Wednesday, December 12, 2012

Part 52


Mumbai
December 29th 2012
9:32 pm
Shaan switched impatiently between both his phones, they were parked near Phoenix Mills, Lower Parel, a km away from Four Seasons the wedding venue…. The crowd was swelling, one of Mumbai’s poshest weddings, designers and diamonds vied for attention, there was private security and Mumbai police everywhere to keep gawkers away, Dadi searched in her purse for some tissue to dabd her sweaty nose….
Madhavi: I told Mom Pradeep ko bhejo.
Dadi: Sunil ka driver Abbas gaya hai….
Shaan: Dadi are they home?
Dadi:They had a 7 O clock apptt at the salon, maine 6 bols, tumhari woti ne usko 7 kar diya…
Shaan was irritated, he was well aware of how Khanak didn’t worry about time when it was not about work, or work related commitments…
She lived in her own world….
Shaan:Did you convince Ritu?
Dadi:Nahi! Who ik vaari gal karni shuru tey hore koi… (Dadi shakes her head helplessly, laughing hard)
His wife never answered her phone, now Ritu wasn’t either…
Pradyun:Dadi.. where is everybody?
Dadi:Aaja puttar! Tu vi aa
Shaan is visibly irritated now, Pradyun is wearing a green sherwani in silk with embroidery and glitz… Shaan thinks he looks like a clown…
Kritik is wearing a muted, tan, kurta and a maroon chudidar…
As for Shaan…. He was dressed in a charcoal/ash grey blazer, a white shirt and black as his wife’s eyes pants… Dadi had pinned a venetian red rose on his blazer much to his chagrin…
His hair was neatly combed and he was as groomed as the groom himself….
His eyes were restless as usual, scanning the crowds, focusing on the cars that pulled up…. The groom was absent, his glittering decked up chariot waited…. Just like Shantanu…
Pradyun: Have you seen Mum?
Dadi: Idhar thi, shaayad Sunil ke saath paani lene gayi hogi, they had mobile water kiosks in the baraat route…
Shaan gave him a look akin to “Are we missing Mommy?”
Pradyun: I forgot my phone Dadeee will let Ray know?
Dadi:Sure beta!
Shaan dialed again…
Ritu answered “Gujraaaaaaaaaaal”
Shaan:Wherethe hell are you guys?
Ritu: Mudkar ko dekhen janaab…
Shaan looks around…….. he cant spot any body…
A silver Merc comes to a gliding halt….
His eyes light up….
Ray exits, followed by Ritu…. His wife eventually appears……….. wearing a saree in liquid gold…… it has some lace and pearls on the edge… she is wearing a venetian red blouse…… more like a scrap of silk! (his mind curses as his body stirs) it’s a shred of fabric covering her upper front, with a bow on the back, bright red rubies sparkle in her ears, her hair is partly down, partly tied up, messy yet stylish……… no jewelry anywhere, except a purple butterfly tattoo  4 inches under her collarbone…. Its on a vine… most of the vine hidden under the scrap of a blouse…………some of the vine hiding between her cleft
“Nobody wears it like you do, nobody caries it like you do” his heart sings seeing the saree…….
Women turn sideways to stare at her……. Her eyes scan the crowd, just as his did moments ago….
It’s a quick scan “Object found” her brain signaled…..
If he was breathing heavily through his mouth, nobody heard… but the heat was unmistakable… as she approached…

















11 comments:

  1. Woooow.love these two.man lool
    Cant waot for the next update plz update aditee quickly
    xxxc

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  2. Thank you...Khanak ka scoth ka asar? lol! 56?

    Eeeeeee! We better get another part today :D
    Saree ko choro...He must be looking dashing as ever. Sighhh!

    Okay, going to the point. LOVED! LOVED! The saree and the way you portrayed her...Gold and red is one of my fav combinations! she must be looking ravishing, good enough for someone to abduct her :P

    I agree with Shantanu, Prad must be looking like a clown I hate BRIGHT colours on men, no particular reason. I just do.

    One question...Is Khanak's tattoo recent? How did she get one? I mean you never mentioned before...abit of info on that if that's fine with you.

    Thank you...always wanted her wearing a saree, it seemed ages :D

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    1. Hey!:D SAME HERE! You've said it all! :D


      LOVED the saree, its description! Lets us imagine just the way! Splendid!

      Okayyy! So it is a Silk-Silk combo b/w Prad and Khanak! :P Good Dadi got him a rose, and made it EVEN! :P lol!

      Sigh! I'm equally mesmerized by both their appearances! I'm sure I'd witness heaven in his wardrobe! :P
      You make them appear exceptionally stylish Aditee! :D <3

      I cant wait for their eyes to meet FINALLY apart from all the crowd! :D

      I guess she got it now! New year surprise! ;) :D

      Continue sooooon! Aaj ek aur mil sakti hain?? PLEASEE?

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    2. Heyyyy and thankkks <3

      Well, I just love the way Aditee describes her in saree something very magnificent in that. lol!

      Haha! Only you could come up with the silk-silk combo, well...Shantanu is dashing enough that I didnt even notice Prad actually.

      I <3 how they always seek each other, its always like the first time...sighhh!

      Yep...I'm so intrigued by that tattoo and I wonder if he knows or is it recent?!! So many questionns!

      Hopefully there is a update later than never...lol!

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  3. loved the update, this time she gets to stun him!

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  4. Shaan toh gaya.......such lovely descriptions Aditee!! this wedding is going to be fun!! hope they get lots of time together!!

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  5. hahahaha their mind games were funny
    god loved them please finish this quickly after that shanak hi shanak hain :)
    plz update quick man

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  6. lovely Aditee :)
    awesome Pradyun ask for his mommy lolzzzzzzz and shaan omgeeee!!!!!!! really rofl!!!!!!!!! i loved it
    he's restless want to see his Khanak and again called Ritu sach kaha Ritu neh zara murke toh dekho Janab ghayal hojaoge lolzzzzzzzzzz
    wow!!!!!! khanak description of saree and what she wore beside that was awesome
    people around her stared at her lovely!!!
    what will Pradyun compliment her and how will shaan react
    can't wait for next
    update soon

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  7. Loved da part :)
    Awww khanak was in sharee hayee definetly shantanu was breathless to saw her lolzz
    Jaldi next part update karna can't wait more.........

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  8. ok..ok... Shaan jollu vittathu pothum.. hahaha..

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