Dec 30th 2011
Monday
8:08 PM
Mangal Kunj
Dadi:Kidhar hai?
Ritu:Mujhe laga AAPKO pata hoga Dadi
Dadi:I was out at the Duggals all day beta…
Ritu:I called her when I left Mamiji’s at 5 PM,
she said she was in a meeting.. aaj to chhutti thin a uski?
Madhavi: I thought so… (confused)
Khushboo: His workaholic bug has bitten her
(shudders)
Pradyun:She is at work dadeee?
Ray:Great! We were going to go to Linking Rd for
shopping
Nandu Maasi: CALL HER, people!
Shaan walks in…
Nandu:Dono humse peechha chhudakar, Oberoi Towers
chale gaye honge… he looks so well rested (laughs)
Madhavi:On the contrary, Nandu…
Nandu:Didi… lets wait for her
They all stare at the open door…
Pradeep walks in with a bunch of blue prints and
a case…
Shaan:Where is Kritik?
Ritu:Oopar, apne friend se baat kar raha hai,
MERI friend ko kya kiya tumne Gujral?
Shaan is not amused…
He goes to the bar and pours himself a drink, his
hair is tousled…
Nandu:I told ya.. the guy was busy!
Madhavi giggles…
Sunil: Ofcourse he was busy, isne mujhe ek chhoti
si gudiya promise kii hai
Ritu:REALLY UNCLE?
Shaan sulks “Pfffttt!” gulps…
Sunil: kahan hai gudiya ki ma?
Ritu and Pradyun and Madhavi all laugh out loud…
Shaan:Sound like a soap Dad!
His Dad raises his empty glass, Shaan refills it
with Scotch and throws some ice in…
The men are having a good time, Akshay and Kritik
join in…
Dadi frets about dinner… calls Khanak… no
response
Her Bai calls Ritu…
Ritu chats for a while… “Aap uske var se baat
karengi?”
Her Bai is shocked…
Ritu just blindly hands the phone….
Bai:Ummm Khanak?
Shaan:Main Shaan…
Bai:Kaise ho beta?
Shaan:Good… Thanks Aun… (stops)
Bai:Khanak hai waha?
Shaan:Ummm… (looks everywhere) nahi..
Whispers to Dadi, “Where is she?”
Dadi: You are asking ME?
Shaan:Did she go to work?
Ritu:Ladna baad mein, pehle Bai se baat karo!
(whispers)
Shaan:Umm.. she is at wor(stops) shaayad office
mein hai
Bai: Kal shaadi mein gayi?
Shaan:Haan
Bai: Aaj subah phone aaya uska, main Dadi ko
lekar check up ke liye gayi (Bai mutters half the words in Gujju)
Shaan is upset with his wife, tired… frustrated
with gridlocks over work issues, the Gujarati almost sends him over the edge…
Shaan: Can I ask her to call? Usko call karne ko
kahoon?
Bai:Kal Hanuman ji ka 16 mangal chhe..
Shaan:Err!
Bai: Beta usko keha foon karegi..
Bai is clueless… she has no idea what to say and
how to speak to her impatient angry young son in law… Sooraj would listen… tell
her about his day… ask about local news… discuss Narendra Modi… this young man…
was restless and sullen…
Shaan:Haan kahoonga…
Bai:Aana ghar, tumne usko bheja, par lene bhi
nahi aaye! (almost fully in Gujarati)
Shaan: Yes.. haan…mujhe kaam tha
Bai:Milne aana (polite)
Shaan: Jee! (spontaneously… his wife’s fave word)
Just as she entered…….. in a turquoise kurta and
an orange salwar…she wore lots of chunky silver jewelry… like she was heading
to an art show with the artsy crowd… extra kohl lined her eyes… her bindi was a
kohl arrow…her wrist was in a cast…
Her eyes were unwittingly drawn to him, as she
hid her wrist in the folds of her chunky mirrorwork orange dupatta , he stood
there drinking… holding the phone to his ear… long after Bai had hung up…
Ritu was flirting with Kritik
Pradyun rushed to her “HERE you are.. we were
worried…”
She looked at her husband and said softly “I
almost believed that”
Eeeekkkssss!!! u updated:D
ReplyDeletethanks a ton:D
HA! is that a taunt from her, as he didn't go with her for doc's appointment??
Loved it aditee:D
He's upset with her, hope they clear it soon...
is her wrist broken?? hope not...
Waiting for next one:D
i guess, its night over there, so a happy night for you:D
my afternoon is vibrant now, as you updated:D
Lovely Aditee awesome parts :-)
ReplyDeleteI am loving every bit of it!!
Her entry was perfect and pink line haaye..
Shantanu talking to bai was very well written
She has gone to the doc x ray appointment and work he went to the site..
I would love to read Shantanu's thoughts or feelings when she said the pink line in previous part he got angry and left..
Eagerly waiting for next part!!
Thanks a lot :-)
Love u always <3<3
Awesome!!! Loved it!!! So Khanak went alone for X-Ray?!! ShaNak pushing each other every time..He is so angry on her and so does she on him!!! Loved Shaan's conversation with Khanak's bai..:)she too compares him with Suraj..Shaan is poles apart from Suraj!!!
ReplyDeleteLooking forward and thank you so much for updating again today..:)
Lol! Nandu maasi and gang! :P I love em! <3 This family exactly gives us a flavor of that punjabi roudism! ;) :D
ReplyDeleteOh! The guy's frustrated! Day started bad, work probs..and she has gone to work with her injured wrist! There are plenty of reasons for him! Whatsoever,I knew he wouldn yell at bai or smthn..and he would be patient..! :) And the guy now knows Gujju, though in splits! ;) But WHEN will he speak!? I cant wait! :D
Now let her have a chat with pradyun, THAT would help him yell! :P
Pink line! <3
Okayy..so new year's night is FINALLY here! :D Will they atleast now talk abt the issue, or it will they continue the verbal fight? If they have a talk, or she talkin to him about her responsibilities..something she've been doing always..and he listenin to them all..patient, letting her vent it out!! That would make it 'a night to remember'! :)
Heyyy youu! How have you been? :)
DeleteNice one...Maybe she'll might have her little vent out when she is drunk :D I'm sure she will never be guilty for what she does.
I though ki pink line was for him, indirect way of her saying 'oh, you didnt make it to the appointment, I thought you were worried' lol!
I guess, his frustration on her led him not to go with her and in return she went to work. Its like the push and pull game.
Oh, forgor Prad, I'm really loving how Aditee is describing their clothing these days...so elegant!
P.S. Aditeeee update sooon! Their fights are getting fiery and exciting!!!
And I forgot to write this, his involvement with her parents is really cold. I must say arrogant.
DeleteHe doesn't make the effort or anything, every time they'll call his in a hurry to get off. And meaning by effort I don't expect him to have long conversations or anything, at least abit of sincerity.
Loved da update nice :)
ReplyDeleteLovely pink line
Update soon!!
loved the update :)))
ReplyDeletei really dont think she has the rights to crib!! wake up Khanak!! soon...
ReplyDeleteyeah she got them all worried, hope Shantanu gets her back later and she wakes up from the impression that they don't care
ReplyDeletegot to read two back to back updates and both of them were superb!! trying to figure out who's at fault for their fights is not possible at all as both of them are right in some ways and again both of them are wrong in some ways........dono ziddi......but their romance and passion surpasses every thing!!
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