Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Casa de la Buena Suerte CASA II Part 6



 Part 6
Mangal Kunj
Dec 15th 2011
9:22 AM
She turned sideways in bed… the morning sun played hide and seek from between the swaying curtains… the split air conditioner blew a gust of air in the curtain’s path…
She stretched… turned the other way and looked… there was nobody… or… that somebody was gone!!!
His wet towel lay on the center… she pulled it… it was moist and heavy… and the scent of Acqua wafted to her nostrils……
“There is another word in Hindi I need to teach you, its “Haan” he had muttered fiercely in her ear, nipping it…
She had pushed him away...
“Khanak.. please” finally the please had come…
“Umm..Mmm” was all she would say..
He teased… she pretended to sleep…
“Iam supposed to be mad at you, you’ve been gone TWO days I gave you permission for none” his leg insinuating between hers…
“Permission” she repeated…
“granted?” he countered nailing her with words unspoken laughing openly… as she wiped her ear and jaw on his tee
“Shant” he kissed her… before she could finish… they floated and blended… and arm wrestled.. as he overpowered her… her frilly nightshirt… hung on the nightstand…. She clutched a handful of his hair… he groaned… sighed and yawned..but wanting to finish the project at hand… but sleep was not willing to back off…
His breathing steadied… face buried in her cleft…and his weight on her pressed her down… as he slept… with her secure…. Beneath him…
She checked the time “9:33 AM” the clock said, it was some fancy ipad like tall digital clock… very unique… it had a thermometer and Sirius and world weather and such………
Her phone lay beside it… it did not urge her to pick it up…. It never did… she either forgot to answer it or carry it many times… on their trip to Seychelles, they had been to Le Jardin Du Roi Spice Garden… an 18th century French legacy to Seychelles…rows of vanilla vines, citronelle, cinnamon, pepper and nutmeg grew everywhere,… she wandered when he answered a phone call… and was terrified…. With no phone… all she carried was the tour/transalation book, that had French and Creole… she sat down under a tree and formed a sentence to say “I need to find my husband”
She repeated it………… many times… perfecting her French…. Until she found him………..She had clung to him in fear
…he had made her repeat that in bed that nite…. Many times……………..
“There are so many Indian immigrants in Seychelles Khanak” he reminded her of the South Indian temple they went to last nite… on her insistence…
“You are always on the phone” she had complained
“I am talking with you now” she countered gently…
She had walked away upset… he ran to catch up with her
“Phir se kho jaaogi”
“Khanak”…
I would just live here then” she told him…
“Can I visit?”
“Sure, that would be nice…” she played along…
“Where would I stay?” he teased gently
She had looked up at him….. like she was saying “Where elsewould you stay? Ofcourse With ME!!”
“Then say it” he demanded
She looked away… afraid of what he wanted…as her heart lurched painfully…
There was a knock on the door
She rushed out of bed… ran to her closet and changed out of her skimpy “dress” into a capri night suit… and opened the door
It was HL
“Koi kaam tha?” she asked politely
“Jee Dadi neeche breakfast ke liye baithi bola aapko dekhkar aaoon” he smiled his toothy smile
She smiled back
“Abhi” she said gently
Brushed her teeth vigorously,,, the votive candles had been rearranged to a sad face… she understood the reference and blushed gloriously…
Walked back to bed… wiped her face with his towel… took the other towel from the night before… shaking her head in frustration,… it looked like her husband had worked in the morning… there were papers strewn all over the lounge area of the bedroom, there were old fashioned blue prints and some paper files with Maharashtra state govt logo… it made her hopping mad… “Iam not going to tidy THAT”
She told herself… walking downstairs
Dadi: First day of life as a Senior architect? (smiled)
Khanak:Thanks (shy)
Dadi: It’s a chocolate breakfast… its in pancakes, its in your milkshake and its in the donuts…
Khanak reached for it overjoyed…
HL heaped strawberries… fresh… diced… on to her plate..
“Was Shaan happy?”
“Umm”
“Beta”
“I was asleep Dadi (until he woke me), matlab… main so gayi, so I couldn’t talk
“He doesn’t know?” (disappointed)
“Umm..mmm.. (scarfing down on her food)
“Aaj chhutti kar lo, we can go celebrate”
Khanak’s eyes danced… “Ranbir ke ghar lekar chalengi?” “I heard he lives in Khar?”
Dadi smiled at her fondly “Unlike Khushboo, she was so unpretentious…. Simple… very middle class” “Everything Khushboo is not, yet she is more poised and elegant”
“Shaan naraaz hoga agar tum Ranbir se mili”
Khanak looked at her donut… trying not to turn crimson
Dadi: “Take the day off beta”
Khanak: Is Mom back? (softly)
Dadi: She is… on her way
Khanak:I have to work with a new team Dadi… plus work with the benefits people to get the arrears… for the raise” (softly)
Dadi: What are you going to buy for yourself?
Khanak looked surprised, never used to thinking about herself… “I want to buy you something”
“I don’t want dentures” Dadi flashed her own sparkly ones
Khanak laughed…
As the home phone rang..
Dadi answered… “We are busy”
She listened “Ranbir, her and I” she said
Khanak knew who it was…
Dadi handed her the phone.
“Hey” he said..
“Aap?” she asked
“Who is this Ranbir?” he asked
“Some one Dadi wants me to meet” she said.. playing with a slippery strawberry…biting her lower lip to hide the smile
“A guy with a name like that........... I have nothing to fear” he concluded smugly much to his wife’s chagrin

Casa de la Buena Suerte (CASA II) Part 5


Casa II
Part 5
Mangal Kunj…
Dec 15th 2011
3 :31 AM
He pursued…… and closed the gap……
“Nahi” she said firmly..
“Khanak” he pleaded… drawing something unspeakable  with his toe on her calf… as she dodged
“When did you return?” (REALLY? At 3:30 in the morning?)
His voice pierced through her layers of snooze…. She moved subtly but did not answer…
He rolled her over….. on to his top… laughing under his breath
He always woke her… no matter what time he got to bed…. If she was in it…. He woke her!!
Her hair completely enveloped their two heads…. Forming a curtain… he squeezed her like a pillow….
They didn’t speak… she was still dozing on his chest… withdrew from touching his legs… they were still cold from the shower…
His face was all over her neck…. Ears… it rasped… and chafed… as she moaned…
She woke… fought….
She was wearing a frilly cotton A-line night shirt, above knee length….. his hands everywhere…
Undid clasp underneath “Fully clothed to bed?” he chuckled….
She pushed him away sliding off… his turn to be on her…. Pushed all her hair off her face….
“When did you return”
26 SECONDS after 8:18 PM” she answered…. Fiercely… just the way he liked it… in full detail…
He laughed deeply…
“Khanak” he pleaded, fingering her shirt… insistently
“Nahi” she said steadfastly…gasping for air under the onslaught...


Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Casa de la Buena Suerte (Home of Good Fortune)-4


Dec 15th 2011
Mangal Kunj
3:03 AM
She lay there face down… on her belly… one arm outstretchd on o his pillow…she usually slept on his side if he didn’t show up at nite.. but tonite she was on her on side…..
Her long rope lik braid… rested like a silk cord… it was secured with something sparkly at the end… he could tell…. He couldn’t see her face….. or her body…..
His hands tucked into his pockets…………….. the room had too many recess lights on… all along side where the wall met the ceiling………….. … “I hate darkness” “another word for “afriad” he would tease…
“Nahi” she would say firmly… but guiltily
He walked over to the shower…. Stripped took a needle hot one…. Rubbed his jaw… his eyes fell on the smiley face she had carved with a bunch of votive candles… on the sink counter…. A pair of red earrings lay on the side…. “her” stuff… not mixing with his…. He opened a couple of her Forest Essential jars… the ones that had been missing the last couple days…. “Main jaaon?” she had asked ever so politely…. In bed on the morning of Dec 12th
“Nahi” he had said firmly….
But she had gone…..
He rubbed the towel on his head…. Dragged it down his face…. It rasped on his jaw………….. did the nightly routine of brushing his teeth etc..
He walked to his closet, pulled a UMASS tee and some droopy shorts…. Walked to bed… threw his wet towel on it………… climbing in…… on her wrist lay a sunset orange red helmet bracelet, 18k gold and mother of peral set in green snail and oyster shell… he had bought for her from a exclusive jewelry store in Mahe Island… a store that combined materials from the earth and the ocean….
“Good luck charm” she had said… wearing it for the first time…
He gently lifted her hand… her fingers curled around his thumb… as she turned… her face was flushed… he slowly undid her braid………… tucked the sparkly twist tie in his pocket…………
She woke… startled…
“Aap?” she asked…
Turned away upset… burying her face in her pillow… freeing her silky mane from his hand…… putting a mile in between…
He pursued…… and closed the gap…… drowning in the midnite silk splattered all over his pillow
“Nahi” she said firmly. but hoarsely....
“Khanak” he pleaded laughing huskily at her tantrum...… drawing something unspeakable  with his toe on her calf… as she dodged

Casa de la Buena Suerte (Home of Good Fortune)--Part 3


Casa de la Buena Suerte (Home of Good Fortune)

Casa II
Part 3
Mangal Kunj
Malabar Hill
December 15th 2011
2:22 AM
He expected a quiet dark apartment…. When he let himself in, he found Dadi and Dad in one of the “lounge” areas in the sprwaling living room… his heart skipped a beat as he wondered where the wife was… “In bed, you idiot!” his brain reminded him…
Shaan:No bed time tonite?
Sunil:You mean this morning? (mocking)
Shaan:We had a excavation issue!
Sunil Isnt there always (an issue?)
Dadi did not even look at him, she was watching something on her ipad..
Shaan walked over to her sat by her
Sunil: You are early then?
Shaan: No it was taken care of… the geologist on board is a moron, the crew struck  a utility line… cut off natural gas pipeline.. choking supply to majority of Ulwe…
Sunil barely nodded, in concealed anger
Dadi: Have you eaten?
Shaan smiled “This always gets you talking?”
Dadi: have you eaten?” (flat)
Shaan:Why are you guys up so late? Where is Mom?
Dadi:I asked first..
Shaan: I ate at 8 with Rahat at Taj Mahal, Acquarius…
Sunil:Tumne Indian khaaya?
Shaan:I am not a snob Dad….
Sunil:Oh! Right…
Dadi: I just paged Hari Lal…
Shaan:I am not hungry, WHY are you guys up?
Dadi: Madhavi was returning… Mom ka flight canecl ho gaya, she is being rebooked on the first one in the morning
Madz was in Kerala conducting a “wellness” workshop
Shaan: Which one? (anxious)
Sunil: She said she called you at 7 and and then 9…
Shaan: Rahat and I were meeting with the Brihan Mumbai Asst Commissioner Gogte… all those encroachments sorrounding the Ulwe site… (serious)
Sunil: Good to know..
Shaan continued to ignore his Dad’s barbs……
Hari Lal showed up groggy eyed, but wheeling a cart laden with food…
“I just need a stiff drink Dadi”
She smacked him…. “Dadi banaakar de tumhe?”
Sunil shook his head at his son’s lack of manners…. Speaking about alchahol in front of the elderly
Shaan walked over to the bar fixed himself a SOR
Dadi:Khanak aa chuki hai
He stopped sipping… and stared…
“Was she planning not to?” (furious, but keeping a lid on it)
“Tumhe batakar gayi… Mr Pai ki beti ka engagement hai” Dadi was being patient
Sunil got up swiftly… unable to control his frsutration…
“I am off to bed Ma… will let you know after she checks in”
Dadi smiles
Shaan looks up at his room, the door is shut…
Dadi:Tum lene bhi nahi gaye use?
Shaan finishes his drink…. Opens the lids on the 4 bowls… scoops a couple spoonfuls into his mouth… shuts it back carelessly as it clanks
Dadi:Shhhhhhhhhhh so rahi hai… sab so rahe hain… Amogh bhi…
Shaan:I am going to bed also…
Dadi:Kal der se chale jao beta (coaxing)
Shaan:I cant…………….. Dadi… I have a meeting on site at 7…
Dadi is apalled…
Shaan scales the stairs two, three at a time and is up… opens the door to his room and shuts it….
Sunil walks back out…. “Aapne bataya usko promotion ke baare mein?”
Dadi shakes her head sadly… “Its her news beta” (softly)
Sunil:She was so happy and excited… warna kitni shaant rehti hai…
Dadi:Tumhari Hindi bhi achhi ho chali hai…
Sunil cracks a joke in Punjabi…
Dadi smiles fondly…
Dadi:Who bacha chahti hai, who chahti hai who time se ghar aaye, who chahti hai, yeh itna kaam mein na khoye…
Sunil:Even she loves her career… she is dedicated… but iski tarah? (looks up at the brat’s room)
Dadi: When he is home he wants her… (corrects herself hurriedly) hamesha who yahi rahe…
Sunil understands the reference…
“Do din se who engagement mein hai… isne usko ek phone nahi kiya hoga.
Dadi smiling conspiratorily “Good for her, she must be throwing a tantrum now”
Sunil: So chuki hogi ma who… uska fave pastime neend hai”
Dadi: Aur iska pastime… usko pareshaan karna
Dadi and Sunil both look worried… but manage a half smile..








CASA 2 Casa de la Buena Suerte (Home of Good Fortune)

Casa 2
Dec 14th 2011
Wednesday
8:14 PM
Ulwe, Navi Mumbai
Ajmera’s Project
Casa de la Buena Suerte (Home of Good Fortune)
Construction equipment roared and hummed at various places, the site was over 50 acres, “independent villa style home: pinnacle of luxury” Ajmera had launched it on Deepavali day with full page (first page) ads in all national and regional newspapers…
Sunil had derisively asked “WHAT is your ad budget? Do you know what one of these costs?”
Shaan had looked up at his Dad and smiled, “A few lakhs”
Akshay “It must have come out of the Sogni profits”
Shaan had gone back to reading Business India’s editorial
Shamim and Nachiket walked around a big puddle of slush… a pipe leak was dumping hundreds of gallons of water in what will later be a home…
They both wore hard hats and carried ipads…. Ipad like construction tablets..
“Where the hell is Gujral?” Nachiket barked
“Shouldn’t you know? You are the chief” Shamim yelled back
Nachiket stopped a site supe and enquired… the guy had no clue… Nachiket described Shaan… “Tall fair, hair combed back… perfect set of teeth… the twin crease”
Shamim chuckled “Like the guy is going to want to start dating him now”
Nachiket guffawed…
As his phone rang…
Shaan: Chief
Nachiket: Divine intervention…
Shaan:Thanks…
The sun was peeking after 5 days of incessant rains…
Nachiket: WHERE are you?
Shaan: With Rahat…
Nachiket flips to speaker phone
Nachiket:Is that Khanak’s new name?
Shaan:How did you know? (laughed)
Shamim: “The guy has her completely wrapped around his lil finger”
Shaan: Riiiight… (over hearing)
Nachiket: I did not say that..
Shaan:Whatever!
Nachiket: We are meeting the excavation crew in an hour.. any hopes, you can get here?
Shaan: In two maybe…??
Nachiket:That’s my man…Good...you can attend the midnite walk through with the us and the excavation crew…
Shamim:See you man!
Nachiket: Aap se milne ke liye hum bahut bechain hain…(in Marathi acented Hindi) (like Khanak would say?)(grinning)
Shaan:Sure! (shaking his head scornfully…)
He hung up on the call… “J’ai besoin de trouver mon mari” (French for “I need to find my husband”) in his wife’s soft voice rang in his ears… he smiled indulgently… tucking his phone in his pocket, as he sprinted to join Rahat and a Brihan Mumbai Babu they were feting this evening at lobby of the  Taj Mahal….




















Monday, October 29, 2012

Sigh!!! :))))))))))))))))))

OK I DID IT

I FINALLY DID.

Started  a new season of CASA

Lots of thoughts and ideas are mulling through my mind.....................
I am having so much fun with them...
Hope you will like it...

Thanks for reading...

IT GIVES ME... EXPONENTIAL JOY TO WRITE!!!

LOVE
ADITEE

CASA-- Redux-- :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))--Part 1

14th December 2011

Modi & Dastur
Wednesday
3:14 PM
Khanak hung up on her call, it was Bai, she wanted to know if she would visit Ahmedabad for a week, Dadi was not doing well, but she had just been promoted to Senior Architect/Designer at Modi Dastur this morning. It was an incredible opportunity, Ram’s trust in her abilities and her 60 hour weeks since she had returned to Mumbai could be assigned as the driver for the promotion.
She had called Ritu to gush when she got an email from Ram. It had come with a meeting invite with a subject “Navi Mumbai Project”
Shaan had been considering transitioning to Ajmera’s Navi Mumbai project.
Her heart had skipped a beat on seeing the invite. She was currently overloaded with the unfinished DLF Project in Gurgaon. But something about the mention of any thing associated with the man sent her heart barrelling like a storm surge…
She had picked up her phone and almost sprinted to Ram’s office
He was on the phone, he had grinned seeing her look of eagerness…
She had retracted and paused outside the door, bit her lower lip in embarrassment… “I will come back later” she spoke to her toes..
“Come on inMrs Gujral” he had invited
“Ram main Khanak hoon”
“I apologize, I forgot your first name” he winked, holding her elbow…
She waited until he shut the door “Are you putting me on the Navi Mumbai Project?”
“No I am promoting you” he had said, firmly..
Her gaze had flown to his in sheer shock… “Mujhe?”
“I don’t see any body else in the room”he quipped, amused
She had clamped her hand over her mouth… in shock…
“Mujhe?” she asked softly..
“Tumhe”he said with a faint Malayalam accent…
“I have to sit” she said trembling…
“It can be that bad” he had chuckled….
“Its worse… I am speechless”
“Not surprising actually” he had responded, fondly tapping her head, as he answered a call
She had sat there like a fool, staring down at the traffic 20 floors below…. She was reminded of her first day… nervous… afraid…
He hung up on the call…
“Do you want to work on Navi Mumbai?”
Umm…” she pondered, in her signature style
“Has Shaan figured those out yet?”
“What?”
“Those Umms… you say”
She turned crimson…
“Ritu has” she said softly…
“Ofcourse!”
He sent something to a printer, walked over to pick it up… handed it to her… “It comes with a raise, more like a cost of living adjustment” “You ofcourse don’t need any” he winked
“I do” she said seriously
Ram stared at her bent head as she read… “She must” he agreed with her silently
“Sonali college mein hai, Mehul aur Mitali jaayenge uske baad” she murmured…
“I havent seen a more self respecting gal in my entire life”
“Renuka is too” she offered
He smiled but chose not to disagree
She fingered her mangal sootra nerbously… “Ummm… I beter go”
“Thanks Ram” she said jumping out of her chair
“There will be arrears effective your anniversary date Khanak, it makes it easirer for benefits accounting to have it all in sync”
She nodded, with pride… “It was a raise of over Rs.2 lakhs per year, gross, after deductions she would land atleast Rs.10,000 per month, she was sure…
Her heart sang… she walked out, as he watched, calm, graceful, posied as ever…wearing a simple purple kurta and a heavily embriodered orange salwar…. She wore what appeared to be exquisite earriings in fire orange carnelian….
His admin waited and exchanged a smile… Khanak paused… and nodded.. smiled again… her glorious smile and walked away..
It was unexpected… with Dadi’s recent bypass, she was doing a lot of basic math on her way to work… wondering how to make Sonali’s “Surgical Nurse-I” class in January…
Pradeep had asked one day at a traffic intersection “ Aap padhai kar rahi hain?”
“Nahi main nahi Pradeepji” she had responded cryptically…