Friday, June 6, 2014
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She vaguely remembered some of her clothes coming off.... she begged him to undo her tie multiple times... since he was not talking he didnt respond....
the crushed pink tissue lay half hanging from the bed........ as it swayed every time the split air conditioner's vent lifted its wings...
He was fully clothed....and when he finally relented and loosened the grip of the tie... she turned away...unenthusiastic....they rolled on the bed... back and forth as she tried to free herself and he tried to hold her....
She lay there soaked in passion... trembling... gritting her teeth in an attempt to hold back her screams of thrill....bruised and sore....her arms going up to circle his neck... she clutched the longish silky mane.... purring with satisfaction at the length.......
His belt was gone... his shirt half undone...
He carried the scent of some cologne and HIM... the scent that sent her heart racing when she happened to enter the elevator at Ajmera Corp office... she wud be in some far corner, he would stare shamelessly... they would have fought and and wouldnt be talking... his phone would beep or ring, or Nivedita or Nachiket would be arguing heatedly..... about delays or extensions...
He would just hold her gaze until they reached the floor where the meeting was... she would wait for him to get off first, he would wait for HER....
"Shaantanu" she would murmur after all would exit... "I dont want to fight" she would hiss
He would lean back arms across his chest the elevator would close up again and slide down or up... they would inadvertently creep closer to each other and just glare...
He would angrily punch the key back again and it would slide up to the said floor
They would get off... she would walk in the opp direction taking the windy way to the conference room, her female friends would compliment her kalamkari kurta or her chunky jhumkas... she would feel it gently...
He would hold the conf room door open until she entered........ their arms would graze by the door......the craving to touch would become intolerable......she had never felt raw hunger for any man before......
His phone rang...bringing her back to the delicious torment he was inflicting now...
He bit her ear lobe hard.... and waited for it to stop........... and then abruptly slid off and grabbed it on its last ring....
"Gujral" he barked, saying the first words in an hour
As their eyes met
"Yep I can talk" he said cruelly... listening carefully
She lay there stunned.......
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Awesome mindblowing their passion, craving and love is always so hot loved the update <3 <3
ReplyDeleteHe didn't talk at all in one hour just making up poor Khanak stunned he took the call and decided to leave & answer the call he can talk the line made Khanak feel stunned!
Brilliant writing :-)
I hope she asks sorry for leaving him
Will love to read an weekend update
Thanks a lot!
Love u always <3 <3
He broke his first night promise :(
ReplyDeleteAs much as I love them, he shouldn't have. Hoping after this Khanak let's him be of what he wants for a while
Loving the flashback! The charge and attraction is still strong and fierce as the first glint of it...hoping they find their way back!
Update sooon! Loving it totally!!
so he broke his promise.. this should tell Khanak what he is going to be... loved it..
ReplyDeleteWow!!! ♥ Loved it!!! ♥ Freaking Hot!!! ♥
ReplyDeleteShaan finally removed his tie from Khanak's hand..:P
Loved the glimpes from past..Awww..The way ShaNak stare its cute..They always fight & argue..It brings them more closer..;)
God..And there came the phone..He chose it over her..:O
So he did resist her after all..:/
Poor Khanak..Her reaction is so apt..Stunned indeed like us..
Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update!!! ♥
oh my gosh :((
ReplyDeleteHe rejected her clearly lol! didn't expect dat after a hot make out lol!
khanak is going to be more heart broken nw :((
awww the fb was the most amazing part lol!! loved their chemistry even then me wondering if they can talk abt these special fb too :))
thanks much aditee loved it so muchh :)))
Aditee awesome update
ReplyDeleteSo Shantanu did resist Khanak
Shantanu broken the promise and choose phone over Khanak making her stunned
Loved their flashback
Waiting for next update
WOW HEATED ;)
ReplyDeletevery hot, passionate love ;)
it was full of romance :)
the elevator story HOT too never thought of an elevator to be such romantic lolzzzz ;)
awwww he choosed phone HOW can he ?
he resist to leave khanak but end me left her and picked the phone :(
now khanak will be very angry tumhara second chance gaya Shan tuch tuch tuch
i want to see role reversal of SHanak aditee
what happens when Khanak becums Shan so much into work, phone romance LIKE THIS ko chod ke phone choose karna
HOW shan will feel hmmm interesting maybe tab Shan ko feel ho why khanak wants a baby how she feels hai na ? :)
LOVE IT update soon :)))
I felt he was mean :(
ReplyDeleteAwesome update aditee:))
Their heated encounter from the elevator was thrilling..I wish they could back to their pursuit..atleast he gave her some time..she would feel special..
Now khanak will be back as fireworks..prad is going to be there..everything will fall back to the square one..:p
Thank you so much for the update aditee :)
Continue soon :))
Awesome updates Aditee..........loved their passionate encounter.........both "spite" and "......" was super hot and their elevator interaction from the past was amazing........Shaan must be really hurt because of his wife's disappearing act and hence such actions..........was just wondering will they ever come to an understanding........the couple may have been fighting in the past but they never stopped caring for each other..........hope that continues..........superb writing Aditee.......very interesting!!
ReplyDeleteUpdate soon!!!
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