December 30th 2012
Mangal Kunj
11 PM ish
K: He can be so disapproving when it comes to me! (eyes
closed) He didn’t call ONCE… I lied to Bai that he did…weve only kissed…
jussssst kissed…..
S:Isnt she on pain killers?
R:She said she took one at Noon Gujral.. that must have worn
off… (reassuring)
S:Khanak… (gently touching her)
K opened her eyes… with difficulty… “Its still swaying” “I
am just going to lay here with my eyes closed”
S:You are drunk! (in her ear)This is not good (serious)
K: Intoxicated with you! (turning her face to graze his cheek)
and yes, I agree this is cant be good…
Ritu and Kritik exchange a look, as they leave the room
quietly… shutting the door behind them
K:I can understand why people drink…. Its just the best
feeling in the world (hugs herself wrapping arms around)
He chuckles….
K: A drink a nite cant be that bad… surely! (her eyes are
closed, she relaxes and sinks deep into the couch)
K:Its been 5 or 7 years? Tujhe yaad hai, kab? I mean… I
drank last?
S:I am going for 7 (softly)
K:And you sound like, you know who…
S:No… tell me…
She frowns… tries to open her eyes, and shuts it back again,
shrugging “Never mind” she whispers…
K: I have a big plan Ritu, agar maine follow kiya to main 5
saal mein free…
S:Kis se? (startled)
K: Aada is thinking of renting the house and moving to Bakrana….(sighs
painfully)
He gently leans towards her to pry her hugging arms free…she
holds his left hand with her right………..
K:I wish I could go back to Seychelles… and be a beach bum…..
He grins….
K:I can bead people’s hair….
Opens her eyes… doesn’t pay him any attention, reaches for
her half full Bourbon glass, the ice has melted… “That’s enough” he orders…
K: Its not even empty…
Pries her right hand… he holds it tighter…
K:Dadi loves me a lot…. I know that…
She reaches with her left hand… he watches her try to grab
with her brace on…. She hovers near the glass… “Except you see double when you “
He gently pushes the glass farther from her reach…
Strokes her right wrist with his thumb
“Sex… that’s what men think about…….”
She has her bindi on, her braid is intact, her jhumkas, but
she is wearing lounge pants in yellow paisley and a skinny blouse…… her
butterfly peeks from the mound.
“What are you doing home so early?” she asks him confused….
S:You called me remember? (laughing under his breath as he
teased)
K: Maine to aapko roz 3 baar call kiya,( shows all her 5
fingers up) never hit dial though…..
S:Why? (aroused, inching closer)
K:Kya?
S: You didn’t call me (pushing her down on the couch)
Her injured hand connects with her drink, she grabs it……
bends down and gulps it all before he could could yank it off her hand… she
lets go just as he sponges the trail ofgold flowing down her chin……….. with his
lips……….
Her right hand ensconced in his grip… snugly… now lay on her
belly, her left pushing his shoulder…
“You need to be nice to a battered chick”
He is on her now, completely……….
Her anklet scores on his bare calf………. As he groans in her
ear……..
“Battered?” he asked
“And bruised…. Hurt…..her husband is mean”
“You talk as if you know him” crushing her savagely
“I dont” breathing raggedly……. Under his onslaught
Wow!!! Fantastic!!! Khanak didnt even realize its Shaan and kept on blabbering thinking its Ritu..
ReplyDeleteShe is talking about loan na..that if she follows the plan then she'll be free..It would take a minute for Shaan to clear all her dues and loans..but he is so aware of the consequence..so never will even give a thought about it..
Awww!!! She didnt speak about wanting a child..thats the main disagreement between them!!!
Looking forward abd thanks for writing an awesome update..:)
awwww abhi complete bhi nahi hua and its already hot
ReplyDeletewas expecting something like this
what a new year treat
initially she didnt realize ki its shan and shan woh toh bus biwi ko tease karne me aurrrrrrrr ahem ahem karne me laga hain
happy new year and thanks for updating but tchhh u didnt complete the whole thing please update soon and ek hot sa update banta hain boss :')
and i forgot this ke when khanak said main 5 saal mein free hehehe shan's alert reaction to that kis se hahaahaaa was amazing he probably thought ki she is talking about him that was very cute and funny :)
DeleteWelcome back and a Happy new year :)
ReplyDeleteSigh. You had no idea how much I missed my Casa read!
Khanak needs to get drunk more often...as much as Shantanu was amused, so was I :D :D
I simply loved how you conveyed the most with the least words; the significant was expressed with her half supposed sentences...Simply superb! I imagined scenarios of how you play this and this is exactly how I thought it be like...leaving him in a pendulum, he’ll ponder over what she meant ‘free in five years’...as it was pretty clear by Ritu, that Khanak does ponder over leaving him and this is always his biggest fear and let’s see how he fights it.
Just hope what I’m predicting about the five years is completely ‘wrong’.
You know the surprising thing is bringing sub issues within the issue...I can see him having his side of insecurities regarding her with just not the bind, but her leaving and the relationship. Is it just up-to the physicality or more than this? It might haunt him somewhere down the line.
Last line was like a prick...left a bittersweet moment for me. It’s like she wants to be cared for... He is very compassionate about her, he has his own way of showing. I wonder if he is affectionate and considering it will be taken as reverse, she might assume as pity. So it’s like in sense playing with fire...they marriage is so delicate, one wrong step the thread is broken!
Another update sooooon....pretty please aur thora lamba :P
hey great reply u r right their marriage is so delicate, one wrong step the thread is broken!
Deletei agree to that
they just need to be with each other all the time but their problem is their ego and unka vocal conv kum hain they only talk their heart out when they fight or make love but i love them like this hehehee dont want to change them :)
Thanks alot Jalis :)
DeleteI must say...If they weren't demanding, aggressive and possessive than it wouldnt have been as epic as this. Nothing competes Casa for me and them being like this is the best thing about it :D