Tuesday, November 19, 2013

Part 188


“HOW DARE YOU?” she asked totally hurt, trembling….
“He held both her wrists on the rail….
“Very easily Mrs Gujral” he bit her lobe… if he intended to hurt he didn’t show it..
“He is KIND and funny, and he spends time with ME” she said accusing…
 Was still, he topped his nuzzling…. His phone rang again….
“First it was Casa di Sogni, now its Buena Suerte, next…” she ranted agitated…
“U come and go as you please” “I live like a single person”
He was still on her neck…
“Pradyun respects you, you hate him” she was deeply hurt…
Her wrists struggled under his grip…
“He is a dork”
“He cares” Khanak wailed…
“He only has ONE thing in mind” he responded… “I don’t want you hanging out with him”…
“This is not the 11th century” she argued, as he plastered her to the balcony…
“YOU have the same thing in mind… squirming against his arousal”
“Yes I do” he said gruffly…. Her neck was moist…
“I hate the goatee” she said…
“Then I can keep it?’ he asked mockingly…
“Exactly!” she said turning her face away, giving him access to her ear….
She wore some fake ring like things…
“What the hell happened to all your jewelry?”
“I sold it to help my boy friend run away” she said…
“Looks like he came back” Shaan taunted…
She made a low guttural sound, as he freed one of her hands, using his hand to delve under her tee…
“I hate the goatee and I hate Mahi… I don’t w know how many bases you scored” she shrieked…
He stopped and stared at her startled… “Whhat”
“THIRD BASE… Remember?” Khanak asked deeply hurt…
It reminded her of Sooraj, how it pissed him off, any mention of intimacy with Sooraj made him ballistic…. But Sooraj did exist in her past, just like Mahi did… in the present…
“Are you mentally not married anymore?” he asked rubbing her ring finger…








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  1. chandu8881November 19, 2013 at 7:43 AM

    I was waiting for one..Thanks Aditee!!:))))
    Poor Khanak, she's too much hurt..He does feel guilty but he never corrects himself..
    Last time when she accused him, when they were separated, he had changed the topic, now also the same..
    Her quick wit!!! Kudos to you Aditee!! :D
    He loves it a lot when he sees her in mangalsootr and engagement ring..I love that a lot!! :D
    Thanks to Prad actually, if not for him, Shaan wouldn't stay at home on a Sunday:p
    She still has that doubt about him going Third Base with mahi..Why doesn't Shaan answer that?!
    I love the last part..her past is dead and his past is present..
    The last question..ha ha ha!! Would love to hear what Khanak would respond..;)
    Loved it a lot Aditee..But bahut chota tha...please next one extra longer....please..:))
    Thank you so much Aditee! Continue soon:))))))

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  2. monika aaryaNovember 19, 2013 at 8:06 AM

    Finally she too vent it out..... How much Mahi hurts her...

    Hz bothrd abt Pradyun !!!

    Both r hurt, angry still hungry fr each othr...

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  3. UnknownNovember 19, 2013 at 8:21 AM

    ayeee!! your shortest updates leave us wantin for more :(
    updatee sooon plzzzz! i want to see where dis fights lead them :P
    i wish he actually spoke to her abt her workholic lifestyle maybe he feels bad abt it lol thats why he didnt but bth always fail to talk abt the issues that bth always fighting over n their fights turn into something hot :P not that me complaining :D
    loved khanak 'hate' for mahi and his concern of why she is not wearing her rings lol! mujhe bas abh yeh chaiya ke both of dem start atleast acknowledging dis wedding is for keeps and the fights are a habit :D :D
    update plzzz sooon aditee :)

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  4. jalisNovember 19, 2013 at 8:33 AM

    ur shortest updates :( but we love it
    i m glad finally she said she hate mahi
    but i dont like how everytime he changes topic why he didnt answer to her question ?
    angry kisi aur baat par fight kisi aur par and settlement kisi aur par ;) not that i m complaining
    but this has to stop he should asnwer and not change the topic i think khanak should do something for this hehehehhehe

    update soon :)))

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  5. vineeta2108November 19, 2013 at 8:56 AM

    Short but powerpacked update that was.........both of them expressing themselves and telling what is disturbing them..........they want each other like crazy but will never say it!! Aditeee........as always we want more.........please update soon!! want to know Khanak's reply to Shaan's question desperately!! they should reassure each other in their own style...........actually Aditee style!!

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  6. pooNovember 19, 2013 at 8:57 AM

    Loved it!!! ♥ Khanak's main problem is Shaan not spending time with her..If they ve a kid she will be busy with them..Hope its twins..:) Pradyun always around Khanak when he is in Mumbai..Shaan knows what he wants..

    She loves the goatee..He must ve known it too..She acting like single removing her marriage symbol jewels..lol..:D Serves good for him..:P Her wits are damn good..

    Did Shaan really went till third base? I thought he only kissed all his previous GF..Khanak wants ans but he is playing with her..

    Sooraj is past just like Mahi but she is facing her now..Whereas Shaan is lucky he is not facing Sooraj..

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update!!!♥ ♥ ♥

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  7. UnknownNovember 19, 2013 at 9:21 AM

    tremendously loved every bit of them i wanted few of their questions answered hopefully in the next update......thus how much their respective pasts or presents annoy them but it keeps their relationship spiced up instead of tame and still :-)

    thanks aditi do update the next one soon

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  8. UnknownNovember 19, 2013 at 9:40 AM

    I want more and credit goes to you :)

    Always! The questions are avoided on the things that actually might as well break their marriage as Khanak fears

    BUT I love when she rants and complains as she hardly does and ONE more thing I realised she is the reason WHY all their wars begin whether it is debt, Sooraj or declining the wealth...He RIGHTLY gets angry at her but when it comes to him he avoids it

    Ha! His got the idea Mahi is not a welcoming factor for Khanak...I want more on what he thinks about HER complain regarding him 'never being home'...A little insight to his mind maybe?

    UPDATE soon Aditee Please :)

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  9. Shalini_SNovember 20, 2013 at 5:20 AM

    i love this Khanak.. she talks.. hope he answers..

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  10. shanakrocks1November 20, 2013 at 6:56 AM

    uffffffffffffffffff....................he wants her to admit that she needs him. he toplists her charts....! hope khanak assures him and vise versa. he needs to admit it too...soooo valunerable state of mind of both

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  11. UnknownNovember 20, 2013 at 6:57 AM

    aditee aaj bhi one update plzzz

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  12. chandu8881November 21, 2013 at 7:17 AM

    Aditee....update please....!!!

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