Mangal Kunj
1 PM ish
She grabbed the crystal figurine, just as he trapped her
right arm between his two legs….
He texted casually, as she struggled to free herself, she
used her left hand to pry his knees apart.
“Not funny”
“Oh! It is” he said smugly…
“Tchh”
“Whats wrong with your voice?” he asked
She felt her throat with her hand, “I “
He waited…
She yanked her right hand at that moment, it was still
trapped.
“Umm” not sure about her croaky husky voice anymore
“Didn’t care to read the label on the bottle?” chuckled
“Kab?” confused
He watched her struggle, knelt down by the coffee table… his
feet were bare… she noticed, his shorts navi blue
“You could say please” he offered
She smiled… it appeared like a smirk…
His phone beeped, as he texted, his home line rang near the
bed, she looked at it, he didn’t even bother to
She pushed her flowing silky tress off her cheeks with her
left hand, as she fought to free her arm…
“Why didn’t you wear your brace”
“It hurts if I do” she said coolly
“Do plan to break your wrist completely? His jaw clenched
though his tone was a whisper
“Nahi” sulking
“Too pig headed to listen to voice of reason?”
Their eyes clashed, he quickly let go of her right arm, only
to haul her bodily and place her in a reclining
position head on arm rest… as he bent over furiously…
“Did you take your pain killers?”
“Nahi…” afraid for some reason..
“You are not eating any breakfast (if you plan to lie about
it)”
“I don’t need..”
“Sympathy? Pity?”his breath was stinging hot…
Her right wrist in his grip, her left hand on his shoulder…
in a clutch
“Do you plan to get drunk again?” riling
“Why?” “Do you plan to stock up?” baiting him
She could feel the pressure on her lower body as he descended.
“Nah We have enough”
“I can” (pay) she stops just before she got to that word…
The physical power struggle begins at that point….
Her “nahi”s get stifled, his grunts become more audible…
Seconds tick by, her hands are bound above her head, in his
left hand on the arm rest…
“Abhi lado” he invites…
Staring down…
“What was that again about never marrying a Punjabi guy?”
accusing
She struggles with her body
“Wish I knew, Bourbon’s the key to making you talk” he
taunts
Her flailing body and legs, don’t find that taunt amusing…
“Why didn’t you tell me that you were going to Aada’s?”
‘I apologize Sir!Wont happen again” she smiles saccharine
sweet.
He presses down on her, ending her thrashing legs….an
agonized pleasurable groan excapes her throat……. As he crushes her
“Beach bum” he hisses in her neck…
“Aapko kaise maloom?” she asks startled…
He continues to torment her without saying a word………..she
gently lifts herself allowing him access to her back……
“Shouldn’t you be at work?” taunts
“I went in this morning” he responds
“Ofcourse!” she jeers as His jaw scrapes her neck……….
“Why did you get drunk?” persistent
“I wanted to”
“Ouch” she squeals… as he continues to loot…
“You are harsh” she says somberly…
He is unmindful..
“What are you plotting?” he asks buried in her waist…
“I am not telling” she responds
“Are you going to visit again?”("is that what you were promising your Mom over the phone?")
“I am not teaching you Gujarati” (I wont translate)
“khanak…”
Her breathing relaxes as she enjoys the cooing of her name…
“You were sexy when drunk though..” he chuckles
“I know” she says smugly…
“I” she begins seriously… he looks at her deeply… the knock
on the door and the ring on his phone coincide…
“Gujral” “Or Mrs Gujral”
“Ritu!” says Khanak panicking
He lets out a frustrated grunt……"Ofcourse"
“You are mean!” she points, defensive about her friend
He lets her slide off from under him and fix her clothing……..
He wears his tee back again, and picks up the phone from the
rug…..
The knocking grows louder…
They had separated last NY’s eve, this year they were
together. Besides the obvious class differences and culture clashes of Punjabi and Gujarati............they had bigger issues....They didn’t give in or acquiesce on whatever mattered to each of
them, his career ambistions..., her financial commitments, his insane work schedule, her concern for her friends and
family, her work, his stubbornness about delaying having a child………..but they
both agreed on one thing their hunger for each other…… he walked away sipping
her cold chai to get the door… she walked back to her sun spot sat down…and
pretended to eat…
yaar.. can u send them to an island??? hope they can talk then...
ReplyDeletehahahaha OMG i totally agree with u and not only talk but ofcourse do something lalalallalalalaa :')
DeleteFinallyyyyy! Read both the updates back to back and loved them :)
ReplyDeleteOh I was loving him tease her! It should have carried on...nevertheless :)
I agree with Shantanu, she is a complete turn on when she is drunk and on top of that when she is talking non-stop! I found it completely adorable :)
Urgh. Will be there a chance were they actually talk without any disturbance? Or would it be out of the blue, just randomly! I so wanted to hear out what she was about to say till Ritu and the phone...sighh!! How long?
I was wondering IF the physical aspect of they relationship keeps them going, What if that hunger is diminished? Do they value each other emotionally? For Shantanu, his possessiveness and care is obvious, you see it through his gestures but I never get that feel from Khanak. For some reason, I find him more attached and involved in this relationship than her, maybe due to the fact she is less expressive and talkative...I cant pinpoint it because personally if something triggered her to end this relationship, she will! Or maybe she will consider definitely...whereas I dont see Shantanu like that. He will keep it till the end, no matter how much differences they have.
Update soooooon!
loved the teasings
ReplyDeleteshan held her arm between his legs and she didnt want to loose and trying & trying & trying but atlast she was succeeded when only shan let it
awww the making out was so damn sexy
all the questions which he asked while making out where not answered exactly hehehe and i loved it i just love this khanak and shan ofcourse :)))
tchhh cmon man plz leave them alone world for gods sake let them talk properly i hate this knocking on the door and his damn phone ringing all the time very huge disturbance and enemy in our shanak's life
update soon :)
Loved it!!! It is freaking hot!!! ShaNak are the best in whatever they do!!! Be it fighting each other endlessly,loving each other unconditionally,arguing furiously,infuriating to the core,teasing each other mindlessly,etc..:) And its just between ShaNak!!!
ReplyDeletePhone is the biggest enemy to ShaNak apart from others like Shaan and Khanak's univided attention to work and family respectively!!!
Looking forward and thanks for writing a fascinating update!!! :)
yep..jab bhi dhonon baath karna shuru karthe hein..toh koi na koi knock kartha ya hir phone kartha..
ReplyDeleteseychelles bej dho dhonon ko..they need a break from all this craziness..especially from their work..
Loved it a lot aditee!! :D
ReplyDeleteespecially the lines at the end, loved it a lot :D
indeed, they have to run away :P
waiting for next one..
update soon :))))))
very cute update! enjoyed it!
ReplyDeletethat was fiery, passionate!! the only problem is that no matter how many thousand parts you write about them, it is never going to be enough.....we want more of this couple!! loved their "fight" in this part!!
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