Part 46
Mangal Kunj
6 PM ish
Dadi calls her grandson to tell him she has
reservations at some spa Ray wanted to go to. Its for his wife and cousin, at 7
PM.
His eyes danced with a “Clever comeback” when she
indicated he was her husband…
She acted like she didn’t even say it…
She informs him of being gone for a while with
some friends…
Shaan brings family home, and is in the study
trying to get some work done, she has to unpack and get started but doesn’t want
to.
Ray has plans to meet friends before her spa
appointment, two Mumbai girls she met in first class on the plane…
Prad leaves, returns... leaves..
The house is quiet, she plays FM in his room, and
begins to prune her roses… calls Ritu, leaves a message,
“Men are hunters, they are constantly “hungry”,
you can wake them up from the deepest sleep if you promise ---, they have a one
track mind”
Khanak was the “experienced” one of the two, she
married before Ritu did, but didn’t have explosive stories to narrate from her
bedroom
“Just watch how he behaves” “Tum do din ek doosre
se door raho” “You can see it in his eyes” “They are persistent”
Kritik and her were made for each other, Ritu was
aggressive and demanding and so was Kritik… their union was heated…
“They want to some how touch you” “They don’t care
whos home, where you are” “What you are doing, they get home and want to take
you to bed”
Ritu and her had giggled like teenagers
“try stopping after a kiss”she will warn
ominously
“I have to write a “tell all” bookabout you and
Kritik” she would say
“Yours would be a SERIES, Mystery”Ritu would shut
her up..
She calls Bai…
Scolds her for telling Dadi she wasn’t eating or
sleeping too well the whole week. She was sure Dadi told her husband….
She is happy Ritu is visiting, wants to know if
Aada should courier some snacks for her, Khanak reassures her Bai that she
would make some when Ritu is ready to leave.
Bai worries if she should be doing all that in
the “posh kitchen”
Bai as usual ends with her coaxing and urging to
make her talk more…
“Hmm” she says nodding peacefully.
Every station is playing some kind of a countdown
list for the year, her fave “Sach “sach teri nazrien” plays… she sets the
clippers on the wrought iron table and sits down on the swing… gently rocking
it…
Having no clue her husband had come in to get
something, he watches her quietly…
There is a smile on her face… almost…
She has changed into a red kalamkari salwar and a
white chikan kurta kohl lined her eyes….. her hair was tied on her head with a
silver claw clip… it had bells on its end, each time she swayed it tinkled… he
wondered where she got her accessories…
He hungered for her, their eyes had said that to
each other at the theatre… she had enough pride to cause her to self destruct…
anger bubbled up inside…
They had been away from each other for over two
weeks… he wanted to pick her up and carry her to bed……….
His phone rang… his work phone… “Gujral” he said
waiting to meet his wife’s gaze…
She turned around startled… he approached her…
Heat flowed to her cheeks turning it crimson…
He stood near the swing blocking her, she stood
holding the brass rope….
He talked… to a guy Khanak thought… he spoke of
some approvals, some design flaws…
Her left arm/hand was behind her back…
He reached… to her shock, bringing it, she held
tight… “Shantanu” she said… fighting him
“I will call you back” he said.. into the phone,
ending the call,
“Early flight?” he asked, as she fought him…
“I” she muttered…
He enjoyed the pursuit… he had told her that many
times…
“Tum to teen haft eke liye gayi thi na?” mocking…..
“Haan”bothered.. “Tabhi maine unpack nahi kiya,
kal shaadi attend karke Monday ki subah”
She heard him grunt, as he powered off the phone
threw it on the swing… picking her up…….
She kicked the clippers to the floor…the roses
rubbed his back……
“Wha” she began… undoing his arm from under her
waist… he grabbed and held her fingers.. her left hand was useless… it was
pinned between his chest and hers……the bells on her claw clip tinkled as if
warning her………
“You are drunk” she said furiously…
“Its 6” he admitted scathingly, dropping her on
the bed…imprisoning her with his body........... as she flailed…
She wore some gorgeous chunky silver jewelry…he
opened his lips on her collar bone… feeling them tasting them...…
“You are drunk” she concluded… pushing him
“Shantanu” she pleaded
He kissed her fully……. She was right, he tasted
like SOR….......... HEAVEN AND sor… a sob escaped… an agonized...... accusing........ pleasurable..... sob…
as he continued to plunder…
so finally he grabs her and kisses her lol, guess Ritu was right!
ReplyDelete*Sighhh*
ReplyDelete*thud*
Okay, now that I am back.
My brain is not willing to scrutinize even the Ritu message/flashback left me in a mushy pool. Lol!
All I have to say! Applauds to you for writing the sensual parts in authentic manner.
It is rare.
Few things I actually enjoyed...after ages got a visual description of Khanak’s clothing and jewellery.
I always find it fascinating whenever you describe maybe it connects me back to India :)
I like how you added ‘he enjoyed the pursuit more’ or something on those lines.
Crazy or what! I find it immensely romantic...reminds me of the actual pursuit.
‘The moment to phone is switched off it was her cue’
I’m using a similar line from Casa on us today. We should have got the idea what this guy was up-to :D
Ohgosh! Is she going to cry?
Bechaari! She can accuse him now...that’s what she does the best at the bed ;)
@Shama;
Told ya :P
He will ravish he the moment he gets. Lol! He has no-self control over himself when it comes to her.
Agla part kab?! Pretty soon please :)
^Heyyy Sonam! :D
DeleteHaha! Yes! But I'm having this feeling that somebody might knock on the door! Remember they have an appointment? Or I HOPE! I dont want them to make up before 12! :P :P
AWWWW LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT
ReplyDeleteafter the kiss i m unbale to tell anything now *sigh*
his coming to swing get hold of her hand rest....... i understood what was to follow next OMG thank u for this waiting for more want more please update very very soon :)
P.S. I forgot to mention! Make him speak in hindi more! Its cute...I like how he speaks hindi with her. Kinda reminds me of his allure towards her hindi...how he is always blown by her!
ReplyDeleteloved it, loved it, loved it.
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that was mindblowing!! loved it!!want more, kyunki dil abhi bhara nahin!! thanks a lot Aditee for writing such "heavenly" stuff!!
ReplyDeleteGhoosshhh! That was indeed a THUD moment! ^_^ Sighhh!
ReplyDeleteHe cant hold on, and resist himself if she's around! That never happens! How is every glance, every gesture,every touch, every caress..brings happiness and arouse her completely! Sigh!
Aww..! The girl's crying! She's sad, mad and disappointed! I have a feeling that Ray or somebody might knock on the door for the SPA appointment, and She'd have to leave..and this cold war would prolong!
Actually I want it to extend! :P I don want them to make-up before the clock strikes 12 the next day! ;) Though, he's loosing it now itself! :P
Let her sleep in Ray's room..and let him miss her! ^_^ OMG! I remember those moments..he used to sleep on her side..holding her clip or something! And that used to be UTTER cute! <3 They crave for each other, like nothing else! When they're together..nothing else matters! Sighhh!
Aaj ek aur mil sakti hain pleasee???
^^Yikes.
DeleteWOW. tum ne pura next part apne analysis mein likh diya :P lol!
Eeeeeeks! I remember! When ritu stayed over, he slept on her side and during the separation with her claw clip on the side of the pillow. Subtle gestures...sighhh!
Ray tho gayi! I can see him curse left and straight. I think he'll might worry as she was crying. He hates to see her cry as far as I know.
You know the haldi appointment completely whisked out of my brain.
It took me good 5 mins to compose and write about this part...very evoking!
Haha! I actually dont want them to be making out before the new year, so cooking up my own reasons!! :P lol!
DeleteAnd it should be a 'Is raat ki subah nahi', where they'll talk about random stuff all the night..as they've been apart for an entire week, and how torturous it was staying away from each other! ^_^ She might not accept it directly and continue to tease him..but He will say that! :)
Lol! Bechare ke saare cousins ek jaise! :P haha!
Eeeekkss! YUP! He HATES to see her cry! Remember once he told, 'Hit me, punch me, but please dont cry' Sighhh! Ghoosshh, this guy cant get more adorable! <3
Awwwwww....you make it sound so CUTE in the way you just described the whole 'night talk'. Par Ritu is coming over! I <3 her! Finally she makes the visual appearance in their lives.
DeleteYeahh...yeah that's why I remember he hates seeing her cry, actually most guys get uncomfortable when a girl is sentimental or crying. lol!
He might not show it...but wounder over the fact what made her cry. Maybe he knows already :D He has a sharp brain to even notice mundane things.
Yup! Ritu is one of the most important soul in Casa! Her present has always been awesmome! :D She acts as 'referee' between the two! lol!
DeleteHaha! True that! They get clueless as in what to do and how to console! lol!
I LOVE that about him! He never leaves a thing unnoticed when its about her! How CUTE is that! Its like finding lil-lil stupid things about her, also gives him pleasure and he loves being a 'watcher'!
Whenever she sobbed and complained..he let her do that! Accepted all of it, as he felt terrible watching her cry!
Sighhh!
Ohhh accha! So Khanak will sleep with Ritu! OMG! Yesss! :D
DeleteNow that would be FUN! ;)
Loved all 42,43,44,45,46 parts awesome :)
ReplyDeleteWaiting 4 next part!
Update soon...........
waiting for Ritu.. the thoughts of Khanak were awesome.. and Shaan just proved it...
ReplyDelete'Clever comeback' indeed!!:D
ReplyDeleteWaiting for final show down;)
Khanak's SPA treatment into the air, her hubby is ready to give the treatment now;)
'Heaven', this reminded me of their first kiss after the separation!!
Loved it Aditee:D
waiting for more and more:D
Loved it Aditee.. This was mindblowing he couldn't be away from her any longer.. Khanak knew he was drunk she tried pleading but couldn't i want them to talk now tonight.. I guess no one will disturb as Dadi knows her brat is home.. Eagerly waiting for next part :-)
ReplyDeleteThank u so much..
Loads of love always <3<3
Wonderful!!! Loved it!!! Finally Shaan spoke abt her trip and they are back to normal..He is drunk though..LOL:D Is Ray gonna come and knock the door??? :P
ReplyDeleteLooking forward and thanks for writing..:)
Loved it Aditee. Liked ur description their behaviour in movie. Also liked the chat betwn two friends. finally he kissed her. both are really cute. ur writing is really good. the way u describe the minutes, its like everything happening in front of my eyes. waiting for next
ReplyDeleteLoved the update, too good. Shan's conversation
ReplyDeleteW/doc is priceless.