Just tonite” he said softly to his wife, as Vithal left
excitedly… Vaishali went in to bring water for them…she saw her husband already
had a half empty one, under his chair..”I brought my water” he said…
“You should have brought your food too” she said
uncompromisingly
Vithal returned with Pai, who was beaming…
“The owners want to sell… aap log le lo” he told Shaan
confidently…
“Ritu jab aayegi Mumbai, dono friends idhar reh sakte hain”
he sounded like he had some personal stake in such a situation…
The baby whined…. Khanak cooed… “I haven’t thought about it”
Shaan smiled…
“I have “ said his wife in a whisper…
“I bet you have” he said, as Pai and Vithal talked about the
existing owners in Marathi…
He gently extended his arm, letting his fingers touch his
wife’s bangles….the baby smacked the male hand with a drooly hand…
“I want to buy it” she muttered…
“I don’t think so” he said coolly…
They set a stage for a long night of electric, contentious,
semi erotic verbal sparring…
Vaishali came back and knew before her husband told her,
Ritwik jumped up and down with joy “Mousi… Mousi, Mousi” he squealed…
She laughed… happy… it pissed him off to see her belong like
that…
“Vaishali brought out clean set of sheets and and her best
pillows…
Vithal asked about arranging “new beds”
“Uncle theek hai” Khanak admonished…
Her husband was on the phone, her loaner baby was gone… she
was itching for a fight… he appeared like he was more than ready…
Twilight merged with night outside…. She felt all warm and
fuzzy on the inside… Chembur did that to her…
The place where she found her bearing, the place where she
began her new life… her best friend in the whole wide world beside her…
The scent of cologne broke her fantasy…”Dinner?” he asked
putting the phone on hold…
“Nahi” she said bluntly…
He chuckled as he said into the phone “ She says no”
‘None for ME, I mean” she said smiling sugary sweet….”You shouldn’t
decline, I bet the person would be heart broken”she jabbed..
Pai and Vithal went off looking for beds and such…
Vaishali was nursing the baby inside…
He reached for her and pulled a green gold thread off her
nude waist… the new saree was shedding like crazy… the ends untrimmed…
He pulled it off, she reached for it, he pretended to hand
it to her as he captured her fingers… still on the call..
“Not a chance” she said huskily letting him clutch her
fingers…firm manly hand held soft slender one….he felt her rings…
He talked and talked…”she pulled on her hand wanting to go
inside…
That’s sounds like a catastrophe, may be you should go to
Ulwe” she poked with totally mock concern…her eyes wide…face flushed trying to
free her hand…
“Khanak quit riling me” he said, muting the phone…
“Mera haath chhodiye” she admonished… irritated…
He held her trapped hand, and felt the saree border…”Oh
Basil has talked to the guy 18 times… its no use, we’ll just let Rahat handle
that”
“Me?” he said..
“I am at my wife’s friend’s””I always offer to give her a
ride home”
“Only because you want to get laid at night” she could hear
Nachiket’s loud taunt…
“Whatever that may be for” her husband laughed out loud…
She yanked her hand… smiled sweetly…”Not happening tonite
sweetheart”his eyes on her lips as the word sweetheart formed on it his mind reeling under shock… reminding him of the various times she used endearment to coax him in bed…she continued boldly arms wrapped across her chest “or any other nite….Since
I am not supposed to get pregnant, its dangerous to make love”as
she turned around and walked away…
“Damn!” he swore.. his mind racing trying to figure out a
devious way to get his way…
Wow!!! Loved it!!! ♥ ShaNak are just amazing!!! Eeeks..He gonna stay there..Great! Shaan brought water..Well..Its usual..And Khanak is taunting him for that..I remember their 1st encounter there when she asked if he wants water..Awww..Memories!!!
ReplyDeleteThey want them to buy the flat..She so want to get it..But given loan can she afford it..She has high self esteem..Will she allow to buy it with his money in her name?
Of course she belongs there..She lived there was so long..Finally he got to get hold her hands..;)
Awww..She called him sweetheart..♥ Lovely!!! And his damn too sounds amazing!!!
Loved the pink and blue lines!!! ♥
Looking forward and thanks for writing an amazing update!!! ♥♥♥
eeeeeeks! loved it sooo much aditee :))
ReplyDeletehe is staying for his own benefit lol! i enjoyed khanaks lines lol! she is gonna take full advantage of chembur stay :P :P
hayyye the hand holding and his anger towards the love she gets frm chembur lol! he just wants her to himself only n his family :P
your super amazing in writing aditee i loved khanaks smart pink line lol! i hope she wins dis battle this time n shaan is gonna die if he wont able to touch her for any day :P
update soon aditee...i cant wait for the nxt one :D
awww love the pink and blue lines iisshh
ReplyDeleteyes after so much hard work khanak exactly said what i want to hear so desperately heheheeee ”Not happening tonite sweetheart or any other nite….Since I am not supposed to get pregnant, its dangerous to make love” ;)
lets c how shan will handle this bahut ho gaya now its shan's turn to get torture ;)
and his damn is so sexy
yayyaaa waiting for next :)
Damn! His such a maddening person but in a sexy way! I have those days of overwhelming love for him :P
ReplyDeleteI love the way their actions reflect their love and no words! You are so brilliant at it!
The first encounter to a night in Chembur! I knew she could make him do anything...
Khanaks wit! She is bang on! He should have brought his own bed too :P
I
s he going to buy it for her? I m not sure, he is very uncomfortable with Chembur!
Loved his hand gestures! ALWAYS will. There is something adorable about that...sense of security and binding her by him.
Yes! I love the smart and sassy Khanak. She should him a tough time and play hard! She knows he only will do WHAT he likes or wants...Chembur stay was for his own benefit :P
Thanks Aditee! Update soon :)
thank you so much aditi....the hand holding has been beautifully written.......got the buttefly feeling by reading it only......khanak wants to buy the apartment and he will I think after tonight......she'll will have a place to stay when bth argue....the blue and pink lines were clever especially from khanak....let her torture him more aditi will love to watch the banter in chembur.....update soon aditi :-)
ReplyDeleteloving this Chembur Khanak... perfect reply to Shaan...
ReplyDeleteAditee excellent update
ReplyDeleteWow Shantanu accepted to stay at chembur for his own benefit.
Khanak wanted to buy that apartment. May be shantanu will buy with his money?
Shantanu didn't like seeing Khanak behaving as she belongs there
Loved Shantanu's hand gestures always. Holding her hand ......it shows his sense of belonging.........I loved it.
AND Pink and Blue lines they are splendid
Aww Khanak called him sweetheart and Shantanu's Damn! is so amamzing
Waiting for next update
Thanks Aditee awesome update i am loving their Chembur stay! Their night has just began! Super cool pink and blue lines! Will he get her this house though he doesn't want to just for her sake ? I hope she gets her fav apartment! Eagerly waiting for next!
ReplyDeleteLove u loads <3 <3
amazing update Aditee.........seriously loving Shaan's Chembur visit..........its like Khanak manegi nahi and Shaan chodega nahi...........and those were splendid pink and blue lines!! the part where both of them are alone in the room was lovely.........the hand holding was awesome!!
ReplyDeleteupdate soon aditee dieing to read more :P
ReplyDeleteHey aditee awesome updates!! :D
ReplyDeleteWhen he told he never want to have a child , felt bad for her but then his possessive declaration made my heart race like khanak's would have if she knew that:p
According to "not wanting to have a baby" he apparently won't be getting any :p loved her pink line:D
Thats very much impossible!! :p :D
Thanks aditee for updating:)
Continue soon :)