like she was Khanak and everything was hers…
“Dadiiii” she started to sob and hug the old woman…
Khanak made eye signals with Bai to leave the room.. Bai looked horrified…
Khanak:I told her, she shouldn’t be in his closet when he is changing.. (firm but almost inaudible)
Dadi smiled at her with pride…
Khanak blushed gently
The girl was still moping on Dadi’s shoulder…
“He is extremely nice to me. Khanak Dee hates that” she said particularly in Gujarati… so Bai would understand it…
Dadi did too…
Dadi:He is her husband beta…
Dadi was treading carefully.. she realized the girl was infatuated with her grandson…
She also realized her grandson must have rejected Sonali’s advances…
Sonali: Dee acts like he is her property or something, she doesn’t let him talk or be with any one else even for s econd… (lying)
Dadi soothed her with “Shhhhh”
There was a knock on the door…
Bai almost had a heart attack………..
Khanak:I am sorry Dadi…
Dadi: Quit apologizing… that’s why they call it a family…
Sonali:I am never coming back… I texted Jeeju and told him that…
Khanak was startled yet again…
Another knock Aada “Should we have lunch now?” he enquired outside…
Bai: Khanak’s Aada (as if Dadi suddenly did not know who it is)
Dadi smiled at Bai’s discomfiture…
Sonali:I am leaving Dadi…
Dadi:Not a problem beta… I will arrange for a car…
Sonali: Beech mein mujhe Linking Rd mein shopping karna hai (hissy)
Khanak: She can take a local Dadi…
Sonali:I have an injured toe from yesterday, at the terrace… Jeeju ne mujh par color lagaya to main gir gayi (smug)
Dadi gently sat her separately…”You should go shop and have fun… Ujju ko bhi bhejoon?”
The girl’s face lit up… she gave Khanak a arrogant smug smile…
Bai:She has all she needs.. her Lab fee is due next month.. we are going to go see Kaka.. Khanak is already overloaded… Dadi’s hip surgery.. (Bai ranted… pained and worried, she looked like she would cry if Dadi wasn’t around)
Bai was feeling a strange fear… that some how Sonali would convince Dadi and Dadi would buy her melodramatic story, and Khanak would be thrown out of the Gujral house……..
Khanak took the laundry to Bai’s suitcases….
Dadi: Beta go get my purse, or bring Rs.25,000 from the safe in my room (confident,  cheerful, reminding Khanak that she was a Gujral)





11 comments:

  1. Grrrrrrr... Sonali shud send out of mumbai fr next 10 yrs !!!!!

    Glad ds time khanak is confedently living Mrs. Shantanu Gujral ...

    Dadi is so undrstanding....

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  2. Ufff!! I nevrr been so angry at anyone as much as sonu she is selfish insecure and idiot
    Did sonali just lie without feeling bad?
    Shows ki kitni selfish hai jaisi ma waisi beti
    she is insecure becoz her khanak didi is happy
    glad dadi stood up for khanak n no on convinced her to stay like she wanted
    now khanak should leave this sonu ki bacchi on her own
    I want shaan to tell her clearly the clear off she is out of the league
    nw bua will be on her case I want aada or dadi to stand up for khanak!

    thanks aditeee so much for the update

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  3. Ufff!! I nevrr been so angry at anyone as much as sonu she is selfish insecure and idiot
    Did sonali just lie without feeling bad?
    Shows ki kitni selfish hai jaisi ma waisi beti
    she is insecure becoz her khanak didi is happy
    glad dadi stood up for khanak n no on convinced her to stay like she wanted
    now khanak should leave this sonu ki bacchi on her own
    I want shaan to tell her clearly the clear off she is out of the league
    nw bua will be on her case I want aada or dadi to stand up for khanak!

    thanks aditeee so much for the update

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  4. OMG!!!
    i hate this girl hushhhhhhh which sensible would do like that infront of SO BIG family GUJRALS manners naam ki cheej hain isme
    jaise ma waise beti
    love how khanak was confident and woh moledrama nahi kar rahi thi she handled it very confedently and quietly
    oh no dadi ko bhi lata chal gaya ke she is infatuated
    love how dadi supported khanak aww she is so sweet :)
    text karne se kya hoga i think woh sapno me hain she think he cares msg padhke khush hua hoga
    i think uska dose use sahi se mile toh better hain
    shan himself kuch bura bolna chahiye to sonali tab samaj me aayega plzz aditee plzzz ye kardo i ll be very happy :)
    and dadi ll give her money for her shopping this is the limit i m telling u i m very very angry
    plzzz update soon

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  5. OMG!!! This Sonali is such a big drama queen..Dadi is a rockstar!!! I guess she also understood she only cares for money!!! But still Sonali doesn't deserve the money of Gujrals.

    I don't know how Khanak is tolerating Sonali..o.O She is unbearable!!! She started her drama..Acts very well..Khanak wants Aada advice..What will he tell??? Dadi is clueless of the entire act..

    God..She is so jealous of her own cousin..Even Mahi won't be jealous like her!!! She might learn Punjabi to impress Shaan..But he wont of course!!! Why Khanak is pointing herself for Sonali's drama??? Ugh!!! :x

    Awww..Khanak's Bai blurted..Sonali making Khanak insecure..ROFL..:D Good joke!!!

    Finally Dadi understood..Is Sonali understanding that she bringing her family look so bad in front of Dadi??? Don't think so..And even if does..She doesn't care..

    Everything was hers..Rofl..D She is way thinking too much..Shaan was behaving nice to her..He should ve scolded and snapped her..God..Why ShaNak are good to such peoples??? They should show her place!!!

    Of course..Shaan belongs to Khanak alone..♥♥♥

    She even messaged Shaan..Ugh!!

    Good..Decision Sonali..Don't ever come back to Khanak's home..She wants to go to shopping..God!!! I don't know how she is the cousin of Khanak..o.O Mehul and Methali are how good!!!

    Poor Bai..She is worried for her daughter..Natural!!!

    Finally Dadi able to shut Sonali with money!!!

    Don't know how will Shaan react to this whole drama if he comes to know of it..

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update!!! ♥

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  6. This is what Khanak is getting by providing her extended family their needs hence she gets the taunts and the arrogant behaviour from her own cousin!!
    After this if I was khanak I wouldn't have given Sonali time of the day!
    UGHHH!! I know alot of people 'like' Sonali!
    I for once agree Shantanu is right about her being the 'saviour' for her family!
    I WANT dadi to tell him about Sonali apparent and false allegations!!
    Ugh. I cant digest this girl! Aditee...get rid of her
    Now Dadi knows about Sonu...I think its time she puts some sense into Khanak about helping her family to what extent
    Thank you Aditee

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    1. i also want dadi to tell shan about this idiot sonali
      all false allegations
      he ll be so mad i wanted shan to snap her face to face even better slap her
      plzz aditee ye khwaish puri kardo
      jabse sonali aayi hain i hv only one wish
      and khanak should stop helping sonali aada and bai ko kar sakti hain but not sonali arrggh!!!
      update soon

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  7. Dadi is understanding but she shouldn't encourage Sonali with her melodrama. It should be cut down n she must be shown the door..
    haan.. shaan is Khanak's property.. tum kaun ho beech mein aanewali..
    looks like shaan must also say it to her clearly..
    awaiting next update..

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  8. Sonali needs a stern scolding from her jeeju........she is disgusting.........if only Khanak could get rid of her selfish relatives!! but then she has Shaan in her life and such a wonderful daadi-saas and a lovely sasural!!

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  9. i dont like Dadi engouraging Sonali.. that chit of a girl.. pls dont let her do it Adi....

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  10. This Sonali is something else!! Now! I hate her to the core!!
    I want Shaan to tell Sonali to back off!! On her face!!
    Lovely update aditee!!:)
    Dadi always reminds Khanak that she is a gujral!! :D
    Dadi is just too awesome!! :D
    Waiting for your next update..:)

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