Happy Pongal/Sankranti to all the readers J
11:20 PM
Dec 31st 2011
Mangal Kunj
K:I had no idea she was invited too. (muttered)
Ritu: Chal bhagaate hain usko
Khanak giggles
R: She is pretty hot isn’t she?
K:Thanks! I feel so much better now (miserable)
Ashwini Rane stood by her husband, she wore a black saree
with red and gold all over, her blouse was halter neck, leaving not much to
imagination, Khanak felt like a nun in her lace sheath dress
R:Main poochkar aaoon kaha se lee isne saree?
K:Not a bad idea, blouse… actually
R and K do a high five and giggle
K turns around facing R “I cant watch her any more”
R:You are being silly
K:I know..
R:She is not flirting
K:He is (somber)
R:Maybe usko pata hai tu dekh rahi hai…
K:Oopar chalen kya?
R:Pradyun will chase us down.. he does look at you like he
is crushing on you
K:Shhhhhhhh! (finger on her lip)RITUUUU(whisper)
R:KYON?
K:Shaan HATES him!
R looks at Shaan and then at her best friend… “You guys!”
“Hmmm”
K:Plzzz don’t say anything
R:As if you didn’t have enough to deal with? The cousin on
the in-laws side has the hots for the nayi bahu (laughs out loud)
K:Mike doon tujhe!
R:Nahi yesssssssssss Ab maza aayega I can give Gujral grief
now… shittt I only wish you had told me sooner
K:I did not tell you anything
Ritu smacks her head “Mera matlab, mera tubelight der se
chamka”
K turns around , Shaan is peering into Ashwini’s phone… they
both laugh together…
K:I am going up (firmly)
R: Akele? Gujral ko bhejoon
K smiles, and shakes her head…
R:OHHHHHHH! Khoofiya plan?
K ‘s eyes sparkle but her face is serious…
R:Hug to de de Mystery, Happy New Year sweet!
They hug warmly
R:Sabko boloon?
Kchokes her
R:Samajh gayi…
15 minutes down…
Shaan’s phone beeps “I am stuck” a text from wifey…
“With me” he types back with a mocking grin
“The door” she says…
He looks up to his room…
Kritik: Did you watch that Chelsea game last week?
Shaan:Read the score… missed it, work’s killing me… albeit
slowly (chuckles)
Akshay, hands him the baby… “BRB” he says
Turns around and walks upstairs, NOBODY notices except Ritu,
she whispers something in Kritik’s ear “Lucky bastard” Kritik swears…
“Lets go then” giggling
Akshay: Krit, we were planning to go catch that final in
Madrid in March, care to join?
Ray and Khushboo and her friends yank Ritu, she loves the
attention, starts to chatter…
“Happy times :-P” she texts her friend…
~
The suite is bathed in recess lights, and the two bed side
lamps, he shuts the door behind him, … walks over to the bath area, her walk in
closet sliding door is open… he worries… “Khanak?” he calls out
Texts “Where are YOU?” impatient
“I am not telling” she texts back…
His heart skips a beat… as he slows down… it sinks in…
“Whats the reward?” he texts… leaning on of the many low
tables lining the wall holding expensive crsytals and vases…
She doesn’t respond…
He walks over to the balcony, and opens the door…
She stood… waiting… she was leaning on the balcony… she wore
a saree now…… “offwhite? Peach?” he wondered……….it had “some” pattern”, it was
a gauzy chiffon……….. the blouse…….. “was she wearing one?” it blended with her
skin tone…
He just leaned on the door frame, tucked his phone into his
pocket, his shirt sleeve was floded 3 qtrs now, as if being formal and neat,
frustrated him… a button was undone below his collar bone as well..
In the moonlight they checked each other out…
“I like your night clothes” he mocked…
“Who said I am going to bed?” she croaked…
Something hoop like and sparkly bobbed in her ears…
He took a step forward…
“You were flirting with Rane” she accused him, directly,
just like his style…
“You noticed?”
He took yet another step…
She clutched the vertical rails tighter with both hands… the
breeze swept her hair over her face…
“I am…” she began and stopped, nervous
He waited… he cant take the next step before she completes
her next accusation…
“I wore a saree” (you can flirt with me now” was left
unsaid)
“All by yourself?” (soft mocking, like Bhabhi often used
with Amogh, when he fed himself peas)
“I had help” she countered
He took two steps…
“Especially hooking it in the back” brave…
Jasmine and roses intertwined as the scent wafted through…
She took a step forward as if emboldened by the rich
fragrance…
“I don’t like her” she told him.
“I don’t like for you to”
The gap was closed now
She went on her toes, she was barefeet……. Held his waist
with her injured left hand, and stretched her neck, he subtly backed off
“Have you been drinking” he asked bluntly, but for some
reason hoarsely as she pasted herself on him completely, tryingto reach his
lips
“That’s a horrible thing to say”hurt…
She reached with her right hand and traced a crease on the
cheek
Her lips made contact with the crease a slow agonized groan
escaped both…………..
“10 din Shantanu”
Yet he didn’t make one move……..
“You didn’t call me once” still hurt about that
She kissed his chin cleft and his jaw…
Tripped on her pallu straining, he yanked her wrapping his
arms around her waist but not reciprocating in any other way
“Bai asked me if I am happy” (out of the blue)
She was on his neck now “You undid your button for her?”
She hugged him finally…………. “10 din Shantanu”
"Your friend should know married men are out of bounds" angry
She rubbed her cheek on his chest, like a scratching post………….
Hugged him tighter as if some ominous thought had just crossed her mind…….
She bent his head to her neck/shoulder……..
"There is a Greek belief, if you begin the year by making love" trails off laughs in his ear..."I am just saying" as she nipped his lobe......
Time stood still……..
“You are witch!” he swore, crushing her…….
They kissed under the stars………
She balanced herself on one foot, the other folded up………….her
pallu swayed……as he bruised her soft skin…….
Without a word he picked her up and walked to the bed…
laying her down not so gently, placing himself on her……….. as the clock struck
twelve downstairs…. Loudly, people screamed, music blared……..as he made love to
his wife purposefully......
Thanks a ton Aditee and Happy Maha Sankranti to you too.
ReplyDeleteWhat a start to the new year in more way then one :D
The balcony has some kind of special connection I swear...all the memories of them I cherish are from there, whether it was the engagement, Karwa chauth or the new years :D
You’ve created another night to remember...a year back both were separated around this period and NOW under the stars, her in a saree, the jasmine vines and roses and making love when the clock hits 12, something aimless and deep about it...Sighhh!
I LOVED Khanak finally showing her possessive and insecure side, she hardly did and claimed him as HERS. She kinda indirectly did finally :P We need more of Ashwini...
Nothing more to dissect...everything is speechless about it. But the texting bit was more enticing...loved that! Intrigued him, worried him and finally got him.
What is going to happen now? I’m sure everyone will be asking about them...yikes! Jaldi karne update...you’ll leave us hanging on the wrong time!
P.S. Dadi ke re-entry...kinda miss her now! She is one of my favorites leaving aside Ritu.
woohhooooo!!!
ReplyDeleteboy!! the suite is damn hot :D LOL!!
I loved the way they celebrated the new year ;) :D
She indeed speaks a lot!! LOL!!
Shaan is too clever, he wanted her to make move so he kept silent?!
you seriously don't have any idea, whenever i see a number increased on the update my face breaks into a huge smile, automatically :D
i guess he must have teased her lot for her possessiveness! LOL!!
Loved evreything about this update aditee :D
waiting for next one very eagerly...:)))))
OMG hot hot hot
ReplyDeletei love khanak taking bold step
WOW balconyyyyy i want more of balcony bcoz in balcony they somehow end up kissing or making love :)
sighhhhh i m dead
what a start to the new year i love it love it love it
now plzz plzzz plzzzz update soon :)))
hot hot hot hot hot looool
ReplyDeleteloved it finally khanak made the move...
love dadi.
p.s. sorry havent been commenting for the last few updates, i have exams so im soo busy but plz bear with me for like 2 weeks..
xxxx
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ReplyDeleteamazing update, glad they finally made up!
ReplyDeletekhanak and ritu's talk is always awesome:D
ReplyDeleteloved their bonding
the room part was sizzling hot!!!!! wow!! khanak took a step this time
she wore a saree :D nice joke shaan nice night wear rofl!!!!
balcony part was emhh!! emhh!!!! splendid
awaiitng for next Aditee loved the update
Loved it!!! The update is sizzling hotttt!!! Khanak is so possessive about Shaan..Awww!!! She got jealous of Ashwini..LOL..:D
ReplyDeleteLooking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update..:)
Khanak making all the moves was very delightful!! awesome part.......hot, passionate, dreamy!!
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