Friday, January 17, 2014

Part 206


Madhavi Gujral left in two or so hours, made a grand show abouttrying to convinceKhanak to return… Vitha reassured her many times…”Aapki bahu is safe …”Shaan will worry beta” she told loudly…
“He knows… he said I could stay and Dadi too” “Ma I don’t have to ask for permission” she gently reminded her MIL…
“Of course you don’t” Madz thought… “You do AS YOU PLEASE including tying my rake of a son in knots”…
“Let me call him” Madz began…
“Sure” Khanak shrugged carelessly, heading towards Aunty’s apartment…
Madhavi stood there dialing, he son did not answer…
She reluctantly gave the baby a gift of a gold chain… jaws dropped all around… Khanak squirmed… she was planning for a silver bowl and spoon, she had even brought it with her, but her MIL chose to wave her wealth…
It was in gross bad taste and inappropriate… they weren’t related to the Gujrals…the occasion did not warrant aRs 50,000 gold chain… but Madhavi had to insinuate herself… she would go to the extreme in the process…
Khanak wondered about her motive briefly… but decided to give it up… it was pointless… like her husband’s complete disregard for her feelings, her MIL’s nonchalance had no place in Khanak’s feelings…
Sonali called Madz finding her phone switched off… Madz acted like she didn’t know who it was at first… wondering HOW she got a hold of HER number…….
She silently blamed her own MIL for it…
She didn’t care for the girl… she suspected the girl had plans to become a Kapoor.. by ensnaring Pradyun.. she ditre foher at all…
But in order to earn Khanak’sconfidence she will have to appear like she CARED about EVERY Mistry or what ever Sonali’s last name was….
“my fave girl” Madz gushed… Khanak wondered who it was until the phone was handed to her…
Madhavi promised they would go to spa together and go to the arcade at Taj Mahal Hotel…
When the phone got handed to her she was startled it was her cousin…
“Dee ek week off hai, main ghar aaoon ya Bai se milne jaaoon?”
“go home” without a doubt Khanak’s mind yelled…. “Tickets dekhna padega she offered gently”
“To main ghar na aaoon?”
Quite unlike the mood she leftHill… acting like she was wronged… taking Dadi’s money” Khanak squirmed…
“Everybody is busy Sonu” she said softly
“Aap mujhse naraaz ho abhi bhi…. Dee aapko pata hai na… YOU are my favorite”
The favorite word sounding like FAV-REET…
The girl tried her best to climb the ladder….
Khanak leaned on the rental chair and smiled… “everyone has an agenda” she concluded


THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR PONGAL WISHES :-)
Hope you all had a fabulous Holiday as well






7 comments:

  1. thanks aditee for update :))
    awwww! shes not going home, i hope he comes to collect her or says sorry for his aloofness regarding her feelings :((
    loved how khanak doent care abt anyones motives or feelings only abt things she cares abt!
    ufff aditee is sonali ko door rako khanak se and shaan i dnt want her coming anytime soon :X :X
    mads needs to keep busy shes comin in for no reason it was shaan who choose her n even if they have problems it doesnt mean their nt happy :P
    happy weekend n waiting for nxt one aditee update soon

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  2. Loved it!!! ♥ Khanak is finally gonna stay there..Poor Shaan..Yes..She does what pleases her..Nothing wrong in it..

    Madz did show off and made sure everyone talk abt her by giving gold chain..Khanak's gift was cute!!! :) Hope she gives it..

    There comes Sonali again..:x At least Madz knows her intention..

    She wanna come and stay with her..Ugh..

    The last line by Khanak “everyone has an agenda” is 100% true!!!

    Missing the blue and pink lines..

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update!!! ♥

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  3. im stumped by khanak……she is indifferent towards many aspects in her life I wish I was the same….i wish sonali could have been one of them…..i do worry about this couples indifference towards each others feelings they dont oblige to keep each other happy….this is what makes them intense and strong…..i guess khanak guessed everyone does have a motive although i wish she doesn’t consent to these people for their motives are fulfilled….thanks so much aditi for writing a wonderful and good update :-)

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  4. OMG why everybody is after khanak she is right matlabi log everybody is having agenda
    sonali kya kam thi jo madz bhi
    but sonlai is more dangerous bcoz she is smart and witty unlike madz heheeehhee she is acting childish heheee her plans are so foolish sonali ki kab care ki hai khanak ne jo confidence jitne ke liye sonali ko gale lagaya OH GOD madz will be damned now she cant handle sonali u wait and watch madz heheheee :D
    how i hoped khanak ne kaha hota the first thought tat came in her mind NO but arrgghh anyways woh aaye na aaye nothing is gonna happen infact shan will completely ignore her :)
    i hope she stays :)
    update soon :)

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  5. Send Sonali to her home i don't want her near Gujrals loved the update let Shantanu come i am so glad she is staying here want him to come and get her!! Thanks for the update eagerly waiting for next!! Love u always <3 <3

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  6. hope Khanak completes her agenda and leaves both the families..

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  7. Khanak didn't go home with madhavi . Hope Shaan comes and get her.
    Madhavi gave a gold chain to baby to gain Khanak confidence. Hope Khanak won't fall in Madhavi's trap. Loved the gift Khanak wanted to give the baby. Hope she gives them.
    Sonali called Madhavi and she expects Sonali's motive still she promised her Spa and gave phone to Khanak to gain her confidence.
    Please send Sonali to her bai not to Khanak's house
    I totally agree with Khanak " every one has an agenda"
    Aditee thank you for awesome update

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