Wednesday, December 5, 2012

Part 47


Part 47
She wore some gorgeous chunky silver jewelry…he opened his lips on her collar bone… feeling them…
“You are drunk” she concluded… pushing him
“Shantanu” she pleaded
He kissed her fully……. She was right, he tasted like SOR… HEAVEN AND sor… a a sob escaped… an agonized accusing pleasurable sob… as he continued to plunder…
His hands gently crept under her white kurta…. Pushing it up as it travelled….
Her right hand… clutched his hair in the nape of his neck… he caressed her back…
Her lil speck of red bindi dislocated to her chin as he familiarized himself with her face…. She used his jaw as a scratching post… and sounded a relaxed, deep sigh… like she was in a familiar place.. she recognized everything…... a cool draft of air from the open balcony door, sent chills all over, her moist belly and ribs…….shivering… he slowly pulled a blanket over them…
Said something in hear ear, chuckled…
She smiled as if lost in dreams… his breath tickling her ear… he continued to say stuff… he drew the outline of her shut eyes tracing her kajal… Clasping her.. moving her over him… as his big toe started its art project on her calf……. Her salwar pushed high up…
Her hair hanging on to the slipping claw… he undid the claw…

Her arms went around him and held him tight……..
He groaned… in pleasure…nipped under her collar bone..
His fingers seeking on her back… she used her left hand lost in throes of passion… guiding him to the hook in front………. He felt something on her wrist…
Lifted his head from her upper chest… and saw a crepe bandage wrapped around it…
“Where did u get this?” sharp, curious… his brain never stops working, his face though flush..
“Who” she said.. impatient… nipping his ear..
“I thought we didn’t have any”
She opened her eyes and accused him “Aapne poocha bhi nahi… ek baar bhi, (NOW the tears came)… Pradyun bought it” (There!)
That word/name riled him like no other, he showed her how much by crushing her on the bed…his tongue devouring that droplet
“Khotha” (FOOL!) he said exploding… removing her kurta… no so gently………..
Undid her bandage and threw it
“Shantanu” she protested…
Buried under his onslaught… like sinking deeper and deeper into quiksand…
The knock on the door was heard by neither… the home phone by the bed buzzed… followed by another knock………..
He extracted himself… or tried to, she held his face in her palms…her moans audible…
“The door” he whispered gently in her ear
“Nahi” she said
He chuckled at the use of her fave word…
They molded to each other… unmindful, until she heard the third knock…he swore colorfully
She lay still, buried in his neck…
He gently removed her left arm from around him…
Covered her naked torso with a sheet… walked into his closet and wore another tee, and went to get the door, combing his tousled hair with his fingers…
It was Dadi…
She asked him in Punjabi “Are YOU asleep?”
“I was in BED” he told her sulking
Dadi was visibly embarrassed..
“What happened to her? Startled
Shaan is straightening his collar and buttoning the bottom in the row of buttons on his neck
“Dr Vohra is here”
“Oh! Good!”
Dadi looks inside the door to the “bed” room is shut…
“I think she broke or sprained her hand”
“Tere saath na usko bhejoongi nahi abhi usko” smacking him in jest
D:I well I am going to go bring him ..
By then HL has BROUGHT him..
Dadi invites him into the seating area
Shaan goes in to check on his wife… she has dozed off!!!
He leans over.. almost crushing her again, “Dr Vohra is here”
She wakes up startled.. “Kyon?”
He smiles
She is still unclothed “Liar!” she says pulling the blanket with her sore left hand.. winces
“He is” Khanak hears voices in the lounge
“Mera kurta” she panics!
His tee is on the side…
He offers it to her.. …”u lost my clothes?” Sits up in bed in shock… bunches her hair… her clip is nowhere..
Knots it up with her good right hand... its messy and tangly...
Searches frantically between the million folds of crumpled sheets on the bed… her lingerie and her kurta are missing….. she wears his tee reluctantly, grabs the dupatta she had left on the bed rail before heading out to the balcony to prune the roses………..
Pulls her salwar edge down her calves…
Walks out slowly as he goes to grab his fave object… his phone..
Dr:THERE she is..
Dadi is visibly pleased to see her grand daughter in law appear dazed, wearing her grandson’s tee from the morning…she is wearing a red dupatta..
The Doc doesn’t think anything of it…
K:Hi!
Dr: Hello beta!
Her wrist is sore and throbbing….
She extends it readily, so that he doesn’t focus on her odd clothing…
Shaan is back… TEXTING…
Dr: Punjabi munde naal vyah hoya tera, khoob kha peeke tagdi hona chaida (u married a Punjabi man, you should stay fit)
K:I didn’t punch him! (softly)
Dr bursts out laghing, Dadi is overjoyed.. her husband smirks…he is well aware of that sharp sense of humor
The doctor wears his glasses and peers…
Feels it gently, flexes her fingers…
Dadi is pleased looking at her… her face is flushed, her hair in disarray… she frequently shields herself with her dupatta…her bindi under her left jaw
Dr Vohra: any chances you could be pregnant?
STARTLES the heck out of her.. she turns red…
Dr Vohra laughs out loud: You are married, so it’s a possibility you know! (mocking her openly)
She turns red…
Dr Vohra:Mrs Gujral,  aapki bahu ki tarah koi ladki nahi dekhi maine… she is so shy.
K:Umm… I am not.(shy?). pregnant I mean
The doctor laughs again...
S:You interrupted (we were WORKING on it!)
Dr Vohra laughs again “My apologies Shaan”
He looks at Khanak “Isko maine deliver kiya! See how he talks to me?”
Khanak wants the earth to part and be buried… never in her wildest dreams she had imagined making love at 6 in the evening.. being interrupted by the doctor and having the husband admit…
There wasn’t much “spontaneity” to the intimacy her and Sooraj shared.. they didn’t do anything for weeks….
Dadi: Beta?
K:Umm..
Dr Vohra: Kal to clinic band hai… the place I refer to for xrays is closed also, Duggals ke yahan shaadi bhi hai, so how about on Monday you come in for an xray, doesn’t seem like a fracture, but you are in pain..
Take his ipad out and writes down…
Dr Vohra:I will give you pain killers, is se zara door raho (grunts meaningfully)
K thinks “Oh great! Now the DOCTOR hands out free marital advice”
Shaan ends his call, Dr Vohra waves his pen menacingly at him
Dadi:Who… Doc… she just returned from her parents.
Doc smiles knowingly..
Dr Vohra thinks… and says looking directly at shaan“Be gentle with her” (BLUNT)
S:Ill try! (shameless)
Dadi: Main to HL ko snack lagaane bola, I am outta here! (her face is red)
Dr: You will be fine beta, take this.. (hands her a paper)
Dr:Tujhe bhi email bheja hai, bring it with you on Monday to the xray place
K:Mujhe bhejiye
Shaan looks at his wife, understanding the implication that she would get her xrays done by herself..
Dr: Laayega tujhe, aape.. (laughs)
Shaan decides not to send the diagnosis to his wife.. she plots how to get it..





24 comments:

  1. loved it,
    how shamaeless are the doctor and shaaan looool
    poor dadi and khanak are red of embarrassment..
    must say the first half was hotttt the second half was naughty looool
    xxxxx

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  2. *THUDDD*

    OMGGGG! Ufffff!!!

    Aditee, you're such a merciless killer! Ek saath itne saare? Just HOW the hell are we supposed to digest them all in one go? Damn!

    I'm still trying bad to get back my normal heartbeat rate AND breathing pace! I'm all RED!

    When they're together, they forget the world..EVERYTHING! Its like..nothing else matters to them anymore! For them the pleasure of lying beside each other..and reveling in the caress of each other is the only thing that exists! Sighhhhh!

    And Woman, none can express it more beautifully than you do! You mirror their each emotion, and how bad they crave for each other! Truly, Casa is CLASS apart! Bows to you!!!

    From when did Dadi start to have such WORST sense of timing! :( Dadi always gets to witness their 'hawty' mood! Haha! I could ACTUALLY imagine the glare he might have given her! LMAO!

    But good its her, Pradyun hota tho kacha kha leta! Lol! When he threw away the bandage..it spoke volumes about HOW much he hates the guy, and how possessive his love is! He desires to be the ONLY 'protective' and 'caring' soul in her life! Pleasure her like no other! And the least he realize, his place is irreplaceable in her life! Sighhhh!

    'KOTHA'!!!! THERE!!! The second bombshell you threw RIGHT at my heart! UFFFF! I LOVE this punjabi munda! It is ultra sexy to have him talk in punjabi! And I die every time he do that! Tighttt huggss to you!!!! THANK YOUUUU! <3

    Dr.Vohra! :D Great timing Aditee! I remember..when for the first time he had made his entry.., situation was quite the same..when she had returned from Ahmedabad! But MAN! I was melting and burning just like Dadi! :P

    Uff! He's a shameless hawty! :P Just WHAT was that!? 'You interrupted'! LMAO! Dr. Vohra bhi kam nahi hain! 'Be GENTLE'! Thats EXACTLY what he should say..infront of a poor elderly woman..and the 'shy' girl he had mentioned before! :P

    Okaaayyyy! Now I gotta get my breathing to normal..and concentrate on my fat books! This is just NOT happenin! *breath in, breath out*

    I LOVEEEE YOU! <3










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    1. That was a beautiful analysis!

      I don't find them the need of saying ILY. What is the need...when there is irrespective happiness from both sides.

      Crazy or what...Aditee just makes them look effortlessly beautiful. I mean, even the description of how Khanak dress sense is exceptional. Its an 'art form'!

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    2. TRUE! The 'feeling' love can offer is always there! What else matters!

      Sighhh! So true! Each and everything about Casa is so classy! How she provides even the minute details..and so we are able to picturize it all just the way! AMAZING!

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  3. It’s took me good few minutes to compose myself and actually jump out the ground; I died of embarrassment like Dadi. Lol!

    That was intense. Sigh!
    One exotic couple...everything is unstated about them. Sigh!

    After you’ve started Casa my book shelf is empty again...I can’t think anything besides this couple.
    Aditee...I don’t know how to pin-point it, but there is something very incredible about the way you write, even you might not know. But it keeps the reader on the toes...I say this every time because surprised after each part of how you come up with unique ideas.

    Few things I absolutely loved...he is so intrigued by her...she’s his obsession, I like the mention of the tracing of the Kajal...still has that fetish!
    Some things you’ve still kept the same...he makes her laugh and happy! No matter how burdened she is....he is one in a million! I bet she hasn’t witnessed as much happiness as this guy brings to her existence...obviously parents home is always cherished. But he ‘shows’ her how the ‘live’!
    You make them look beautiful Aditee <3 Sighh!

    His possessiveness regarding her is heightened...Kio apne cousins se itna jealous hota hai kya :P
    The ‘khoata’ had me in splits! In middle of make out he doesn’t forget to curse the poor guy.
    Biwi zinda ya mar jaiya out of pain...but he won’t even tolerate a speck of Prad :D :D

    Mein bhool gaye thi to ask about the hand...I thought ki it was better now.
    Bechaari dadi! That’s what you get for uplifting the brat.
    I was surprised...mein Khanak hoti tho! I would have actually hammered him.
    He isn’t ashamed. Har cheez mein straightforward and blunt....

    Oh god! Ending kaisi ki...more ways to entice us! Aab how can I concentrate :(
    Thank youuuu Aditeee....Jaldi update karna please :D

    @Shama: Ray nahi, tho Dr hi sahi :D :D

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    1. LOVED you analysis! :D

      She's his biggest obsession! Truee! Sighh! And I forgot to mention about the Kajal thing! I'm always left mesmerized the way notices every little thing about her! Sigh!

      Lol! I thought whoever is outside..He's gonna eat the person up alive! :P

      He will teach her to 'Live'
      She will teach him to 'Feel'

      This is what Ady had mentioned in the beginning! And it has always been in action since! :) <3

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    2. You know, you can see right there the difference between Suraj and her relationship compared to this one.

      Both are so driven physically...unlike Suraj and her! She says it herself there was no spontaneity...she makes him sound so boring. Poor soul! lol!
      Her relationship with shantanu, might sound like it's all about the physicality but the fact is even the emotional factor is driven by it :) But only a few people see it like Dadi.

      Aur ek baat...see he didn't even have to 'show' he was worried about her hand. He just called the DR! That speaks alot for itself :)

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    3. Lol! :@ Boring!

      Lemme admit it today! Suraj has been like those 'normal' husbands..! But Shantanu is incomparable..and as you said, thats something she've accepted too! If you really draw a comparison..you'll get to know it all!

      Possessive, jealousy..all these words never sounded so good before! They both overwhelm each other in so many ways! Whenever I listen to 'Lana del rey's 'And I still love him' .. the words she uses.., reminded me of this guy! 'He is so charismatic, Magnetic, and electric!' *Sigh*

      B/w..'Kotha' is not getting off my mind now! I, from now on..shall use that everywhere! :P lol!

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    4. ^^Yeppp! Plus his aggressiveness makes him more demanding!
      Lana del rey's 'I still love him' gives me goosebumps!You are right...it reminds you of him.

      I want him to say a word in Gujrati! It will be cute...like Khanak spoke punjabi once. I want him to say something spontaneously of something she repeats often...and she'll be amused. lol!

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    5. Haina? Her voice in it is so deep, intense! Truly amazing! <3

      Awiiee..! Yup! Thats the next demand! :D Aditee, hope you're listening to it all! :P

      Damn! This guy kills me!!!!

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  4. OMG VERY very very HOT
    thank u thank u so much aditee for this
    ohhh WOW dont know what to say man
    i loved it was missing this so much
    dadiiiii i guess if it wasnt for the doc then she would have leave them alone making love *wink*
    shannnnn is very naughty no doubt
    but doc he too woh toh dadi se bhi aage hain
    omg i was also feeling very shy with dadi and khanak laaj ke mare margayi LOL!!!
    shan shan shan only u can do this
    pleaseeeee can u give next update also this much long and soon :)))

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  5. Shantanu so naughty but he is so possessive

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  6. Loved the making out session!!:D
    Dr.Vohra, never forgets to tell her that, to stay away from him;):p
    I loved when he said, 'you interrupted':p
    Ofcourse the possessiveness too;)
    Waiting for next one, very eagerly:D

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  7. Lovely part :)
    Shameless shaan lolzz
    Waiting 4 next part......
    Update soon!

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  8. omg.. Shaan is becoming shameless before the whole world... too good.. waiting to c him fluster when she is actually pregnant.. when is that coming up??

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  9. Loved it Aditee Super hot, naughty classy, beautiful, awesome part as always...
    It's pure bliss loved to see the besharam Shantanu :-) <3<3 Doc sent him diaganosis how will she get it..
    Eagerly waiting for next part!!
    Love u always <3<3

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  10. OMG!!! That was simply awesome!!! It was sooooo hotttt!!! No one can beat ShaNak when it comes to romance!!! My God!!! Shaan hates Pradyun to the core exactly opposite to how he loves and adores his wife!!!So he called Dr.Vohra..How shamelessly Shaan is talking like this in front of him!!! ROFL:D Poor Khanak..got so embarrassed!!! Dadi too!!! LOL:D

    Must say you write so AMAZINGLY!!!Even though every update looks short but you include all the minute and intricate details and express it in a few words itself..I'm sure your each update can be made into an episode in a daily show..superb!!!

    And one thing he always is so fascinated by her kajal etc..but never her toe rings..I remember how Khanak used to hear the sound of it whenever he approaches in Beacon Hill..

    Looking forward and thanks for writing a fantastic update!!!

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  11. wow...it was awesome....its really hot yaar..superb writing...hats off to u...i really love this shanak...they make us go crazy in fight and in romance....loved all the updates....u r a awesome writter...keep going....want to read more and more....

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  12. This was Aditee magic!! romance at its best.....you can never get enough of this Shanak!! lovely update, each and every line!!

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  13. loved it awesomely penned Aditee read trice but still yeh dil
    mange more heheheheh!!!!!!!!!!!
    khanak wrist sore omgeeee!!!!!! shaan is too much love him more now
    when khanak said Pradyun brought bandage he remove it n through it lolzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!
    her nahi is always first i loved it
    Knock!! knock!! at first 2 he ignore but 3rd knock open the door
    dadi came with a doctor
    omgeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! shaan is shameless he told dadi he was in bed
    *blush* poor khanak doses off n he came to wake her
    dadi notice she wore her husband T
    shaan n doctor are shameless poor khanak n dadi turn red he said
    he won't be gentle heheheheh!!!
    waiting for next part n will se
    will shaan take her for X-ray

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  14. I loved the last few parts a lot. They are still fighting and Khanak is almost losing the battle. I am reliving the magic of Casa once again. I am eagerly waiting for next parts. Thanks a lot Aditee for giving us Casa.

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  15. No update:( Hope you update it tonight:)

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  16. Heyyy Aditee :)

    Any chance of a update?

    Hope youre good :)

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