"And so you can run away" he said impassively, from the tone, a person would think he did not really care if she did, his eyes told her how angry he was...
She averted her gaze from being trapped by his....
Dadi's voice broke the flow of fire between the eyes...
Dadi:Yahan ho beta?
Khanak smiled...
Dadi:Did u throw up a lot?
Khanak: Umm... only three... 4 I think
Dadi:Lets go get something to eat
Shaan watched as his Dadi acted like he wasnt even there... it ticked him off
Shaan:And I would like bacon and eggs please! Thanks
Dadi:Aaj Satyanarayn Pooja hai, her parents are in town, please beta
Shaan didnt care " Dadi I have a meeting at 9 and then the whole trucker strike thing at Ulwe" he narrated his agenda...
Dadi:Has she ever told you how tired she is if your work crisis
Shaan:In fact she was just telling me (mocking)
Dadi:Aaj pooja mein nahi aaya to tujhe ghar bhej deti hoon
Khanak's heart skipped a beat, she didnt want to know his reaction...
Dadi:Tum dono aao neeche for breakfast... eggs is all I can do today, no bacon... you married a devout Gujarati and havent changed one bit
Shaan rolled his eyes
Dadi:Aur tu? Teri koi expectations nahi hai is se?
Khanak:Mmm...mmm (sadly)
Shaan gave her a "Do you really want a debate now?" look
Khanak gave a "I am just letting Dadi know nothing has changed" look back at him
Dadi walked away muttering...
"When you pay me back what you owe, you can leave Khanak" he said recklessly
"THAT should be a problem at all" Khanak said bravely
He stalked her until she leaned on the guest bedroom wall, soft tendrils escaping from her pony tail teasing her cheeks
"She would never accept defeat, battered, and bruised, she would continue to give him a fight" he realized as he looked down...
"As long as it would mean I can have my freedom when I pay you back"
"Is that a roundaabout way of telling me you will be gone?" he asked, both chatting as if they were discussing politics or the weather....
"A reluctant father is not the best thing for my child" she said her voice cracking with emotion, the child was equally his..as it was hers.. but the way she claimed the unborn pea sized thing made him extremely jealous
"A runaway wife is not the best thing for a marriage" he spat back
His hands placed firmly on both sides of her head...
the blue and pink lines were awesome.. hope they find a middle path soon..
ReplyDeleteshe wont chose him over the child and he wont chose the anyone of them.........his roundabout way of telling her he like this marriage to continue whatever the circumstances............craving for more and more.......thanks aditi :-)
ReplyDeleteLoved it!!! ♥ Shaan needs to care..Like how Dadi is concerned abt throwing up..She ignored him..lolzzz
ReplyDeleteGosh..His work and his complaints..She never does tht..Ramblings of her work..
Oh..ho..Fight s getting intense..Pay back? Is the money or baby?
He is jealous of his own baby..Shaan wont be reluctant dad..Run away bride..ah..Its coz of you Shaan..Did you ever thought abt in tht way?
Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update!!! ♥
blue and pink lines are right confused to choose sides khanak or shan hehehehee
ReplyDeletebut its always difficult bcoz its Shanak ;)
shan is jealous bcoz mother of HIS child is claiming their unborn baby awwww this is called HEIGHT of jealousy lolzzz
what she owes to him ?
i want shan to stop khanak frm going
plz update soon
Oh god! I love the most when they mix their fight with flirting;) I hope they r heading towards it..:p
ReplyDeleteHe's so jealous right now..he dont even like even dadi cares about her more :p
I meant for the baby..
Loved the pink and blue lines..:)
She's possessive abt her child and he's abt her! :)
Loved it a lot aditee..:)
Thank you so much aditee..continue soon :))
Finally missed my fav story! Loved how smoothly you got them talking. I wanted this badly :)
ReplyDeleteI want to read the continue part of this discussion...atleast they are getting somewhere!
I might sound cruel BUT the best thing for the child and marriage is for both of them to avoid being at war all the time, if they cannot find a nesting space its better to let each other go then...Shantanu wont be willing to let go, he is way to possessive about her and she is not able to see past the child....He was right she will choose the child over him and its already happening....Both need to find the balance or for the best separate?
LOVING it Aditee...Hoping to read the next one soon :)
yipiii they are talkign aditee! thnks just continue kare yeh dono :))
ReplyDeleteawwwie i loved dadi's concern and shaans jealousy he is being jealous that much whch is nt too good :((
loved khanak saying the truth and also him blue n pink r true lines just wanna see how they will get along now wen bth want different things :((
update plz plz plz soon be waiting :))))
Blue & pink lines perfect and bang on always!! They r talking loved it hope they talk more..
ReplyDeleteLove it Aditee
Eagerly waiting for next part!
Thanks love u <3 <3
Update soon!!!
ReplyDeletesuperb pink and blue lines...........loving their conversation.........don't want them to avoid each other...........they should be talking even if it is to fight!!
ReplyDeleteShaan is jealous of Khanak for staking claim over the child and here Khanak thought he would be jealous of the child.....In any case as selfish as he is he wont let either of his things go away....he wants both the marriage and the child...his relationship as a father and the husband but not between the mother and child as that would deviate attention. .. superb lines
ReplyDeleteAditee,
ReplyDeleteFinally caught up with the FF, loving this phase of the story. Can't wait to read more.
Loved the update
ReplyDeleteBlue and Pink lines are excellent
Loved how dadi concerned about Khanak's throwing up and ignored Shantanu and his complaints about his work
Shantanu is jealous when Khanak claimed their baby as only hers and he was jealous of his own baby and its height
Waiting for next update
Update aditee please..:)
ReplyDeleteplz update soon
ReplyDeleteMiss Casa ! Update soon.
ReplyDeletehope all is well for you.
loved the update, thanks for lovely updates Aditee!
ReplyDeleteWhy no update??? Missing Casa..
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