Friday, January 25, 2013

Part 72


Jan 2nd 2012
9: 14 AM
Ritu has a Noon flight back to Delhi, both friends are in deep serious conversation at the breakfast table. 
R”To Sonali ko bolo pehle NURSING kar le phir baat karegi.
K:Hmmm
R:Mystery you need to be assertive with that chick.
K:I am, Bua, Dadi, Bai sabse zyaada main bolti hoon usko
D:Beta tumhe ek aur pancake?
K:Dadi mujhe poha chahiye (hesitant)
D:Ghar to tera hai wont you ask more demandingly
Khanak is embarrassed…
K:Umm.. I guess..
R:Iske kaano mein Dadi iphone mein ek recording daal do aap, timeless loop that will keep reminding her that..
K:Funny!
Kritik brought their bags down, Shaan was at work at 7, his goodbyes happened at the tennis court this morning, he said he would call Ritu after she got to the airport.
After dinner, and hanging out, Khanak had approached Shaan, “aaj main” she said…
Their eyes did all the talking…
Ritu had interrupted and said “Excuse me Gujral, aapki wife chahiye mujhe”
S had continued to stare…
R:Baat sun Mystery (hissing)
R had dragged her to the balcony to give her “advice”, “Last year to jinx ho gaya, you had separated on NY day already, this year, you should go sleep in yourown bed”
“Nahi” she said
“Listen to me you dork, subah jaldi uthenge dono and then we will hang out”
K knew that will not happen, it was already past midnite and her eyes and body were begging her to fall asleep
K:There is so much to talk abt
R:AND you are sleepy
K:I am not..
R:U are too
K clammed up, Ritu plucked a rose from the nearest bush “Here my love, sun, I promise”
K laughed
R pretended to respond to a text.. “See I cant keep thinking abt you, my miya is in ----“
K had smacked her
R:Ouch! Ab main jaaoon?
Khanak, yawning “JA”
Ofcourse, he cant have her sleeping immediately… though she was actually floating off… smiling to herself…
“Iam really sleepy Shantanu” she moaned
“I know” he agreed, pulling the covers off her body…..
“Did your friend abandon you?” he asked, sliding over her
“Its not what you think” bristling “Ouch” pushing him away
“Tell me then”, binding her arms and legs under his…….his lips everywhere
She didn’t… and he didnt insist to know……. He pestered her for other things………..and got them all………
“Only because you will let me sleep soon” she declared defensively..
“Ofcourse” he groaned, as her arms wrapped around him securely, and her body became pliant and inviting…..
It was past 2 when she actually began sleeping, so “Early morning balcony date with Ritu” did not happen……
R: Tu Bua ko bol, we’ll start looking in Gujarati matrimony first…
K looked defeated..
K:They have no clue, she has a romanticized version of Punjabi lifestyle
R:I mean tum log to vegetarian ho na?Religious…
K:Tell me about it! (embarrassed)
R: You married one so she wants to?
K:Who knows?
R:Is DADI OK?
K: She doesn’t know, this seed has been planted by Sonali, bus Bua main aur Bai jaante hain
Dadi can hear Nandu and Dadi talk in Punjabi
K:I have no idea what they are talking about, Sonali thinks it’s a joke! (insecure)
R:They are not talking about you Mystery, its about some Lohri tradition your Sasu Ma’s family followed.
K:Sonali thinks adjustment is a piece of cake
R:She is an infatuated fool
K:Pradyun ki shaadi karwaye us se (giggling)
R: She will marry him, Pradyun wont, as long as you are alive (mock tragic, backhand on her forehead)
K: U are complete mental
R: AB PLEASE Sonali mat bolna yeh baat
K:Ummm… nahi… (preoccupied)
Dadi:Khanak, poha khao beta!
Khanak begins to……….
R:They baby you so much, and you want a baby?
K:Kyon nahi? (arguing)Mujhe chahiye (adamant)
Nandu and Ritu hug and say goodbyes in Punjabi…
Madz does too, Khushboo is out for a baby and Mom class,
Khanak scarfs her food down, drinking her strawberry milk on the side……
K:I needed to marry a strawberry farmer (giggling)
Dadi overhears “Batati hoon tere miya ko sham ko”
K:No Dadi! (turning crimson)
Nandu:Yeh sharmati kitna hai?
R:Sab meri training, Maasi
R walks up to her friend and whispers in her ear “So did you guys do it again at nite?” “Record?  thrice in one day?”
“Shut up” says Khanak vehemently
Ritu :See maasi, I caused it again!! (rubs Khanak’s red cheeks)
They all laugh, seriously amused………..as a mortified Khanak looked on..
Khanak starts to think about Kaka, Aada and Sonali’s visit, going to Pune to meet the Trust Accountant, talking to Sonali’s HOD about choosing a specialty in 3rd year………..and then Sonali’s wedding……..
It was as if she lived two separate lives……..the pinnacle of pleasure she experienced with her husband, the incessant caring his family displayed were divorced from the challenges she faced............ many of them insurmountable............all with her own family………all alone……..







12 comments:

  1. Loved it aditee :D
    Finally they didn't fight on new years day :P
    eekkkss! i love ritu, she makes Khanak realize how, overwhelming Gujral family is for her and she's way happy when she's with her husband :)))
    Its high time, she should share everything with him, hope he listens to her :P
    waiting for next update aditee..
    Update soon :D

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  2. Loved it Aditee for many reasons :)

    Urgh. This Shonali seems screwed not in ekta style, I mean kitni stupid hai! Her fantasies only work in reel life not real. It a whole different ball as Khanak pointed alot of baggage come with it, its obviously a fairytale yet it can be delusional once you live with it though Khanak is blessed with a compassionate FIL and dadi, but as she points culture,language and status reflect peoples attitude towards you.
    Aditee...bring anyone else but not Shonali, Pata nahin kyon I dislike her abit too much AUR yaar no ways I rather have Prad a eligible than him with Shonali

    About the last 'alone'...somethings will make their entrance slowly...the pride doesn't let her use her husbands money and even after couple of years I'm sure she wont ask either but spontaneously the issue will slowly evolve...it will take her time for acceptance but she will learn to accept its okay to take.

    Ritu ka departure and soon Prad and Ray :'(
    We need Khanak over to her place now! I really will miss her...do make her appearances whenever possible

    P.S. Weekend update likely? Please do update sooon :)

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  3. Loved it!!! Pradyun and Sonali..No ways!!! I too don't like her..Gujrals gonna celebrate Lohri..Awesome!!! Will Shaan wear traditional dress atleast this time??? Want Khanak to wear Punjabi dress too if possible..:)

    Khanak taking all responsibilities..Hope Mehul to share it with her in future!!!

    I just loved the "timeless loop" part!!! Too good!!! How you think so uniquely!!! Superb!!!

    Wish CASA get published..Please try it!!! Also want Yasharan to act in it in a show..They'll surely rock it!!!

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an amazing update!!! :)

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    1. ya me too want yasharan to act it in a show OH GOD PLZ PLZ PLZZZZZ HAMARI YE DUA QABOOL KARO and make it happen soon :)))

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  4. eekkss loved it
    shan again didnt khanak let sleep even if she is very tired how mean shan u need to control urself for ur poor wife LOL!!!!!
    pradyun and sonali NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO aisa nahi ho sakta
    sonali is not bad but very very stupid she is always living in her dream reality me kabhi aati hi nahi idiot pradyun jaisa smart insaan doesnt suit her but she deserves someone jo use uske fairytale se bahar nikale and love her too :)
    ritu will be gone tch will miss her but bring her back soon
    update soon :)))

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  5. this Sonali needs to get mature and stop being infatuated with what can never be, Shanak need to live their lives to the fullest now

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  6. loved how Ritu let Shanak be together.........aur Khanak ka sharmana is too cute!!
    I love Pradyun........Sonali and him just cannot be an option!! thanks for another wonderful part Aditee!!

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  7. All 68-72 parts are lovely :)
    Sorry couldn't comment regulerly was so busy!
    Update soon...........
    Keep it up aditee:)

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  8. Ritu & Dadi are enough to remind Khanak abt her haq... Ritu rightly said .. she need to talk to Sonali soon... waiting for Khanak's miya...

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  9. Thanks you guys for the lovely compliments. It warms my heart....
    Vineeta calling it a masterpiece makes me feel honored.
    I am so jealous of you!
    Kitni shaadiyan attend ki tumne is season mein?
    Are you in Dilli?
    SIGH! SIGH! SIGH!
    I wish I could have gone with you :-(
    Next time I am in India, I am going to reach out to you and tag along like a sore thumb...........
    I READ EVERY COMMENT MULTIPLE TIMES, YOU GUYS!
    I wait and wait and wait for each person to comment.........
    I am more addicted to you guys than you are to this tale
    I mean it!
    THANKS VERY MUCH!
    HUGS
    Aditee

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    1. Aditeeeeee you made my day...............shadiyaan attend kiye jaa rahi hoon main...........kal bhi gayi thi!! iam in Kolkata Aditee and it will be an ABSOLUTE PLEASURE if you can ever come along with me!! CASA romance is the best i have ever read........ kuch khaas hi baat hai usme and it is very real!! thanks a lot for writing it!!

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    2. Welcome Aditee :)
      Thanks a ton for writing

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