December 29th 2011
Sunday
Mangal Kunj
10:14 AM
There is a knock on the door, Khanak stirs in
sleep, Ray is sleeping by her, they both had returned from the spa around
midnite, her husband was nowhere to be seen when she had gone to the room to
change, she had taken a a couple naps here and there during the day, she was
ready to be knocked out…
Ray suggested they should watch a movie in the
home theatre in the rec room, she convinced her to do that in Ray’s room, “you
too bhabhee” she pleaded… the house was quiet and Ray was shrill and chirpy, to
hush her up she had agreed, but lasted 20 minutes….
Ray… maybe a half hour…. The movie played and the
TV auto shut off an hour after…
The knock….
Khanak: I am not getting up, aap uthiye!
She opened her eyes to peek, the room was smaller
the window was behind the bed… no balcony… she sat up startled…
Hurried to open it… her wrist was wrapped in a
white crepe bandage now… the tan bandage lay some where under their bed…
She opened the door groggily, it was HL
The smile flashed “Bhabhiji,…”
Khanak:Bus aadha ghanta? (pleads)
HL smiles knowingly… scratches his head… “Who Mummiji
ne”
Khanak is wide awake… “Koi kaam hai”
HL:Nandu Maasi aur Mummiji Duggalji ke yahan
Vivaan ji ke haldi ke liye ja rahi hai, poocha aap chalengi”
Khanak realizes there is a wedding tonite… “Nahi…
main so jaaoon”
HL grins, “Who”
K: Hmmm?
HL: Dadi ne kaha aapko Pradeep ko bhejna hai
airport? Rituji ke liye?> (he is all smiles, since he adores Khanak’s best
friend)
K: Main to late ho jaaoongi… (worried)
HL:Jee, main Pradeep ko keh doonga
Khanak is wide awake… wonders where the husband
is…
Follows HL, shutting the door behind her
The wet towels on the neatly made bed, tell her
he had been in the room moments ago, she
picks it up… hangs them to dry in the service verandah…
Rushes through her routine, brush shower…. Hair…
wears a lime green flowing chiffon skirt with a mauve pattern… with a mauve cap
sleeve blouse with lace on the top half………
Dadi greets her when she heads to the table after
her quick pooja….at 11ish…
D:How is the hand..
K:Abhi dard hai…(sad)
D: How come nobody else got hurt?
K:Because I don’t know how to walk (bites her
lower lip)
D: I assigned you a helper…
K: He completely takes over (oblique)
D:Some times you should allow that
K:Hmmm (not convinced)
D:Itni khuddaari kis kaam ki puttar?
K looks at Dadi solemnly…
Dadi serves her various things, toasted bagel,
bite size muffins…
K:Ghar par sab kahan hai?
D:SABKA to mujhe pata nahi… Haan madhavi, Nandu,
Khushboo, Amogh haldi mein, Sunil aur Akshay, kisi Taiwanese se milne…
K:Aur Pradyun?
D:SO raha hai..aalsi
Khanak giggles conspiratorily… “Dadi usko khoob
padhna padta hai college mein, bechaara”
D:Tu jisdi woti hai, osde waste bhi thodi reham
rakh.
K looks at Dadi confused…
D:Save some sympathy for that husband…he spent
the nite at work… I think..
Khanak is furious, just shovels her fruit into
her mouth…
D:Ladna band karo… kaam par dhyaan kam… mujhe ek
nanhi si poti…(frustrated)
Ritu:WHERE is the band Dadi?
D:Lo jee aa gayi nautanki (laughing)
Ritu runs… crashes into Khanak… they hug and moan…
and groan…
K:SO GOOD to see you… Ritz
R:Not quite Mystery!
K:Wwwhy?
R:Haath ko kya hua hai?
K:Where is Kritik?
R:Teri jaan aur meri jaan saath saath hain…
K is confused
Shantanu walks in with Kritik
R:Tera naya driver bahut hot hai!
Dadi: Naya driver nahi kaafi saalon se hai
Shaan smirks
K:Oh! Really? (looking straight at her husband)
hot as in sexy? Or sweaty?
S: What ever floats your boat… (murmurs)
Ritu and Kritik are chatting with Dadi…. While the
“driver” and the “damsel” check each other out…
ritus here finallly some fun between all four amd shanak looool
ReplyDeletebabe ek aur update because u didnt update yesterday loooool
xxx
yayay ritu is here ab aayega maja
ReplyDeleteye plz i agree with aasma ek aur :)
Wow!!! Loved everything!!! Shaan went to pick up Ritu and Kritik..:) how sweet of him!!! Khanak must be in cloud 9 as Ritu is back..:D Its gonna be one of the best New Year for Khanak!!!
ReplyDeleteLooking forward and thanks for writing..:)
Loved it Aditee :-)
ReplyDeleteDriver and Damsel perfect names!!
Love them both always.. <3<3
Ritu and Kritik are there it's going to be fun!!
Excited for the next part..
Thank u :-)
Loads of love <3<3
Finalllyyy! Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteA day without Casa feels incomplete.
Rituuuuuuuu! Yayyyyy! Lets see ...what she dhaamal she brings up this time :P
I’m sure you have something unpredictable this time as well....wedding, fun and Prad :D
And Dadi’s Punjabi makes me feel homely... reminds me of how my family interacts a few of Punjabi lines there and here when either a point needs to be noted.
The ending was crackling...You sense the sizzling tension between the both.
It a turn on for the reader, JUST to imagine them checking each other out.
And
That is your most precious asset, keeping to reader to urge to read more.
Eagerly waiting for the next,Update soon please:)
Wowwww! Thanks Aditee! :D
ReplyDeleteSo, its finally HIM she talks about in sleep, while before it used to be Ritu or Bai! I LOVED it! :D
WOW! Ritu is finally here!!! :D I SO missed her presence! Its awesome to have her back! :D
OMG! Haha! LOVED the last lines! Great as always! :) <3
This is going to be SO MUCH fun! :D Every important soul of Casa is here, and a celebration coming! Ahh....I cannot wait! :D
Continue sooooon!
Lovely Aditee
ReplyDeleteKhanak ask about pradyun agar shaan waha hota ta
kya expression hoti uski lolzzzzzz!!!!!!!
dadi want nanhsi si poti heheheh!!!!!!! ask shaan dadi ;)
wow!!!!!!!!!!Ritu n Kritik has come now it will more fun
can't wait to read the next part
Khanak n Ritu hug n little conv was awesome
omgeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! dadi is funny
" Naya driver nahi kaafi saalon se hai." loved it
wow!!!!!!! nice name Driver n Damsel
driver is in need very hawt!!!!!!! n Damsel is sexy too good
update soon
beautiful update aditee, was missing ritu and khanak's interaction. now both are together, new year is going to blast i think. so sweet of shaan, he went to pick up ritu.
ReplyDeletegood.. even though she forgets, he remembers.. Dadi is super cute.. always on Khanak's back... loved the pink & the blue.. awesome..
ReplyDeleteLovely updates!
ReplyDeleteLovely update :)
ReplyDeleteLoved pink & blue line !
love the "driver" and the "damsel"....everything about them is awesome!!
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