Tuesday, December 10, 2013

Part 194


HL wheeled a cart laden with food… Khanak’s belly churned.. the Marathi spread looked delicious…. HL served for her first… she took her plate… and began eating quietly…
“I have to show a video you might like” Pradyun browsed on his phone…
She laughed and shook her head, knowing his love for “odd” things…
“You two look like you’ve known each other for years” Madz mocked…
“He is very laid back Mom” she defended the guy…
“On his back all the time, you mean?” Shaan asked…
She ignored it… he peered into her plate… a strange sensation swept through her, she grabbed some water to kill it… and it came back….
They were laughing and chatting… she set her plate down and walked/sprinted to the rest room… and began retching


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13 comments:

  1. pooDecember 10, 2013 at 7:49 AM

    OMG!!! Is Khanak pregnant???

    Loved it!!! ♥ Pradyun is sweet..And Shaan as always such a tease!!!


    Looking forward and thank you for writing a short and lovely update!!! ♥

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  2. Aasma...December 10, 2013 at 8:13 AM

    :O omg khanak????????
    Shaaan is soooo cute and a big tease hahahah
    x

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  3. shanakrocks1December 10, 2013 at 8:20 AM

    OMG.......I cant think straight now....
    want loooooooong update now.....

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  4. AnonymousDecember 10, 2013 at 8:23 AM

    WHAT :O shaan wnt be too happy with dis...cant wait for nxt update!

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  5. UnknownDecember 10, 2013 at 8:25 AM

    goshhhh!! yayy......or omgg! i dont know if its confirmed but i wanna see how this will bridge the gap between them

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  6. jalisDecember 10, 2013 at 8:49 AM

    hahahah shan shan shan u r funny sometimes ;)

    OMGGGG is khanak....?

    no dont want baby so soon

    but i know confirm hone se pehle hi dadi and sunil will confirm kar denge though for a short period of time want to see how shan reacts

    plzzzzz update soon :)

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  7. vineeta2108December 10, 2013 at 8:55 AM

    Aditee.......kya socha hai........can't wait for the next part!! loved the short update!!

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  8. KrithikaDecember 10, 2013 at 9:30 AM

    I don't think Khanak is pregnant Aditee loved the update poor Khanak is sick i want Shantanu to take care of her in his own possessive style!!
    Baby can wait they both aren't ready yet!!
    Love u loads always <3 <3
    Eagerly waiting for next part!!

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  9. adventure_gurlDecember 10, 2013 at 9:54 AM

    wow whether she is pregnant or not, I hope Dadi and Sunil expect it is the truth and I want to see Shaan's reaction, he thought he was smart that Khanak would not get pregnant but sometimes that one percent comes true

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  10. UnknownDecember 10, 2013 at 10:02 AM

    Aditeeee! I WANT her to be pregnant not for the baby reasons! BUT for All the sparks and fights that will emit from this...I guess he will kinda shut out as thats how I see him!

    UPDATE SOOOOON! I cant wait now!

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  11. chandu8881December 10, 2013 at 8:55 PM

    wow!!! Awesome updates aditee..:D
    And the last one rocked!!
    Is she sick or..???
    Sorry Aditee for being late..
    Im going on a vacation see you next week..take care!:)

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  12. Shalini_SDecember 11, 2013 at 5:10 AM

    i hope Khanak is pregnant.. pls.. i dont want anything else...

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  13. sudhagudaDecember 17, 2013 at 10:56 PM

    I hope Khanak is pregnant

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