Dadi squirmed some more "This is just not a working plan, what was I thinking, we should just let Shaan know" her mind warned....
Dadi: Beta she sounded happy and cheerful when she spoke with me
Madz:Oh yes, ofcourse... she was going to leave correct?
Shaan: Hey how are ya?
Ritu: Hi! Mr Gujral, aap kaise ho?
Shaan:Where is Khanak?
Ritu dropped her phone...
Picked it up again "Kya matlab?" she croaked...
Shaan:She wont answer her phone AND she seems to have quit her job..
Shaan sounded very calm.... steely calm....
Ritu:Really, uski naukri to uski jaan hai... mera matlab... tumhare baad..
Shaan:Ritu, she just dropped off the planet... do u know...
Ritu:Gujral....(almost blurting) aise mat kaho...
Shaan:So do YOU know then?
Ritu: Nahi yaar...
Shaan: Will u ask her to call me I know she will call you SOON...
Ritu nodded... and hung up...
Sat down and looked sad....
Sunil: Agar aapko nahi bola, Ritu ko nahi bola to yeh ladki gayi kahan...
Dadi: Shaan.. will you sit down?
Shaan:WHY? Do you have some catastrophic news?
He was quiet.... not revealing anything...
Dadi:She cant live without you, you know that...
Sunil: Ma... he drives her crazy I know... but he obesesses over her also (grudging)
Madz:There cannot be another man can there?
Sunil:Madhavi... Is that what comes to your mind?
Shaan looked at his mother... not amused....
Madz:WHY will she disappear...
Dadi:She has NOT disappeared....
Shaan immediately looked at Dadi... SOMETHING about the way Ritu and his Dadi were reassuring him... made him VERY suspicious....
He wondered WHAT his wife was upto...
Stubborn as a rock.... "Shantanu, Nahi" were her favorite two words....
He couldnt remember HOW their conversation had ended before she boarded the plane from Ahd....
"I am going out to dinner with Bhabhi" she flung at him...
"Not if I am home before that"
"Mujhe maloom hai aap ki baat mein koi sach nahi hai" her chaste Hindi killed him every time...
"Khanak" he groaned..
"Main jaaoon?" she had asked...
"Nope" he told firmly..
hmm.. so he has started doubting Dadi and Ritu... getting interesting.. Madz should shut up I guess... giving wrong answers..
ReplyDeleteLoved it!!! ♥ Dadi should say the truth to Shaan..She is risking everything..As expected Ritu didn't help him..
ReplyDeleteDid Madz just said that? She is impossible..Ugh!
Good..Shaan is thinking well..Come on Shaan..Follow your leads..Catch Dadi when she is vulnerable..
Loved the pink and blue lines! ♥
Khanak escapade made me to reminisce the part in RBO where Shaan goes in search of her after Kuch Khaas seq..:) Sigh!
Looking forward and thanks for writing a superb update! :)
thanks so much aditee for the rocking update :)))
ReplyDeletehe is smart enough to see dadi is so calm n something is not right with this whole problem lol! i knew he would find out somethin is wrong with the whole disappearing act mujhe lagta hai he might let dadi n khanak play dis game for a while till she comes out herself n tells him :(((
uff mads needs to stop giving her opinions its so baseless and annoying cant wait to see how his mind wonders to why she has left but it looks like he wont ebe able to find any reason :P :P
Oh god! The pink and blue lines..
ReplyDeleteIm amazed abt him being calm and quiet..that's so not him right?!
She didn't tell ritu also? That's bad..
Seriously? Another guy? Whats wrong with madhavi?
Awesome update aditee :)
Waiting to know when and how he will find about her:p
Continue soon :)
awwww so apt you cant leave neither shan nor khanak :)
ReplyDeletemads has crossed her limits i m sure she will be more upset than shan on the news khanak is pregnant :P
how come ritu is so calm ha i thought rity will scream on the phone heheheheeehe dadi ke bare me toh malum hian but kya ritu also knows about this ?
awww sunil is so worried so is shan
hmm nothing can be hided from him
mujhe toh lgt hain he will find khanak the next day itself woowoww :D
love it update soon aditee :D
his quietness is plotting something too.....he is a inkling dadi and ritu are aware.....wondering if khanaks move will be the worse of him....it looks to me the plan will have the opposite effect. .....thanks aditi :-)
ReplyDeleteLoved it :-)
ReplyDeleteHe suspects both Ritu & Dadi i am excited to know how he will get to know & find her!
I am enjoying casa as always :-)
Thanks Loads of love <3 <3
love this, hope he finds her soon
ReplyDeleteAditee loved the update
ReplyDeleteDadi should tell truth to Shantanu as anyway her plan is not working with Shantanu and Sunil.
Shantanu called Ritu and she didn't tell him anything as expected
Madhavi's comments on Khanak is annoying
Sunil is worried for Khanak and Shaantanu too but I surprised with his calmness....... what is he up to?
Shantanu is so intelligent. Something about Dadi and Ritu way of talking to him made him to doubt about his wife disappearance.
Waiting eagerly to see will Dadi tell her grandson truth or will Shantanu himself finds Khanak
Waiting for next update
this is really getting interesting and Shaan is on the right path..........but don't know why his "steely calmness" is bothering me.........i wish he comes to know about Khanak very soon!! and Madhavi comments are very irritating......lovely part Aditee!!
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