Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Casa de la Buena Suerte (CASA II) Part 5


Casa II
Part 5
Mangal Kunj…
Dec 15th 2011
3 :31 AM
He pursued…… and closed the gap……
“Nahi” she said firmly..
“Khanak” he pleaded… drawing something unspeakable  with his toe on her calf… as she dodged
“When did you return?” (REALLY? At 3:30 in the morning?)
His voice pierced through her layers of snooze…. She moved subtly but did not answer…
He rolled her over….. on to his top… laughing under his breath
He always woke her… no matter what time he got to bed…. If she was in it…. He woke her!!
Her hair completely enveloped their two heads…. Forming a curtain… he squeezed her like a pillow….
They didn’t speak… she was still dozing on his chest… withdrew from touching his legs… they were still cold from the shower…
His face was all over her neck…. Ears… it rasped… and chafed… as she moaned…
She woke… fought….
She was wearing a frilly cotton A-line night shirt, above knee length….. his hands everywhere…
Undid clasp underneath “Fully clothed to bed?” he chuckled….
She pushed him away sliding off… his turn to be on her…. Pushed all her hair off her face….
“When did you return”
26 SECONDS after 8:18 PM” she answered…. Fiercely… just the way he liked it… in full detail…
He laughed deeply…
“Khanak” he pleaded, fingering her shirt… insistently
“Nahi” she said steadfastly…gasping for air under the onslaught...


12 comments:

  1. Sigh!!!! You know how much I missed the 'nahi 'umm' of you're Khanak and I revel in the feeling of shantanu always annoying and teasing her :)
    He just loves to annoy her and get his ways...I want Khanak to tell him about the promotion!! Lol! I lm more tempted to his reaction on that, I'm sure it's positive but maybe due to that and lack of time for each other might string in problems...let's see how you play it...I'm sure you have something good.

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  2. awesome blossom Aditee!!
    once again pink and blue lines!!
    her hair...his hands...his face...her sleep...bliss!!
    He finally woke her up, she's fighting though she revels in his touch!!
    I forgot to add this in the previous one, sunset orange red helmet bracelet, in Mahe island?? didn't they go for Seychelles??
    im not sure about the name though...
    Aditee, ek aur lik rahi ho na, please ek aur....

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  3. OMG! That 'Khanak' and her 'Nahi'! <3

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  4. awesome aditee :)
    *blush* he woke her and khanak and her nahi!!!!!!!! love the detail of time she gave him :D
    ayeehh!! hayeeeee!!!!!!!!
    blue n pink line always make me grin
    loved it

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  5. OMG i m blushing
    the way shan always says 'khanakkk' make my heart to beat faster
    my stomach churns all the time aye hayeeeeeeeeeee

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  6. when Shaan and Khanak are like this.........the racing of heart is uncontrollable!! still can't believe that CASA is back!! Mr. and Mrs. Gujral are the cutest........ and very, very addictive too!!

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  7. Dadi is so right its her time to throw tantrums now!!!
    Superb...Casa Shanak makes us craxy really.
    your way of telling us makes it real & visible. simply awesome!!
    he woke her up ..i loved her answer.
    blue & pink lines as always wonderful *blush*

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  8. Aditee thanks for deciding to continue with CASA. I have been eagerly waiting for CASA 2 :)

    I am so happy to see Blue & Pink are back with a bang. It seems Mr. & Mrs. Gujral are still having their shares of romantic and egos' tussles. Wondering when little Gujral will be in the picture as Shan is not ready for any child yet. Please continue soon.

    Thanks once again :D

    Karishma

    PS: Please don't forget "SOL"! I apologise for not commenting on "SOL" regularly as I had been busy with personal stuffs. I hope to leave my comment regularly if everything is well at my side :)

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  9. absolutely loved tbe update,
    yh like everyone says yayyy the pink and blue lines are back loool
    xx

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  10. Awesome!!! Shaan surely gets what he wants!!! *blush*.. :)

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  11. Aah.. the strength in the blue and even more stronger pink. Yet we know who wins the battle.

    Reading part 6 now...

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