Wednesday, December 11, 2013

Part 195


She sat down, on Dai’s bed leaning… on the headboard..Dadi, as if on cue walked in with a worried look… she smiled a half smile…
Dadi:Are you OK beta?
Khanak: hmmm… I don’t think I am pregnant! (indignant)
Dadi:Who said anything about a baby? (sad)
Khanak wept…”mujhe laga aap is liye khari thi, bathroom kea age”
D:That’s sad… I care for you puttar…
K:I know… I am sorry..
D:How do you know you are not pregnant?
(smiling)
K:Because my cycle is 29 days and I am on the 22nd…
Dadi breathed hard… sighing… “It will happen” “I am sure”
“Not with Shaan” Khanak was angry…
D:Shhhhhhhhhhhhhh… gandi baat nahi puttar…
K: I am just stating facts…
D:What happened to the quiet resilient… restrained girl that used to be?
K:Its all Shaan’s fault!!!
D:He is insufferable…
Pradyun walked in… “Are you sick?”
HL walked in with lemon juice… and a couple of other kind…
Khanak: Apparently (smiling)
Dadi:You sit by her beta… I am going to check on dinner…
Shaan walked in “Whats wrong? Dadi are you OK?”
D:Apni woti ko pooch zara…
Khanak didn’t look at him…
Shaan:What did you feed her in the slum you took her to..
Prad:Dadiji, he is nasty (heavy brit accent)
D:Are you guys teenagers? (disgusted)
S:Whats wrong?
He sat by her, reached for her hand…
K:I think I may be pregnant! (provoking the devil)
S:On your 22nd day?
Dadi pointed something to Pradyun, he was off looking thru her chest of drawers…
Husband and wife shot each other their most  powerful fireballs with their eyes…














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8 comments:

  1. jalisDecember 11, 2013 at 8:07 AM

    awww shan knows everything thoda sa bhi shock reaction nahi :(
    but love the update and dadi
    hehehhe love khanak she said dadi clearly she is not pregnant but hubby darling ko satane ke liye jhut bola but hubby darling ko fool banana easy nahi ;)
    plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon :)

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  2. pooDecember 11, 2013 at 8:07 AM

    Oh..No..Khanak is not pregnant..:( Is she unwell? Shaan is such a jerk..Cant give happiness to her which she wanted the most..Pradyun is so caring..:)

    Even now he is scolding Pradyun..lol..:D Khanak joked but he knows she is not pregnant..He knows even her date..lol..

    At least Shaan can buy her a puppy for a time being..

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an interesting update!!! ♥

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  3. KrithikaDecember 11, 2013 at 9:56 AM

    Loved the update Aditee i knew she isn't pregnant and Shantanu remembers the dates always!!
    Perfect question for Pradyun
    Want him to take care of her in his own way..
    Eagerly waiting for next update
    Love u always <3 <3

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  4. UnknownDecember 11, 2013 at 11:10 AM

    omg!!! he remembers the date like a pro lol :P
    awww she seems so heart broken but maybe she is never knw lol!
    aditi is week chote chote bomb pank rahi ho lol! i cant wait for the next new after the fire balls lol!

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  5. UnknownDecember 11, 2013 at 12:21 PM

    what is happening.......its like this two updates gave us a heartattach regardless of how small they are :-)

    waiting for the next.......i loved his concern though want to see more of that side of this man :-)

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  6. Shalini_SDecember 11, 2013 at 3:55 PM

    Shaan is insufferable as Dadi said.. he knows everything else but not what Khanak wants... i just hope Khanak would stand up tall and demand..

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  7. UnknownDecember 11, 2013 at 4:33 PM

    He cares for her! He is possessed with her but just doesnt ever listen to her :(
    Its kinda heartbreaking to see Khanak so vulnerable especially when she is so sure about everything else except her own life

    Thanks Aditeee....Please update soon!

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  8. sudhagudaDecember 17, 2013 at 11:08 PM

    Khanak is not pregnant and she is heart broken.
    Shaan remembers her date!! but not what Khanak wants



















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