Friday, December 6, 2013

Part 193


Khanak vaguely recalled seeing the two names on the Ajmera home page. There were 20 “Board level” investors, or so she thought….
She sipped her wine, it was GOOD…. Smooth, silky, it hugged her insides…
Prad: You love Cabernets don’t you..
Khanak nodded smiling.
Prad:I know this RAD place near Panchagni? He said
Khanak giggled and corrected him “PANCHGANI”
“Oh! Ya… they make the best Dessi wines, he said, stressing on the word “Des”
“Really?” “Maine kabhi nahi suna” she said…
“Khanak, yours I assume?” he husband passed on authentic farazbi patties and gharge…
It was sizzling… she touched only to have her fingers singe…
Pradyun cut some up on a plate.. Bombli bata bhajji, and Karwari prawns lay on the side… the scent of saunf was over powering, “Kya hai?” she asked…
Prawns and fish Khanak” her husband said firmly… biting into one, trying to feed her the rest, she shoved his wrist…
“I am going to try what you are eating” Pradyun said…
“We don’t want you dying of exhaustion” Madz mocked…
“I” (haven’t died yet” Khanak began to say but shut up as usual)
Madz giggled like a silly teenager “Who kya hai na, he , we don’t eat veggie stuff at all”
Khanak sat down freeing her left hand…
Shaan: Mr Gogia, he called…
The guy was talking with Dad…
Basil walked in, his face broke into the warmest smile upon seeing her “Mrs Gujral” he teased…
“I have a name” she said…
Shaan and Vipul talked….
Pradyun:They all love you..
Khanak:Some people are just so special…
Prad: I hear you are Amogh’s favorite, aunt..
Khanak I am “key” (she grinned)
Dadi:Hes bigger now… soon he will start talking… (sad)
Khanak: I know…
Dadi: You don’t take hints, you ignore direct pleas…
Madz:Mommmm! I mean Shaan is still young…
Dadi:Isko mana kar raha hai, young to khair…
Madz:He DOESN’T want any…
Dadi: Yeh? (doesn’t her opnion count?)
Madz: I mean… no offence beta, I love you, (air kissing) but you guys should have talked about it (before the wedding)
Khanak thought Like HE gave me time to do that?
Madz shrugged like “You want babies, he doesn’t… then think about, how long you will fight”
A little prospect of Khanak being unhappy, Shaan being disillusioned by her pestering and them eventually growing apart, sllllllowly germinated in her heart….
She smiled a half smile…
Dadi: Mila is se 4 mahiney mein shaadi ho chuki…
Madz rolled her eyes…
Dadi: Iski shaadi ki baat Madhav ya Keshav se karni thi, who itna dar gaya, fatafat admit kiya he cant live without you and then phir band bajaa baraat (proud)
Madz: We didn’t dance much at his wedding Ma…
Pradyun ends his call
Prad:I danced with HER! Mannnnnnnnnnn!
Khanak smiled…
Shaan listened “Damn!” he said looking at his phone… his back was facing the women & Prad…
Madz:I am fine with one grandkid Mom! (smug)


10 comments:

  1. madz is nicer when she is not speaking :x
    i cant wait to see how shanak will deal with dos problem bth are so stubborn n me sure it be not easy to convince shaan :((
    me worried for them as I think the major problem has jus started n i dont see ever shaan getting convince
    thanks aditee so much lookin forward to the next :)

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  2. he is listening to conv very keenly but responds when prad speaks heheehhehe
    but yaar its high time they just solve all this kitna ke chinge
    whenver mads is not there in the update i feel happy hehheheh
    love it update soon

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  3. Loved it!!! ♥ Pradyun finally joined Khanak..And looks like he want to take her to Panchgani..Shaan acts cool..Not showing any jealous..;)

    Of course all love Khanak..Except Madz..:x Though she is not typical MIL but still..

    And the baby talks come again in open..Dadi and Sunil so want to see ShaNak kid..ShaNak never thought Shaan doesn't need baby before marriage..Who goes and ask and talk to their future hubby..

    OMG!!! Madz still hoping ShaNak get separated..:x Did Madz really dont want Shaan to ve a kid or she dont want Khanak to ve Shaan kid??? :O

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update!!! ♥♥♥

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  4. Loved it Aditee its update 192 do correct it and can't wait for Shanak time alone i want them to talk and make out!! Hoping for weekend update if possible
    Love u loads always <3 <3

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  5. thanks so much aditi.........i am really wishing shaan's adamant on the baby issue will not lead to khanak deciding is better if they go their own ways as the hint is already denoting her heart :-(

    i dont feel angry with mads as she clearly dislikes khanak which is cool but she should keep her opinion to herself though.....iam liking this story as i feel this will lead to a massive contention between the two and i hope he agrees she never asks for anything

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  6. I'm afraid how this 'baby' outcome will be! Neither will relent and its like my way or the high way between both...Maybe a baby will change it! I dont know I feel Shaantanu is quite unjustified on the whole children issue, instead of being ignorant about it he should straightup tell her if he is willing or not

    From Khanak's prespective I can see her breaking to a point where she might decide it is better if they go their own ways for good which obviously he might be wary in telling her incase she'll leave him.

    I really hope Madhavi's take does not give Shaan more encouragement as much as pigheaded and stubborn he is...I really want him understand where Khanak is coming from

    Thanks Aditee...Waiting for the next! The story is leaving igniting sparks which I cant wait to burst!

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  7. Madz saying all that is too much.. she still wants them to separate,, looks like it might happen coz of the baby issue...

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  8. Madhavi's talks is making me worried........Shanak can talk and fight and discuss in their own way but their shouldn't be any separation!!! loved the update Aditee.......looking forward for what happens next!!

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  9. Aditee loved the update
    Madhavi talks make me worried. Is she doesn't want Shaan's child from Khanak.
    They married, fought, separated and reconciled and again,
    Do not separate them. Please atleast make them to talk on baby issue.
    Waiting to see what happens next

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