Madhavi did actually go with Khanak She took forever to
change into a salwar suit, on Khanak’s insistence… Khanaks boldness
irkedMadhavi.. Khanak didn’t wear herboldness with pride she wasn’t cocy there
was a certain calm demeanor that posed a threat to Madhavi…While the girl was
completely disconnected with the family politics the family wealth the obvious
affluence… she was very involved with what ever she cared about… her son topped
the list… without saying a word to Shaan in their lounge, Khanak had made that
impression on Madhavi… he couldn’t take his eyes off her, she was as aware of
him as a teen was, of her first crush….
Madhavi realized if she wasnt in the room that moment... her daughter in law wouldnt have made it to Vaishali's
Her son would have just taken her to bed...
"Its the physical attraction thats explosive... there is no love underneath...those big eyes, and that..." Madhavi curtailed her train of thought as it ventured into areas she rather not...
It anoyed her that her son would have the permanent hots for a girl like Khanak...a week, a month, a year was OK... the guy acting like he was drugged or under a spell... around her....
"Maybe thats why he doesnt want a family?" a light bulb glowed in her brain... 1000 watts... MAYBE he is not sure of himself either... maybe he doesnt want a lower middle class Gujarati gene in his baby"
That thought almost caused her to gurgle with joy... she reached out and hugged Khanak... "I am SO HAPPY I am spending the evening with you beta"
Khanak smiled calmly... wondering what caused her MIL's sudden seizure of joy
On the ride to Chembur she said very little, except “Mujhe
unke baby ko dekhna hai” her eyes lit up whenshe said baby… Sunil was worrying
a week ago about Shaan’s plan for fatherhood…. Madhavi had another plum
opportunity in that front… but she wouldn’t make her moves immediately or
obviously…she would first gain Khanak’s trust… like her mother in law had
instantaneously….
Madhavi seethed on the inside wondering how Janaki Gujral
could instinctively adore such middle class drivel that Khanak brought home
from her visits to Chembur or Ahmdbd…. Madhavi had attempted to ask Qs and be
involved, but the mundane lower middle class life didn’t interest her one bit….
“I have never visited Chembur have I” Madhavi asked smugly,
trying her best to lose her smugness…
“Its another place in Mumbai” retorted her bahu, carelessly…
“Arey YOU lived there beta” Madhavi, squeezed Khanak’s
shoulders…
“I can give you a ride home” her husband’s olive branch
flickered on her phone as Pradeep pulled into her complex… Mr Pai stood at the
gate beaming, immediately ordering the new gate keeper to keep the doors wide
open to allow the S class Merc to slide in…
Madhavi was on the phone… Vithal Uncle opened her door…
Khanak jumped out before anyone could…
Vithal was overjoyed to see her MIL…”Mr Shaan nahi aaye?” he
asked her softly in Marathi…
“He..” she began..
“He had meetings, he will be here before we leave” the
mother lied on behalf of her son…
“I am staying her tonite” Khanak texted him back expressionless…and powered
off her phone…
Loved it!!! ♥ Madz however try to separate ShaNak she wont succeed unless they do it themselves..Wish Khanak gets pregnant soon..
ReplyDeleteKhanak is a complete enigma..♥ Where Shaan is enchanted by her in every way..She is such a n intriguing character he loves to decode everything..:)
ShaNak are physically attracted..There is more like love too but they wont acknowledge it to themselves so forget abt with each other..Till date they never said those 3 words..Well..As you many times pointed out Aditee its not a requirement too..
Glad Madz went along with Khanak to the function..Still not clear abt the motive..
His reason for not having the baby is completely different..lolzzz..Shaan wants Khanak to himself..♥ Not ready to share her with his own child too..Such is his possessiveness..♥
Madz plotting very well to gain trust..Hmmm..Khanak is not naive to believe her..How coolly Madz lied..lol..:D
Shaan offered to ride Khanak back..But she said she will stay and switched off..Awesome!!! :)
Will he come to pick her up?
Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update!!! ♥ ♥ ♥
why madz is behaving like this suddenly i mean i know she doesnt like or love khanak but i never expected from her to plot to separate Shanak :P
ReplyDeleteshe knows that her son is MAD about khanak and married for years toh ab toh she doesnt care but looks like suddenly she loves her son so much itni care karti hai ke she is going to separate khanak from him like he will be really happy of this happens ha stupid she is
she went with khanak WOWOW shocked
aww he texted and her reply was bang on now toh pakka shan ll come juz to get her back thats it heheheheee ;)
thank u so much for wonderful update next update soon :)
hehehhe u know what aditee i m reading casa all over again and right now i m reading part 5 were u wrote this
ReplyDelete"I thought I would go 10 or 15 parts with this one, but I am now thinking it may not last beyond 10. Going to be a lil busy"
now see where we have come to a veryy longggggggggggggg way and i m juz loving it we all are loving it dont want to end it NEVER :D
superb superb updates...........Madhavi's sudden interest in Shanak's life is scaring me!! and the way you have described about the couple in the last few parts was amazing........sizzling hot.......and that too when they are fighting!! Shaan's msg to Khanak in this part was sweet and loved her reply.........looking forward for the next one!!
ReplyDeleteI cant believe Mads is ready to go to a extreme extent to sewn complications between the couple.
ReplyDeleteThe fact that Khanak is not fake person…he is more grown towards her just for this reason. She incites him and challenges him!
Madhavi IS SO WRONG. I hope Khanak proves her incorrect and does not fall for her trap…If they are going to separate, its not because of Madhavi…only when she decides its enough and she needs to distant herself from him….
I loved his text…he seriously cares…it just overpowers every other emotion by their endless physical attraction…BUT he is more loving when it is his fault and trying to amend it :P
I hope he doesn’t come to get her…even if he does. He wont able to find her. It be good for him.
aditi....superb update...mads is playing with the wrong people.....shaan will burst if he finds out what she is playing at.....loved it is unnoticeable to be anyone of their attachment to one another. ....shaan cant think straight without her and she won't be able to live without him. ...I hope he let's her stay in chembur to relieve herself from his uninvolved behaviour....thanks aditi will all be waiting fot the next.....
ReplyDeleteomg.. Madhavi is planning... too much... loved it how Khanak gave it back to her...
ReplyDeleteKhanak you are amazing and haha Shantanu looks like your better half scored over you yet again!
ReplyDeletego girl! khanak is so fab in whatever she does :D :D
ReplyDeleteloved her quiet attitude i hope she doesnt fall for madz trap she is smart enough to know her mil must have some motive for all the drama :))
lol! he is desperate or he is feeling bad for the problems between them i hope he make her laugh n smile again only he can make her extremely upset or happy :P
tchhh! why does madz think khanak n shaan wouldnt have lasted they would have even after the first seperation n still will its just bth need time and have strong characters :))
thanks so much aditee! it was written brilliantly, we all be waitin for the nxt one
Awesome update
ReplyDeleteI can't believe Madhavi really went to Chembur with Khanak
Madhavi is happy thinking that Shaan doesn't want child from gujarathi middle class girl but she doesn't know that he don't want to share Khanak even with his child. He is so possessive of his wife.
Madhavi knows even after years of marriage her son is Mad for Khanak, even though she is ready to separate them by trapping Khanak .
I hope Khanak doesn't fall in Madhavi's trap.
Loved how he sent message and how she answered message
Waiting for next update