Part 57
Lower Parel
Mumbai
December 29th 2012
Sunday
9:45 PM
He has a wide admiring grin pasted on his face…. She
walks up to him, as if they both know that’s where she’ll go…
Ritu hugs her hubby, Dadi questions Ray…
Shaan:I leave you unsupervised for a day and you
go get a tattoo? (soft in her ear)
Khanak:”A” tattoo? (chuckles)
Shaan looks at her startled “There is more?”
K: (shrugging carelessly) Maybe!
Dadi is pleased to see her fave couple be so
close to each other…
K:Dadi I am sorry!
D:If you didn’t look so good, I would be mad,
(hugging her tight)
D:Hmmm….. you look lovely! Did you see the number
of eyes turned your way?
K (shy) nahi…
D: Tera miya ekdum pareshaan (her husband is on
the phone now)
K:Kyon?
D:Usi ko pooch na………
Pradyun:OMG! OMG! (visibly stunned)
Khanak:That’s enough! (gently warning)
Ritu: Tujhe kya hua?
Dadi: You look gorgeous beta!
Ritu is wearing a peach designer lehanga, Ray a
peacock blue suit….
Ritu: Its Krit’s fave color for me (blushing)
Dadi: Tujhe dekhta jar aha tabhi (chuckling)
Pradyun: You look absolutely ravishing….Kanak
K:kHanak!
P:Well… yes
K surrpetiously pulls the edge of her pallu over
the tattoo on her right…
P:You got a tattoo (staring openly)
Shaan: Vivaan got here! (buzz off Pradyun)
Pradyun is aghast… he had no clue Khanak is wild and adventurous.
K:Well… theres a secret…
P:For ME? (eager)
K:Umm…
S: You made it barely in time for the baraat
The band is LOUD… and blaring…………
They play the year’s biggest hit “Chhammak
Chhallo”
Madhavi and Khushboo make their way to where Dadi
is standing with the brood………… both women are a lil taken aback to see the
young girl dressed so classy yet attractive….
M:You look very different but wonderful (blunt)
K:Umm… Thanks Mom…
Khushboo: Really! Mom… haven’t seen her dressed
up this way… who convinced you…
Ritu:Aur kaun ho sakta hai bhabhi
The cacophony increases……..
Ritu:Chal lets dance
K:ABHI se?
R:Nahi, pheron tak rukte hain
K giggles………
For some unknown reason her eyes meet her husband’s
Pradyun is done talking with Kritik and Shaan’s
friend….
S smiles… roguishly… “So much for the denial this
morning” his eyes tell her……..
K is being dragged… Pradyun follows with Kritik
and a couple of Shaan’s friends… Sunil and Akshay cheer them on……….. “Apne
sangeet mein bahut kam naachi, aaj she should have fun”
In tru Punjabi style, the women and men break out
in the most uncoordinated liveliest dance they can do…………. Khanak starts her
steps………. Ritu and her make a great team……… Khanak’s eyes sparkle… her face
begins to flush…………. Her body and long arms…… rotate flexibly like a rubber
band………..
Dadi blows a whistle……. “Meri bahu, har dance
competition ki winner hogi”
Pradyun:Wow! You are even better now
K:Thanks! (breathless)
Pradyun whistles……..
Kritik and Ritu join for a twosome move…….
Pradyun approaches the group Khanak is dancing in…
Shantanu’s eyes are pinned on his wife………..
loved it Aditee!
ReplyDeleteLoved it xxxx
ReplyDeleteWOW! That was a super cute update Aditee! :)
ReplyDeleteThere! The couple of the night! Cause their jodi is like no other! :) <3
When their eyes meet finally after alot of wait, it is the most intimate form of conversation that takes place through their eyes! Beautiful...
Woaah! There are MORE? Great! :D The guy got to be a 'tattoo hunter' for the night! :P Haha! I'm sure Khanak and Ritu has a whole plan cooked up behind this! ;)
Haha! I ws SO waiting for the spontaneous 'OMG OMG'! Lol! I wonder if all Gujral men are SO demanding! :P lol!
I simply LOVE punjabi weddings! The energy in the atmosphere is like no other! :D :D
Ayee hayee..I was waiting for Prad to slowly make his way towards Khanak! LMAO! Ab tho Kritik bhi aagaya! Shantanu????? PLEASEE?? Actually, I've always wanted this..! As he've never danced for her, for US! :P Well I know the respond would be 'No' from this guy!
Continue soooooon! Aaj ek aur PLEASEE???
^^
DeleteAmazing! I love the 'tattoo hunter' bit...from mole to tattoo hunter. lol!
Gosh, you are right! Maybe something mischievous can be cooking in Khanak's mind, trying to entice him more?
But I have to say, the way Aditee described how beautiful she must be looking, from MIL to everyone was eyeing her. She must be good enough for someone to abduct her.
I would love to hit Pradyun.. Really..
ReplyDeleteLoved it!!! Shaan just couldn't take his eyes of from Khanak!!! :) So does Pradyun..LOL:D Madhavi too appreciated Khanak in her own style..neverthless..Will Shaan join in dancing???
ReplyDeleteLooking forward and thanks for writing..:)
P.S: This update number should be part 53..you wrote wrongly this and the previous update number..dont know whether you noticed it or not..so saying this..:)
And my comments getting not posted..posted twice in last update..but still its not showing..please look into that too..:)
loved the update!! the dance reminded me of the awesome Shanak sangeet!! Khanak bahut pyaari hai.....no wonder "Shantanu's eyes are pinned on his wife"!!
ReplyDeleteThank youuuuu Aditee :)
ReplyDeleteSigh...Shantanu is deadly. I so want this guy. His eyes just speak volumes. His intensity is a killer!
You know more than this...I love the transition of Khanak, the ice maiden to this uninhibited wild character! She slowly started to unravel herself, this was the EXACT Khanak before Suraj died I'm sure.
She kinda reminds her of myself...I have one of those moments where everyone is like 'this is so not you'.
Hahahaha! Prad needs to accept the fact, Khanak is hooked and booked. NO other way around it...he'll find someone soon.
Updateeeeee soooon pleaseeeee!
lovely lovely lovely !!!!! ekdum killing update *wink*
ReplyDeletecan't waiting for next update
ReplyDeletemadhvi n boo are too surprise wah!!!!!!khanak ka Jadu
chalgaya
shaan talked about tattoo and he said there is more ?
lovely
khanak danced n shaan didn left his eyes on her
plz abh jaldi se next wala update
Wow awesome part :)
ReplyDeleteKhanak dancing good :)
Hayee someone was full latoo on her all over again ;)
Lovely update.........
Dadi's comments were not fair.. she danced a lot in her sangeet but someone didn't see her.. now is the time dude.. watch her sway with Prad.. nice punishment for pushing her.. she got tatoo's.. wow.. waiting for Shaan to find out just how many!!
ReplyDeleteAdi.. btw, why the jump in the Parts??
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