Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Servitude...

His gut for some reason told him it was intentional and that she was safe some place. 
What he DIDNT know at this time was WHY.... Why would she do it....
It made him hopping mad....
Being extremely private people he didnt reveal much to his own family.
He had a meeting on site at 8, with the design team and Nachiket and a set of key contractors.... the balcony extensions on the block called Renaissance werent turning out as they had expected.... Rahat wanted them ripped out... they were don with trusses until the second flooor.... out of 28....

Rewok would cost time and money, his Project team, had spent countless hours working with the architects to see if they can make the whole thing into French windows....
NOW His wife has left him...
IF you guys will let me handle this" he barked as he left home....
"Biwi ka pata nahi aur janaab kaam par nikal gaye" Sunil fumed...
"Sunil calm down please" Dadi worried... her grand daughter in law was texting her.... her phone pinged....
She worried if Khanak was healthy...
Her morning sickness was really bothering her.... she wouldnt eat anything....
"When I was pregnant with her I threw up exactly like that"Bai had commented....
Khanak had gone pale.... in order for her plan to survive her parents shouldnt find out...
They would NEVER cooperate if they knew

Shaan pulled out of the driveway.... looked up at the 9th floor her roses shook and shivered in the evening sea breeze... she would spend hours in the balcony... texting him... chatting with him...
He would urge her to go out with Bhabhi "I will wait for you" she would say

He was hopping mad.... she wouldnt quit her job for ANYTHING...... her family debt was a prized possession she lugged along without losing breath

It threatened to bury her but yet, she wouldnt complain....

"You have to let me give you a loan" he would hurl...she would squirm... trying to push him away...
"I dont want to be indebted to you" she said once...
They stared at each other......UNTIL he would channel his anger towards passion..... he would make love ferociously....

"Welcome to a world of servitude sweetheart" he cursed colorfully... as he jumped a red light and sped towards Nariman Point

10 comments:

  1. Loved it!!! :) Shaan has work commitment which he cant avoid..Good..He knows she must be safe..:)

    Khanak having morning sickness..Wish Shaan able to see all those progress in pregnancy of his wife!

    How she gonna pay all those debt? She wont take his money..

    Looking forward and thank you for writing a superb update! :)

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  2. his brain is racing........I knew he would get her back and probably use her unemployment as his full advantage......I am wondering if she'd come herself or make her come to him....thank you aditi :-)

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  3. Ha ha ha! I love when he swears :p
    Loved the blue and pink lines! :)
    His love for work would never come down..:p
    Poor khanak she's all alone..hope she had told him..
    He's hopping mad! Good!!
    Waiting to see whether he'll search for her or..
    Thank you so much for the update aditee!! :)
    Continue soon! :)

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  4. hehehehehehe! his anger is always so on top of his head loved his reaction lol!!
    khanak is so dead after this unless he finds out she is pregnant he will be in shock himself :P :P
    awwww now he is gone play tit to tat game with her too me wondering if he find her after his is sure she is safe i think he will make dadi tell him :))
    love love loved it aditee its getting awesome day by day now :)))

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  5. looks like Dadi is all set to tell Shaan... is it??? loved it...

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  6. yayayayaaa finally an update on Shan
    love blue and pink lines :)
    sweetheart ? awwww how i wish he had said that to khanak face to face but with love not with anger hehehehheheeee
    i really want shan to find khanak soon bcoz i infact we all wanted to see shanak leaving this phase together and not separated :(
    loving this hide and seek game hehhehee update daily aditee :)

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  7. it was really nice to know Shaan's views about the situation and i loved it!! hope he finds out everything very soon!! the flashbacks you write are always awesome Aditee.............eager to know "how he handles this".........him being "hopping mad" is natural!!

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  8. Loved it Aditee superb part his anger i am enjoying reading it Khanak will shock him with breaking news then how can he be angry..
    During a chat my mom said some ppl will get nausea for nine months poor Khanak is going through the same its happens during pregancy hope she is taken care well by him and her family..
    Its going to be difficult journey but it will be their next step together as parents kids will give a new meaning to their despite busy schedules and loads of work Shanak will become complete with their kids :-)
    I chose the option A as both weren't ready to become parents but Casa is going by Option B I would love to read flash back of Chembur night :-)
    Pink and blue lines r beautiful always <3 <3
    Servitude ha excited for next part!
    Loads of love <3 <3

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  9. loved the update, I am eager to know his reaction, when they will meet again and if he will care for her properly during the pregnancy and help alleviate her fears

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  10. Aditee superb update

    Shantanu had feeling that Khanak's disappearance was intentional and he was hopping mad ....... hope he will find her soon

    Shantanu's love for work never come down
    Khanak is suffering from morning sickness and she was alone and I wish she would have told Shantanu. Khanak don't want her parents know about her pregnancy because she knew they would never cooperate with her if they knew

    Always loved the flashbacks of ShaNak
    Loved the blue and pink lines, especially the last lines.

    Waiting for next update

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