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Mangal Kunj
Malabar Hill
Jan 7th 2012
5 ish PM
She managed to get to the door with him trailing before he
stopped her by clicking the door shut
“Khanakkk!” hissing
“Excuse me but I have to talk with Aada” she looked up at
him, somber, her eyes showed her hurt
“The transmission on Rishi’s car died I am not making that
up” He let go of her hand and framed his palms on either side of her head
She twisted the door knob….
“That’s fine”
“Why wont you talk with me?”
“I am just busy…”
“How about…. NOW?” frustrated
“I said 3 Shantanu”
“I just told you Rishi’s car wouldn’t start”
They had a staring duel…
“Why are YOU all dressed up?” eyes following the silver bell
string…
“Are you wearing anklets through the button holes”
“Genius!” she thought mockingly
“Aada laaye mere liye for NY’s, husband didn’t give me
anything” she supplied deliberately
He laughed, reached the bells
She just covered them with her bare hand…
“And where is the brace?”
Their hand linked on her silver string
“BTW Lunch was all vegetarian” smiled sweetly
“And dinner will be too” riling him…
He ran his thumb on her left wrist… “What did you make?”
“Nothing you would have cared to eat” trembling…
She fidgeted…
“Do you recall, this is EXACTLY how you fidgeted when I
first stormed into your apartment unannounced?”
“I was no… “ she stopped
“I”
He watched her slowly lose her speech… it happened a lot….its
as if she spoke those words within her mind….
“Ummm”
“You were SO nervous”
“I didn’t… I didn’t want you… there…”
“I” she paused
“I thought you were going to touch” she blurted……… finally, ………saying
what she had struggled to say for five minutes…
He took a step forward…letting his body touch hers, but not
pressing in any way…
“I wanted to take you to bed actually” he said firmly…
causing her insides to implode, ……………a certain, what seemed terrifying at the
first encounter…., now familiar ache enveloping her…..…at his open sexual
aggression….. not a speck of moisture left inside her mouth… she stared dumbstruck…
breathing audibly…
Shaking the trance like feeling, reliving every second of
that first private encounter…
“I thought you only cared about your motorcycles and music”
she said
He laughed…
They could hear voices outside
“You are dressed up too” she said, why did you wear these
clothes when you know you are coming home?” she reached with her right hand and
felt the edge of his collar………her trapped her hand there with his jaw…….
“I called you twice”
“I was winning, I couldnt stop then” he declared,
incredulous…
Yet again giving her a glimpse of his core ambition in life………
“You should have come over and watched me work up a sweat”
he said amused…
“I’ve seen you” she paused… “Work up a sweat I mean…” she
said huskily….
He groaned.. in acknowledgement…… “Ofcourse” he said for her
ears only…
Their eyes spoke for a while
“Khanak, there was too much traffic towards Worli” he
pleaded
She wasn’t going to forgive anytime soon……
“Main kal Aada ke saath Pune ja rahi hoon”
He let his weight land on her “Ouch” he said angry…as she
sucked her breath in hard, delighting under the assault of his weight
“You can stay out all day” she said granting him his freedom…..
He didn’t agree…”Your Kaka can visit” he argued
“Meri Trust Accountant se meeting hai 2 baje” she said somberly,
as he began to make out shrewdly……..
His jaw clenched…. She could feel it on her neck……… “There
is a crooked bell… its going to nick you” she said… protective, caressing his
jaw……..
He undid her bell string savagely…
“Cant you do it over the phone?”
Something about that Q made her furious “Can you play tennis
over the phone?”
Her comeback amused him but he was angry too……..
“Be home by 5”
“Unless someone needs a ride, then I have to do the right
thing” she countered……
They made out without saying a word………..
She stood on her toes and kissed him fully………he picked her
up… as the knock on the door happened….
“Khanak beta, Fa and I have to go meet someone in Nariman? Haan
Nariman beta, Sonali is asleep” her Aada just spoke rapidly in Gujju to a shut
door………
Shaan’s grip tightened, as his wife’s relaxed….
She groaned on his chest……
He walked to the couch………. Pushing her down, laying on her………..before
she could say “Theek hai Aada” he kissed her
“The Trust has a Mumbai branch” he said He would KNOW, his
family paid into it every year…
She squirmed, fighting him, while allowing him more access………
“Go with me” she begged kissing his neck
“Cant” he said…
Her kurta lay on the floor…………..
They stayed in the embrace…. Reveling in each other’s touch…
“What did you eat?” she asked not being able to help herself…
“Turkey pot pie” he answered followed by “Brunch” …
A strange feeling of guilt overtook her….
“I” she began…
“Aada asked me if you liked Oondhiyo”
“What?’ he asked confused, buried in her chest area……
She giggled…
“I bet you told him I didn’t care for anything Gujarati”
passionate…
“Just like I don’t care for anything Punjabi” she countered
They stared at each other interminably, as his lower body compelled
her into conceding……
“I can make eggs for you” she offered, trying to recall what
he taught her at honeymoon
“I can” he paused bending down… whispered in her ear……..
“Nahi” she said blushing a deep crimson
She would later let herself out of the room while he will take a nap…. Help HL with arranging
dinner….her Aada will notice that she is wearing some other outfit but will not
comment… Dadi will observe her tousled locks… and learn her grandson is taking
a early evening nap and just clear her throat…….Sonali will squeal in
excitement wanting to know when she can raid Khanak di’s closet……. Bua would
have given her money for 3 outfits, Khanak for 2 yet, Sonali would manage to go
back to college with a dozen new ones in her kitty…………..
“Main ek raat Pune mein ruk jaaon Dadi?” she will ask
deviously
“Nahi” Dadi will answer without giving it a moment’s thought………
Loved it aditee!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for updating :D
Making out session was heart warming! *blush*
Shaan told there's branch in Mumbai, right? then why is she hell bent on going to Pune?? :P
Punishment time for hubby:P
wish even he could accompany her, we'll see..he said he won't, then he probably he won't!
ha! dadi's Nahi! Today dadi's line took away ;)
Waiting for next..
update soon:)))))
eekkss sach me like chandu would say making out session was heart warming
ReplyDeletei want khanak to go to pune just like that maja aayega shan ko thodaaa gusse me dekhke :D
update soon :)
OMGGG i loved what he said when he for the first time went to her chembur apartment
Deleteawww i was blushing so hard hehehehe
now he can say it easily there is nothing to hide :)
you took the words jaisy :D
Deletei came back to tell, that i forgot to mention about their first private encounter..
she and he both told the truth :D
Loved that very much :)))
Love it so much!!! :) Shaan wont allow her to go to Pune but she likes to defy him always so she will..:) Liked the make out..*blush,blush*
ReplyDeleteAnd ShaNak talking about their first meeting in Khanak's apartment is too good!!! It took back to memories of 1 year back when I read it first time!!! (I do read Casa season 1 many times even now!!! Casa is magical) How can one forget anything about CASA!!! Impossible!!!
Looking forward and thank you so much for writing a fascinating update..:)
If I owned a publication I would ve published Casa!!! Really wish it will some day on ShaNak!!!
ReplyDeleteI CONCUR!
DeleteIt deserves every bit of the attention and glory :)
Aditee! It was MIND-BLOWING!
Really REALLY cherished them and their discussion on the first encounter! I call it the scuncie encounter :P
I loved to have them discussing more of the past interactions! Gives me the insight of them and their thoughts during the time
SIGH!I don't know what to compliment and what not. You are AMAZING...there will me none fictional characters like them in centuries believe me so :D
SIGH! Again...for them, the eye-locks, jaw, hands and I can go on and on! I LOVE when their eyes are mingle...speaks volumes! Thats why I don't find the reason for them to 'talk' :P
This was a killer update Aditee...........simply relished it!! thanks for writing such beautiful stuff......will be reading it again and again till the next one comes!! romance ho toh aisa!!
ReplyDeleteloved it.. x
ReplyDeletep.s.. sorry i havent commented been soo vust will try and comment properly when im free...xxxx
Aditee iam loving the fact that both of them are talking and expressing a lot nowadays.........especially Khanak........this is making the updates all the more fascinating!!
ReplyDeleteDadi rocks, loved the update!
ReplyDeleteThat was lovely...
ReplyDeletelooks like Dadi learnt a lesson in how to handle khanak...her instant nahi was superb...
shaan asking khanak to return before 5 n have the meeting in Mumbai itself...and their make out..the way she asked him to accompany her...
super adorable these 2 are...
awaiting the next part...
boy... he needs a strict stick.. and it shuld be his kid.. waiting... Dadi was perfect in her answer... Khanak's plan flopped..
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