Friday, April 4, 2014

Discovery

"She was supposed to returnin the morning, her phone went dead"
"She left you and you should start dating" Madhavi blurted voicing her dark desire... pretending to crack a joke......

"I am kidding baby" she said shrilly after a moment, realizing her son didnt care for the joke..

Sunil:Kidhar hai meri beti?
Madhavi:I had no idea you wanted a girl so bad (you wud pretend ur bahu is ur beti)
Sunil: Anyone that marries HIM deserves ALL my love and compassion (Sunil sipped his Vodka)
Shaan smiled derisively "So I can just conclude you had a part in making her disappear?"

Dadi shifted uncomfortably in her seat

Sunil:Dekho Ma, he doesnt think twice before shooting his mouth off.
Dadi:Thats why I pray he has half a dozen kids... hes been recklessly arrogant in not wanting any...
Shaan:Are we back on that one again.? I have a meeting at the Site in 2 hours, can you ask her to text me when she gets home?

Dadi truly had no idea how every minute from now was going to pass, how she was going to keep the event shrouded in secrecy... for HOW LONG....

She had a cell phone that Khanak would call on... she worried about her... she decided the idea was foolish... what if she threw up all nite and dehydrated herself?

HL's cousin was looking for work... maybe she should ask her to be with Khanak?
For how long?

Sunil:Aaapko batakar gayi?

Dadi: Shaan is crazy... he has a vivid imagination,
Madhavi: Amen! (he married HER)
Sunil:Is time tak to ghar laut aati hai, hafte se apne parents ke ghar hai, looks like she is slowly beginning to feel dispassionate about us all

Madz: A elite South Mumbai Punjabi family, is not everyone's cup of tea (arrogant) especially such a obedient, simpleton Gujarati like Khanak (compliment?)

Dadi:I dont think u need to declare the elite part Madhavi (pissed)
Madhavi: Cmon Mom... our word is different....

Shaan sprinted down the stairs "She quit her job?"
Dadi wanted to disappear...Sunil looked startled... Madhavi did as well for a moment and later realized her son might finally be heading to his rakish bachelorhood/freedom days... tried to conceal her glee...

11 comments:

  1. Loved it!!! Shaan finally came to know Khanak quit her job..Madz is so happy..

    I guess Sunil will find abt Dadi's hand in all this first..

    Looking forward and thank you for a cool update!!! :)

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  2. chalo he knows she has quit her job he gets so worried wen she doesnt pick her phone aab tho she is gone i think he will go crazy wen he finds she left him :(((
    me too i think dadi wont able to keep dis secret for so long but maaybe sunil might nw it was dadi who planed dis :))))
    chalo mads wish cum true lol! she is snobby and hinks khanak has done magic on her son lol! but its notnshe will soon see now how possesive and worried he is over her :P
    thank u aditee for such a amazing update its getting exciting after each update

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  3. awww sunil is soooo sweet :)
    omg dadi shanak ke beech me phas gayi :P
    so now starts her disappearing plan ok
    but pehle din hi shan got to know she has quit her job toh khanak ko find karne me jyada time nahi lagega yayayaayyaaa
    but whenever he finds her i hope he change his decision from his heart and whole heartedly accept this baby like this both will be happy :)
    obviously she quiting her job is A BIG shocker hehhehehe but see her love for shantanu's baby she quit her JOB for this baby if she can do this then shan can too
    i m sure wen he will realize this he will change his decision of not having baby :)
    lovely update
    update tomorrow too plzzzzzzzzzzzz:)

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  4. finally his brain is working??? loved it Aditee.. naalaikkum oru kutti update please...

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  5. Dadi wont able to lie or conceal the truth for too long. Sunil should know about this!

    Oh god! He might call her home and find out she went with Dadi!

    Gosh! Loving it! Everyone is joking about her disappearance, who knew she would actually vanish...He is worried already, it wasnt obvious he would find out through her workplace

    Thanks Aditee! Cant wait for the NEXT :D

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  6. "action" and "discovery".........loved both the parts!! Shaan must be shocked on knowing that Khanak has quit her job.........really eager to know his reaction when he discovers that his wife has disappeared!! and dadi is a sweetheart........always worrying about Khanak!! Madhavi is horrible..........and superb twist in the tale........bahut hi achcha!!

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  7. Aditee loved the update

    Shantanu came to know Khanak quit her job. He was worried when she djdn't pick up phone and now may be he will know she left him ......... what will he do now?

    Dadi so concerned for Khanak. True. Dadi won't able to keep this secret for so long and may be Sunil will find his mother's hand in all this

    If Shantanu call her parents, he will get to know she left with Dadi ......
    Madhavi is so happy

    Waiting for ne t update

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  8. waiting....till he became aware she has run off without a reason.....it will shock him....wondering how he reach to conclude she left him.......thanks aditi :-)

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  9. omg. All updates are epically beautiful.
    shaan gujral came to know that his wife quited the job.
    i wonder...kahi wo pagal na ho jaye.
    Aditee, its very nice to see madhvi's dark side coming out. Can we have mahi onboard to make madhvi realize the importance of khanak in his life during this seperation. I want to see shaan's good or bad or goodbad side...too.

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  10. today is RBO ANNIVERSARY
    atleast update today

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