She lingered quietly for a while, Pradyun trying to grab her
attention, her husband busy with Mahi’s antics, she calmed herself for a moment
and looked at Mahi objectively… “Was she here to infuriate her?” “Is there
still something between the two?” “Mumbai high society was famous for “open
marriages”. Not a day went by that Dadi and Madz casually mentioned women
having affairs, many of Boo’s friends were already divorced or “had lovers”
despite being married…
Middle class values had no place in such excess….
“Kidhar ja rahi hai puttar?” “Tera khaana ata hoga” Dadi
called out…
“I am fasting, I am not hungry” she responded firmly…
climbed the stairs went up to his room and into the closet… she heard
footsteps…
“Your baseball gear is not in the room” she mocked… he was
on the phone but looked livid on the comment…
She looked and acted furious… “Likewise” he bit out in his
mind… “Exactly like how YOU feel Mrs Gujral”
She slammed her closet door and changed into pink track
pants and a skinny orange tee….
Didn’t shower, her body was cold from al the sweating… she
stepped out he was sitting on the bed sifting through some old fashioned paper
designs… everything about him made her furious all of a sudden…
“I will have to call you back her said” just as she passed
the bed… her hair was still in the loooooong braid with the sparkly orange
tassle at the end… parandi? He HATED it, he snared his arm out and dragged her
on to the bed… no rings, no mangal sootra no signs of any kind….he felt like a
fiend… She landed on his designs… “Whaaa” she squeaked…
“This is Khanak, you must be looking for Mahi” she said
snarkily…
He shoved some designs from under her… as his phone rang
“THAT must be Mahi, she said, as she struggled, his bare
midriff rubbed against hers…
“I hate this hair”
She didn’t respond… he reached for her tassle… the long
windy braid hung from the bed, one of her knees was up… “Don’t say I didn’t warn
you” she hissed as she connected his calf with her ankle…. It elicited alaugh
from him…
“Returning the husband’s money the day after the wedding, no
the family fortune, no rings” he grabbed her hand and linked his fingers, the
charm bracelet was intact… “Looking for a new husband?” he hissed… pressing
down on her killing her energy… she twisted under him…
“Husband is passe’ who needs husband?” she responded… I
belong to Malabr Hill I just take lovers now” she responded her voice trembling…
…he didn’t try to kiss or make out, they fought like cats…
she was on him for a few seconds but he was on her a lot…..his breath smelled
like alchahol… she struck the half full glass on the night stand and sent it
pouring over his designs… he “You are a f----g tigress” he barked… not happy as
Scotch dripped on his designs….Her arms and legs imprisoned finally under his
weight… and bound by his grip… she breathed heavily, raising herself one last
time… head butting… pushing him… he held both her hands with one of his and
rolled her skinny tee up her body…. To reveal the British flag pattern on her
lingerie….
“Well well well” “We are looking for another lover aren’t we?
British?” he mocked with a horrible accent…
“Let go of me” she hissed… his phone rang again…
He placed her back on bed… and smothered her….”Did he bring
this for you?”his hand cupped a square flag………she buckled aroused…her mouth dry.an audible groan followed..her eyes shut completely... his open and hawkish...
“Pretty much everything I am wearing” she admitted… lying…
As his hand unhooked…. He still didn’t attempt to kiss her,
she held back her moans biting her lower lip…
Loved it..♥♥♥ ShaNakholic update..♥ Khanak gave a deep thought of why Mahi is here..All of a sudden..Marriage, affairs, flings..Hmmm..Shaan is completely devoted to her..So she can never doubt him..Even when they were separated and he went to states..:)
ReplyDeleteShe went to their room and she immediately followed her like a hutch dog..ROFL..:D Both are exchanging furiously..
Awww..He pulled her towards him and she spit out its Khanak and he must be looking for Mahi ..Awesome!!!!
Returning the money on the next day of their wedding..My God..What a days where those!!! Memories..Sigh!!! She is reply so well..Giving him back..ROFL..:D
And the fight..Gosh..Fighting like anything..Like WWF..Headbutting part was too good..She never gives up..Try as far as she can..But he caught her..;)
She is just making him furious that Pradyun bought everything..And he too fell for it..:P
Looking forward and thank you for writing a fabulous update!!! ♥♥♥
ooooooooohhhhhhhh these guys are hot
ReplyDeletewell well well i m dead hahahahaha ;)
thank u for updating aditee
update soon :)))
OMG... Thy r wild !!!!
ReplyDeleteStill not even kissing...but wanting badly... No1 wann let go....
Third world game !!
That was so good for words aditeee :D
ReplyDeleteim in a different world altogether sighhh sighh sighh <3
who can believe this quiet girl is fierce and argumentative lol!
me loving this insecure khanak she is feeling how shaan feels when he sees her with prad :P
sometimes khanak leaves me speecless with her comebacks! lol! it actually feels shes just like him when she is fighting cold and arrogant :))
lol! that was a limit of british flags now khanak is being too stubborn with dis whole 3rd base thingy i bet she doesnt want 'knw' the details of it either as the mention of it is enough to bring her fire out :P
LOVED LOVED LOVED it aditee especially the pinky and blue lines just tells of how much passion they have bt even smallest thing makes them tight :))
tahnks so much aditee and updatee sooon :D
Superb update their game is bang on wild and hot!! They can't survive without each other they need each other loved the update can't wait for next..
ReplyDeleteLove u always <3 <3
Gosh! Gosh. These two are too cute for all the wrong reasons :)
ReplyDeleteI mean it never understand how every situation you write is so magical than the other
I love 'parandi's' or 'paranda' as my mom calls it...They look so beautiful especially on long hair...I love these little details makes me more connected to back home :)
Khanak should get this in her head that the answer to her insecurity is his faithfulness towards her and vica versa!
Gosh! The bed tumble was entertaining!
It was all passionate fierce and funny! I just cannot imagine them with children when they are like this themselves :P
Khanak is sassy and smart! I mean the things she says are you wont even imagine of having ‘lovers’ instead…She knows how to touch his sour point :D
I actually want Khanak to stew and burn on the ‘third base’ comment and actually demand for answers…he can than revel in her jealousy like she does :P
I want more and more…its addiction so update soon Aditee
omg... i entered a long comment and it vanished.. not typing it again...
ReplyDeleteloved the updates Aditee... perfect..
That was a killer update Aditee.........loving the fight and the retorts.....both of them are jealous and angry......and the reaction is just the way it should have been between them and could have been written this way only by you!! please don't stop Aditee!! Khanak should fight even more with Shaan and not give up easily!! did not like Mahi's behaviour one bit!!
ReplyDeleteUpdate soon Aditee!!! :)
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