Monday, February 11, 2013

Part 80


Part 79
Mangal Kunj
Malabar Hill
Jan 9th 2012
Monday
7:14 AM
She let herself in quietly, the house was quiet, no sign of Dadi either,
Sonali: Sab kahan chale gaye? Khushboo kitni achhi aa rahi hai Di
Khanak was used to the clean orangey smell that permeated across the house in the mornings, the help had it clean and sparkling by 6 AM
Pradeep was back with them, Shaan’s  strict instructions on not allowing his wife to be alone. A cab was called in for Fa and Aada, he will bring them back later today or tomorrow…
Sonali: Main jaaoon aapke saath office? (happy)
Khanak: No! Don’t be silly, apna samaan pack karo, sham ko college, bahut enjoy kar chuki tum, tie your hair Sonali, kya hair cut karke aayi tum?
There was a clump of messy locks around her forehead and eyes
Sonali:Aapki tarah cut nahi kiya! (sad) Next time aapke saath Oberoi mein
Khanak: Main Chembur jaati hoon (smirk)
Khanak is outside her suite…
Sonali: Jeeju chale gaye?
Khanak:Mujhe nahi maloom
Sonali lingers
Khanak: Put your things and go have breakfast, mujhe nikalna hai 20 min mein
Sonali walks away reluctantly
She enters his suite… its quiet…
She can hear the shower, she goes to the chest, where her mail basket is, looks through her mail… the Trust letter Mr Kopatwalkar talked about isn’t in there
“How did he say it was mailed then?” she wondered
Didn’t hear the footsteps along the long passage way with classic band and movie posters lining the wall….
Shaan:Hey!
She turned around startled
Unconsciously arranged her hair..
K: Tha(nks) she acknowledged
Towel wrapped around his waist, hair soaking wet… He approached, noticing a bunch of letters/statements from the bank in her hands

















7 comments:

  1. Loved it!!! :) Khanak retured to her house!!! Sonali too came with her..hmmph..Awww!!! Shaan's, "Hey" is too good!!! Superb!!!

    And you ended it there..:'( Not fair at all!!! Please update soon..:)

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update..:)

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  2. I thought you forgot to post other half of the update :P

    She hasn’t got the drubbing yet! Why do I have a feeling he has taken another alternate?
    I’m suspecting he has something to do with the trust issue, he might help out discreetly! For him he will have to do it by crook evidently her accepting money from him is out of question. Obviously she doesn’t know yet maybe this is the only way he can actually simplify one of millions of binds she has

    I noticed another, how realistically you intervene issues within other contention thats how life is, it’s not like we have one set of problems! We have many, these just prop up again and again till there is a solution if not than we just let go to find stability.

    Update soon and THANK YOU!

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  3. WHAT??? itna chota update :(
    eekks she is back
    aww shan hotty hot only on towel
    sonali chipkali she better go now chuttiya khatam
    cant wait for next
    but itna chota update :(((
    update soon

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  4. chalo.......both of them met.........what next.........will be waiting!!

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  5. Aditeeeeeeeeeeee. I wanted to know what happened in Pune after his fone call.. pls do update that in an FB.. loved this update though..

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  6. seriously not fare :(((((
    kyun mar rahi ho hume??
    b/w loved the update:)
    sonali is trying to become like Khanak so that she can grab some attention from Shaan?! :P
    It ain't happening Sonali :P
    ahem! what's going to happen next?? she said that she has to get back to work, will they be able to talk??
    a fight, may be??
    im hanging over here..i know u might update in next 2 or 3 hrs, right?? agar plan nahi ki na, toh abhi plan banao, aur ek lamba sa update..please...
    im waiting aditee...:)

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