Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Part 81


Towel wrapped around his waist, hair soaking wet… He approached, noticing a bunch of letters/statements from the bank in her hands
S:Did you have a good trip?
K:Hmmm
S: Your new phone should be here today, I asked my admin to deliver it at ur desk..
K:Oh!
They both stayed quiet
She quickly slipped the letters back into the basket
S:How is Kaka
K:The same… he is in pain sometimes, they ran some tests last week, Kaki wants him to be treated in Mumbai (agitated, unaware saying more than she should)
He listens carefully
K: Roz Mumbai kaise aayenge? Yaha rehna (shakes her head)
He stares stunned, that lil body packed SO MUCH WORRY… where did she have the brain power to think so much… how she did tirelessly
K: Kaki ko to (STOPS!)
K:I am sorry… (sad)
S: I wont tell ur Kaki I promise (grinned softly)
K:I know she calls you everyday (not willing to give up)
S:You called me twice…
K:Dadi ne phone nahi uthaya (upset)
S smiled approached
K:Shantanu…
He just hugged her…. “What did the Trust say”
K: More like what did YOU say to Mr Sathe?
S:Nothing… why? (surprised)
K:He agreed to my plan (confused) Mr Kopatwalkar ne to…
S: I don’t want to talk about this Khanak…
K:Arent you going to be mad at me?
S:At nite… yes… in bed….
She groaned… clinging
S: You are over extending yourself…
K:I know… (tired)
S: Why?
K:I….
S: Hmmm
K: Ive always been this way (softly)
S: You are very careless Khanak…
K:Not with money…
S: But with yourself (hugging her tight)
K:I only do what I can (lying)
S:Riiight…
She nuzzled, standing on her toes….
K:I like this soap (gently feeling the towel knot)
S:I have an 8:30 (don’t do it!)
She slips it off anyway….
They laughed softly, teasing each other… he said something for her ears only, she responded back spiritedly…
K: I am so sleepy
S:Take the day off
K: I… I cant (on his lips)
S:Will you tell me about the Trust issue
K: Kyon? (fearful)
S:khanak… you drive me insane
K:You as well…
S: I was shaking when you called me and started to cry…
Tickling his bely softly
K: I wish I could have seen that…Shantanu…
He kissed her
S: Why did you have to be so independent
K: Why do you have to be so (stood on her toes and whispered in his ears)









12 comments:

  1. Thank you :D
    he is..hmm..caring, loving, s---, everything in a wonderful guy :D
    i love him more:D and her too :)
    Shaan was right, she needed a hug :D
    A warm, splendid update :D
    Now i can go to sleep aaram se :P :D
    i seriously wanted to hear what she said to him :D
    Can i just be there in between them?? :P LOL!
    Love you aditee :D Thank you so much for this update :D
    You are just one awesome writer, i would never get tired reading of casa, it is as enticing as before, when i read the first thread of casa :D
    Waiting for next..i seriously want her to share her problems with him, did Shaan solve anything?? what did he speak to the trust people??
    More eager to know :D
    You know how to keep us on the edge of our seat :D
    Update soon :)))))) and thanks once again :D

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    1. eekkss mujhe bhi i just wish that i can be there in between them watching all their actions hehehhehee :)

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  2. Love it!!! :) It was romantic!!! Like I always say ShaNak conversation is something..so endearing!!!

    Shaan is so caring..Can someone be like him in real??? ShaNak are lucky to ve eachother!!!

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update..:)

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    1. ya bang on girl
      i love the line shanak are lucky to have each other :)))
      seriously mujhe aisa kab milega tch

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    2. I AGREE!
      We are so lucky to find a epic piece like Casa :P

      He is caring...its just he has a unconventional way of showing it and for him its a certain people who is compassionate about

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  3. eekkksss loved it
    aww the hug
    glad glad that they talk and not fight
    shan care for khanak so much man
    i saw him saying this first time verbally that he cared for her so much
    he was shaking when she called OMG sooo happy that he said this
    heheee khanak was trying to unknot the towel and shan worried about his meeting stupid
    eekkss the kiss hayeee they will make me mad
    after so many days they have a good and peaceful conv without in bed :P heeheehehee
    waiting for next
    plz plzz plzzzz update tomorrow also :)))

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  4. Can't they get more adorable than this!
    I'm losing all the words to describe this story!!

    This is BEAUTIFUL!!
    Both are slowly starting to talk...there are slowly insinuating on the issues they tried to refrain from... Lovely!

    SIGHHH! Such a LONG way... Khanak being forthcoming is enthralling!!! I remember Paula mentioning he will make her happy...he does certainly.

    More than this, Khanak's self respect heightens Shantanu's admiration of her being her...the hug said it all in more way than one, maybe he hates she doesnt involve him and ask for help obviously he worries BUT he clearly respects her for having a dignifying way of handling herself and the family

    Thanks a ton Aditee...you dont know the thrill when ever a update pops up :D

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  5. haaye haaye...
    they both r flirting at the same time discussing important things..
    so lovely update..

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  6. that was such a fabulous update Aditee.......loving the way how Khanak is opening up and Shantanu is expressing himself and also loved the hug and the kiss and the whispers..........casa is beautiful!!

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  7. LOved both 80 n 81 superb..........

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  8. lovely.. waiting for more... these 2 are perfect..

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