This story can go two ways….
A: She continues to stress over the baby issue, things
continue to happen with no progress in that area.
B: She gets pregnant and disappears from his life. HOW he
deals with it is this scenario.
She answered her phone preoccupied… “Ya?”
“Hey” he said…
“I sent you the link”
He laughed…
She bristled at the slightest provocation… he had asked her
for a link to a pictures archive she
maintained of pictures he had shot mostly nature… she did not have one of her own..
it just seemed too frivolous… he on the other hand had terabytes of pictures of
her in various poses, mostly unaware… some even when she was asleep.… some of
her arms or legs… or just her eyes.. or her earrings by the bathroom sink, or
her scarf draped around a bobblehead soccer player he had..
Or around his telescopes… her bangles on his techno gadget
case… her bindis on the bathroom mirror..
“How do you know I called about that?”
“Phir?” she asked softly… he had asked her last nite.. after
he had made love… he was sure she would not remember it…stacking her drawings
on her desk… her arms sweaty and sore…Sanjay wanted three things completed by the end of
the day… she was hoping to sneak off to go see a Foundation Doc at Leelavati.
He visited once a month… she hadn’t met Kaka’s Doc in over two months… she
hadn’t gone with her parents after Holi either…
“Khanak”
“Hmm”
“Did u chat with Sanjay about time off?”
“Nahi..”…
“We talked about the baby thing two nites ago” he argued
bluntly…
“Mujhe”
“I know you don’t want to talk about it, but WE DID, Mrs
Gujral… snap out of your grief now… youll be fine”
She had asked him one nite… or early morning, she didn’t know
when, when ever he woke her… half way through making out when he reached for
the bed side drawer… “Please” she begged..
He stopped… sat up, firmly… wore his tee, and leaned back…
to say she had shoved him into a cold
shower would be an understatement…
She wore her cami… as he stared piercingly…
“I don’t think I want to wait” she bit out huskily… turning
red… at her own blunt admission…
Her hair was tousled… her skin pink and bruised…he watched
the silk encase the body… with unconcealed despair…
“I”
“Not tonite Khanak” he ran his hand through his hair…
He was hungry… he saw a feast… putting it very crudely…
asking him to worry about a future happening was suffering….
“Mujhe”
“We decided we’ll wait until Ulwe is done”
‘Aur TEEN SAAL?” she asked shattered…
“He reached for her shoulder, she flinched… sliding her legs
off the bed… he dragged her back by the waist…
“You see Bhayya and Bhabhi” he accused…
“Bhayya loves the baby..” she argued… as he smothered her…
his hand going under her cami… it was orange and sparkly…
Earlier…“Fanta” he had said…”Crush” she had responded
crushing him on the bed…, as he laughed at her spontaneous wit…
She was no match for him… he let her tackle him… stripping off
her clothes in the process………..vulnerable and yet posied and graceful… every
move she made aroused him…
He wouldn’t help her with his tee or his shorts…
He took…. All he wanted….
Making her heady… and breathless…
Then he had reached for the condom…
His hand slid all the way to her chest……… “I love Amogh”
“I want one of my own”
“It might look like me” he opened his mouth on her chest…..
“I am willing to take that risk” she hissed, shoving his jaw…
He chuckled on her ribs……. Bruising…
“Not this year… or next Mrs Gujral” he told her, removing
her cami yet again……….she twisted, kicking the drawer shut with her left heel…
He had opened it and found what he needed… just as he
continued his ambush..
“We cant do it at midnite… or at 3 or at 4… or at 7 in the
morning… or 11.. or at 5”
He listed every hour in a day… she was dizzy with pleasure……..
so she missed most of it…
“we both need this”he mocked huskily raising himself momentarily
off her body as she lifted hers agonized……….. rubbing herself against him…
“I knowwww” he mocked… satisfied… stifling her…
PLEASE PICK A OR B :)
i would definitely pick B.. Khanak deserves that happiness more than any one.. i remember is Season 1 where she says she'll gang up with their kid and ignore Shaan.. i would definitely want that to happen..
ReplyDeletealso B would make him understand life is not only about the 2 things he cares about - work & physical..
ReplyDeleteI would choose A i don't want her vanishing from his life they had been away reconciled once let them come to a conclusion about having a baby when their professional problems sort out in a while
ReplyDeleteThe update was super hot loved it!!
Thanks a lot :-)
Love u loads <3 <3
definitely A we dont want her to disappear from his life and why she should disappear after baby comes ?
ReplyDeleteatleast for 1 year no baby by tat time i hope shanak get more closer to each other EMOTIONALLY
and why no progress ? r they going to talk about baby all the time
plzz get them to a proper conclusion and wait for 1 year i m sure there are many other things they have to worry about right now :P
love the update it was HOT ;) thanks for this :D
plzz update soon :)
OMG!!! Two options..So difficult to choose..I do want Khanak to get pregnant..But I want Shaan to be with her experiencing those happiness and seeing the progress of growth of their child in her womb..Why he thinks a child will put them at a physical distance?
ReplyDeleteI opt for Option B!!!
Shaan needs to know he cant take Khanak for granted and being physical is the only thing..
Loved the update!!! ♥♥♥ Freaking hot and romantic!!! His passion for photography is awesome..Especially the ones on Khanak..
Finally the spoke abt baby issue..Good!!! :) She desperately wants a child..Shaan is heartless and so selfish..Such a jerk..May be another separation may make him understand..
He needs another 3 year to have a child..That is impossible for her..Wish ShaNak have twins..A girl like Shaan and a boy like Khanak..How cool!!!
She tried Ritu's suggestion but he is way to attentive..
The romance was smoking hot..♥♥♥
Looking forward and thank you for writing a fantabulous update!!! ♥♥♥
Aditi I choose option b......it might make him value there is more to life and I will enjoy the distance in their relationship it probably will bind them stronger this time if they reconcile again
ReplyDeleteThanks aditi you are leading the story brilliantly
Thanks ALOT Aditee for giving a option.
ReplyDeleteI am ALL for B, I want some of the angst, anger and pining. Personally for me, I wil love it especially when we have two bead headstrong characters.
I think as a man and who is sexually high. He would never have been ready. Maybe he might actually learn from his mistake this time.
Iam hoping you'd write for option B, there is so much more :D
P.S. I love his obsession with photography and her. But somethings might need to be working out by the high way :)
In the case of the options, I forgot to comment on the UPDATE!
DeleteSigh. Aditee! That was intense! I love them! I mean they are so in love but obviously both fail to acknowledge it.
I guess, his reasoning put me off honestly. HE will never want one if sex is the reason :P
I get it, that he immensely desires her. But there is more to their relationship and somehow a baby might bound or bind them as Dadi said. I know its cliched.
option b b b b! Lol :))
ReplyDeleteshaan ka aab pata chale ga aditee I like option b too thats what he gets for choosing work first :P
Jaise sab ne kaha it is the best for bth n when he sees his own baby me sure he love him or her as much :P
goshhh ending was hot and hopefully tum option B choose karo!!!!!!!!
hehehehe it will mean they won't spend anniversary again or birthday. u can give separation now n give flsdhbacks of them when bth r remembering each other :P
Aditee thanks for giving options :)
ReplyDeleteI want Khanak to be pregnant and I don't want them to separate but I vote for option B.
Loved Shaans passion for photography especially with Khanak pictures.
At least they spoke about baby Issue but Shaan is not ready until Ulwe completed and Khanak desperately want child.
Shaan is taking Khanak for granted. He cares for her a lot but his priorities are work and love making.
Shaan and Khanak love making part was so sensual,
On 1st anniversary they are not together. Please let them celebrate together this time before they separated.
Waiting to see how you unfolds story
majority here is option B
ReplyDeleteif u r going to choose B then plzz no separation
baby is ok but no separation
i dont understand why separation ?
one separation is enough for me :(
I think option b they will value each other more warna if it is A they always take each other for granted n shaan will never be ready yaar his work has always been his his priority a separation wake up call hogi uski but they dnt have to be long seperated though
Deletei dont hv any problem with option B i want them to hv a baby :)
Deletebut i want dont separation
waise bhi i will love whatever she will write :)
aditee if r going to like really separate them toh aisa mat karo ke ek do saal ke liye alag ho just for few days plzzz :(
firstly Aditee..............this was a superlative update!! the pictures part was beautiful.....Shaan loves her so much!! about the baby issue......well........ what Khanak wants is natural and there is a deep emotion involved in that.......but i agree with Shaan too...he too has a point, both of them are young and can surely wait for a baby for few years!! i certainly don't want her to disappear from his life.......and he surely understands her worth......he had brought her back from Delhi........and what's the harm if he desires her so much........i love that part........and by the way the love making portion in this particular update was one of the best of Casa.........so i think i will go for option A!!
ReplyDeleteI know Aditee, whatever way you make the story go, it's going to be fabulous..........i have loved each and every bit of Casa right from the first update of season 1........so the one thing iam sure about is that i will be loving any which way you proceed with this masterpiece!!
Ohhhhhh noooo i dont want the second option not thrm splitting up again!!!
ReplyDeleteY cant they wait for a year or something
Its high time that they start acting like a married couple and stip arguing all the time looooool
They need to be normal hahahahahaha
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As much as i want to see these two together....but with option i dont want to see weak khanak who is stressed abt baby and her feeling tht shan might get over or hv and affair or third person. no i dont want that kind of story.
ReplyDeleteI will go for opt B. that should make both value each other and understand each others views. but please please......dont make her run away far away. cannt see them seperate more than few updates.
I actually want you to go ahead with your own conception. I simply love reading your story.
want to see khanak accept the fact tht she is a gujral now.
ReplyDeletewant to see shan acknowledging khanak's emotional needs....and not just care abt his work.
b, I rather she get pregnant and run for it until they meet again if he doesn't agree to her wishes, he can learn the hard way
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