Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Casa de la Buena Suerte (Home of Good Fortune)-4


Dec 15th 2011
Mangal Kunj
3:03 AM
She lay there face down… on her belly… one arm outstretchd on o his pillow…she usually slept on his side if he didn’t show up at nite.. but tonite she was on her on side…..
Her long rope lik braid… rested like a silk cord… it was secured with something sparkly at the end… he could tell…. He couldn’t see her face….. or her body…..
His hands tucked into his pockets…………….. the room had too many recess lights on… all along side where the wall met the ceiling………….. … “I hate darkness” “another word for “afriad” he would tease…
“Nahi” she would say firmly… but guiltily
He walked over to the shower…. Stripped took a needle hot one…. Rubbed his jaw… his eyes fell on the smiley face she had carved with a bunch of votive candles… on the sink counter…. A pair of red earrings lay on the side…. “her” stuff… not mixing with his…. He opened a couple of her Forest Essential jars… the ones that had been missing the last couple days…. “Main jaaon?” she had asked ever so politely…. In bed on the morning of Dec 12th
“Nahi” he had said firmly….
But she had gone…..
He rubbed the towel on his head…. Dragged it down his face…. It rasped on his jaw………….. did the nightly routine of brushing his teeth etc..
He walked to his closet, pulled a UMASS tee and some droopy shorts…. Walked to bed… threw his wet towel on it………… climbing in…… on her wrist lay a sunset orange red helmet bracelet, 18k gold and mother of peral set in green snail and oyster shell… he had bought for her from a exclusive jewelry store in Mahe Island… a store that combined materials from the earth and the ocean….
“Good luck charm” she had said… wearing it for the first time…
He gently lifted her hand… her fingers curled around his thumb… as she turned… her face was flushed… he slowly undid her braid………… tucked the sparkly twist tie in his pocket…………
She woke… startled…
“Aap?” she asked…
Turned away upset… burying her face in her pillow… freeing her silky mane from his hand…… putting a mile in between…
He pursued…… and closed the gap…… drowning in the midnite silk splattered all over his pillow
“Nahi” she said firmly. but hoarsely....
“Khanak” he pleaded laughing huskily at her tantrum...… drawing something unspeakable  with his toe on her calf… as she dodged

10 comments:

  1. ohhhh how cute loool, there so sweet,
    I hope they remain together and not.seperate like season 1..
    but I know addite u won't write anything that wil spoil their relationship lool

    p.s. I'm the first tho comment yayy lool
    xxxx

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  2. OMG these cuties i cant wait for the next
    they were heading for the second honeymoon did they go or not
    and if they had then can u share some moments in the upcoming updates

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  3. thanks a lot Aditee for CASA2!! this was such a sweet part!! there can never be anything like CASA Shanak!! they are magical!!

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  4. The scuncie...long braid...Rose scented lotion with UMASS tees and colognes is BACK!

    I missed this so much!! And even now Casa has the kashish...your word play and descriptions of scenerios are so very written...
    He is late and she is sulking...good! Seems like she is now voicing it out now, I want her to tell him about the promotion so he can feel like a jerk. I so bet she wanted to tell him first. I realised one thing as well...well it's only just started is Khanak less gaurded emotionally during this season, as I want we to be and Shaan maybe more revolving.

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  5. They are really magic aditee, can't get over them how sweetly she asked mein jaaon and he said nahi hayeee!!!!!!!!!!! these two will kill mee one day with their sweetness
    i loved the way he undid her brand...... and her tantrums are so cute
    loved MR N MRS GUJRAL waiting for more to come

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  6. Uff! Aditeeee! *huggss*

    FINALLY! OMG! This is amazing! I missed everything about them! Her scuncie, his damp towels, his UMASS tee! And the people in the house! And more than anything, I missed these two!!!!

    I'm so so glad you're back!! :D :D

    Loved it, absolutely!

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  7. Amazing!! this makes me thrilled!!
    His damp towel on the bed once again, he's unshaven!! Hope Khanak doesn't throw him out of the bed!! LOL!!
    Haaye!! blue and pink lines!! makes me grin all the time!!
    His art on her calf!! sigh!!
    abb do din se door raha hain, toh he's unable to control himself, obviously...
    Loved it Aditee!! Thank you so much!!

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  8. the magic of blue & Pink lines are back :)
    loved the update Aditeee.......this was awesome

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  9. Awesome!!! So Shaan denied her permission but still Khanak went.. LOL :) she likes to infuriate him always and never misses a chance!!! but she had to go that engagement anyways..awww!! He woke her up even then..doesn't even scared of her for coming so late..what if she???

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  10. OMG how I missed the tootsie play!!!!! eeeeks. loved them, the update, and you !!!! Thanks aditee for starting CASA again!!!

    moving to update 5

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