He scrolled through his call log, she hadnt done anything out of the ordinary... not hinted at anything, didnt sound weird when she called from Bai and Aada's "You never called" she accused him at the end of day three...
"I am sorry" he pleaded...
"You never call. You didnt even ack my tex" she complained...
He had smiled reveling in being wanted...
"I thought Bai and Aada were your world, and you didnt worry about Malabar Hill"
"Fine. I will hang up now"
"Khanak.... ughhhhhh.... OK Khanak... U know how the Fairview block is coming along"
"I dont care about Ulwe" she moped....
"Return tomorrow" he ordered
"Nahi" she said... "Bai has something for Naag Chaturthi?" "Something"
"Tomm nite then?"
"Shantanu?"
"Hmm?"
"Amogh ko kuch nahi diya humne, yahan se kuch laaoon?"
"Dont worry"
"Its not nice, Bai wanted to give him something in silver, main le loon?"
"Hes never going to wear it... Bhabhi wont put it on" Shaan told her bluntly
"How about a rice bowl?"
"Khanak I dont care what Amogh eats in" frustrated...
"Take a day off and come over"
"You LOVE yanking my strings dont you" angry
"U never want to get away from work"
"And you look for every opp to get away from me"
Loved it!!! Shaan..Its so not right..Not to call her..Poor Khanak..Get the hint on Amogh Shaan..He is not thinking at all abt baby..
ReplyDeleteLooking forward and thank you for writing a superb update! :)
ufff! his blue line sach ho gayi :((
ReplyDeletehahahahaha! why does he never call her and nw when he wants to call her or waiting for her she is not there anymore :((
i feel so bad for him after dis now its so sad he has no clue where she is and missing her
thanks for rocking update :D :D
i hope Shaan gets the hint at least now... that its not another adult in her life but a cute little package....
ReplyDeletesometimes words in gist become true......the recall was sweet.....it is out of his logic why she left.....I wish someone can clear the puzzle for him.....thanks aditi and have a good weekend :-)
ReplyDeleteShaan should have taken a day off and gone to meet Khanak.............absolutely loved reading "unforgiveable" and "getting away"!! even if they don't meet anytime soon, i want him to know the reason behind Khanak's disappearance somehow!! superb parts Aditee!!
ReplyDeletearre yaar shan isse toh hint lo :P
ReplyDeletewaise till now ye hint nahi mila woh bhi achha hai
want khanak to tell him herself face to face
update soon
Loved it Shantanu recalling their convo :-)
ReplyDeleteBlue & Pink lines are fabulous always <3 <3
He is not getting the hint..
Excited for next part!
Hope Khanak is feeling better..
Thanks Love u loads <3 <3
Aditee superb update
ReplyDeletePink and Blue lines are fabulous.
Loved how Shantanu recalled their convo and how Khanak always wanted him to call her and he enjoyed being wanted by her :)
Hope Shantanu gets hint now recalling their convo about Amogh
Waiting for next update