The phone rang twice, she answered it, her voice sounding like she was either in pain or asleep
Dadi:Beta?
Khanak:Dadi?
D:Beta, are you OK? Did Mrs Singh visit?
K:Hmm... I was asleep Dadi... I am a lil better...
D:I am not sure WHY I am playing along...
K:Dont say that please? (agonized)
D:You dont know if he will hate being a Dad...
K:I know... I dont want his pity...
D:Pity is nothing close to what he is feeling at this time
His mention, caused her heart to skip a beat...
K:Did you talk with him?
D:Oh yes, he accused me of hiding you...
Ksat down in shock... "Unko kaise pata chala?" (terrified)
Dadi (dryly) Really Khanak? You have been his ONE thought since you vanished... I had to force Sunil not to go to the cops...
Khanak was very afarid... "Dadi, I should just not involve you"
D:Dont you DARE... disappear... I need you to call me every hour... tum ITNI stubborn ho?
K:Dadi...
D:Tera miya kisi ka khoon kar dega, itne gusse mein hai
K:Good... he wont want the baby anyway (lump in her throat)
D:mera bachhhe.... shhhhhhhhhhh... stop crying... he is probably going to chain to the bed...
Khanak giggled....
K:He can be indifferent when he wants to be (reminded of the time, when they had just met, and how he had mocked and ridiculed her with just his looking at her)
D:Mujhe lagta hai yeh zyaada din nahi chalne waala
K:I love the school Dadi, I am the art teacher... THANKS for the money Dadi (blurting the last part huskily)
D:Tere pati ko pata nahi maine karaway sab kuch... tere saath mainnu vi maar daalega...
K:Dadi but you know I will return the money to you once I arrange it
D:I dont want to talk money with you...
K:Dadi... I dont want his pity..
D:You wont get any of THAT trust me
dadi is right.......more of the wrath she will see of him.....I cant believe khanak was accepting towards the money.....I do see her being more involved after the child......thanks aditi :-)
ReplyDeleteHmm..J Tripathi is none other than Janaki Gujral, nothing surprising:p
ReplyDeleteAwesome update aditee!! Good to hear something about her :)
She's a art teacher..that's nice:)
Aditee..whatever you do..we feel unsatisfied..I mean..we crave for much more :p
Continue soon:)
much awaited conversation... hope Shaan over hears it.. should be interesting..
ReplyDeletetccchhh her pity and strong nature is going to be costly lol :)))
ReplyDeleteshaan knws kinda what it might be just waiting for him to confront dadi or get the truth out lol! dadi bechari is stuck between the two aab cant wait for next update nw :D
Me not so supporting Khanak here..She thinking wrongly..hmmm
ReplyDeleteHe never pity on her..Period!
Looking forward and thanks for updating!!!
me too not with khanak this time :(
ReplyDeletehehheeeee dadi is so right he will not pity her he will do everything but not pity he soon is going to burst to disappear like that
oh so she is thinking of returning the money tsbhi me sochuuuu this girl :P
she needs family home especially husband oh God save her
ye jyada din chalne nahi wala
update soon
Loved it Aditee superb part Dadi and Khanak's convo beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteIts been just a day na this is second day na?
Eagerly waiting for next part!
Thanks love u loads <3 <3
both the updates were too good...........Shaan's thoughts and finally his guess was just amazing!! loved reading about Khanak.........poor thing she wants this baby so much.........she must be very stressed, otherwise how could she ever think that her husband will pity her............i want Shaan to find her as soon as possible!! Dadi's words about Shaan's anger and his mental state was just superb!!
ReplyDeleteAditee awesome update
ReplyDeleteLoved Dadi and Khanak Convo
Dadi is right. Shantanu never pity her :)
Khanak is an art teacher .... good
Khanak wanted to return money to Dadi
Yeh Zyaada din nahi chalne wala ......... Dadi is right he will anyway finds her
Waiting for next update
Aditee update please..:)
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