Mangal Kunj
Malabar Hill
January 11th 2012
Tuesday
8:44 PM
Aada and Fa were talking about something important, Aada's face lit up as he saw her enter
K: Is she all settled in?
A: Ha beta
K:When is her next vacation?
Fa: I didnt ask (clueless)
Khanak was raining Sonali as her own, Bua was not educated, Fa couldnt care less
K:Jinse aap milne gaye, unhoney koi help ki Fa ki job ke liye? (Gujju)
A:We dont know beta (worried,) they all say "Ho jaayega" "But in Mumbai things are so different
Dadi hears her G DIL and walks out of her rom
D: Kab aayi puttar
K: A minute ago... where is everybody?
D:Somebody is upstairs... everybody is at work, Khushboo is on Amogh's play date
K:Oh! (smiles)
D:Jao oopar
K:Jee
A:Oh! Sha... damadji aa gaye?
Dadi laughs "Dont say that in front of him, woh naraaz hoga"
A:Iska var hai
D: I know Mistryji, but Shaan hates such titles
K:Dadi main change karke aati hoon
D:He said he had a call..
K:Ofcourse! (just like her hubby)
He is in the balcony on the phone.... dressed to kill navy jeans and a white tee
He hangs up a minute after she enters...
Follows her to her closet
S: How did it go?
K:Work was good....
S:Niiiceee
K:I met him... hes handsome
S:You are married now, so that shouldnt matter! (dismissive)
k: I can look cant I (looked at him sombrely)
S:Go ahead (tucked his hands into his pockets) all you want!
K: I told him i'll think about it...
S:And...?
K:Woh... Woh... chahte hain... I..
S:Hmm
K:I.. should do the math myself... review what he gave me and meet again
S:Are you (going to?)
K:This...
K:Aapne kaha...
S: So you wont....
K:I am tired and hungry...
S: Sure! go eat!
K: I...
S:Did you drop Sonali?
K:Aada aur Fa gaye
Pause...
K: Shantanu... its very difficult to let go...
S: Oh really? (mocking)
He reached and felt a sparkly sequin on her chest... lingered... watching her let out her breath audibly............ she leaned forward allowing him access... wanting to be fondled....
K: I have been doing this for 8 years now... jab se main 17... 18 shaayad
S listens...
K: Even Soo(raj never cared what I did)... I
S notices the subtle change in expression.. he realizes she was going to say something about that guy but swallowed it fully... it irked him... OK............ the fact that she even thought about him... or attempted to say his name... pissed him off
S: I cannot be like him... I wont...
Turned around and walked out
Turned back in paused to stare and stepped out again
OMG! just a minute ago, i posted i want an update..and u posted! :D Thanks a ton :D
ReplyDeleteoh wow! Loved it aditee :D
Ofcourse Shaan CANNOT be sooraj! That's how special our Shaan is :D
Finally Sonali is out! (leaves a huge sigh! LOL!)
Aada and Fa is still here?? i mean, did they have some work too?? About Fa's job??
Khanak met Shiv, that's good!
Loved their convo like always..she hoped him to fondle her?! i agree with her..somethings cannot be easily let go..:)
I loved the blue line :D
Though she doesn't think about Sooraj anymore..she in a flow mentioned about him..
Loved it aditee :D
i remember a line from your comments list..yes yours..
Someone had mentioned that 'u know how to pamper ur readers'!
And i totally agree to this statement! :D
Thank you so much once again:)))
Update soon..can i be greedy, and ask for another one?? Please..:)
Loved it..:) Glad Khanak met Shiv and had a discussion..:)
ReplyDeleteShaan is possessive just like her..Just imagine how she'll react if Shaan wants to look some girl just like that..lol..:D She'll be damn furious..He flirted with Ashwini Kumar few days back only..rofl..:D
Ouch!!! She took Sooraj's name..He must be terribly hurt..:( He dont like him and Pradyun at all..After a long time she took his name though!!! I remember garba dance when she indirectly said his name(Sooraj brought those dandiya sticks) during separation..Sooraj always comes between them in one or other way..:( Shaan wants to be the one and only in Khanak's life..:)
Shaan can never be Sooraj and she knows that more than anyone else..I too think she took his name in a flow and not intentionally!!!
Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update..:)
TG she met with shiv and had a discussion
ReplyDeleteofcourse shan cannot be like sooraj he is special something else our shanak are very special
ohh he got upset and walked away
what will khanak do now? will she be agree to shan about having a financial planner
waiting to know
plz plz plzz aditee update tomorrow also and a long one :)
Thank you Aditee :)
ReplyDeleteBoth are going to be passive and try to amend the glitch that is the exciting part...Khanak's going to somehow make up for the mention of Sooraj as she knows Shaan doesn't take it well, maybe she'll consider to meet Shiv again for his sake?
The mention of Sooraj even if it is a slip but its a reasonable I don't expect her NOT to mention him at all. Im so glad you have the touch...even though how much shantanu hates it...for Khanak he was a significant part of her life and sadly neither can both change it
The blue...ummmmm Khanak's is well aware HE can never be Sooraj rather he holds a place too which NO-ONE does :)
Please don't leave us hanging here...a weekend update likely :)
she bring Sooraj again and Shaan's answer was perfect.. she needs to let go to some extent so that they can find their feet themselves..
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ReplyDeleteloved the update!! Khanak should do something to let Shaan know that he is the most important person in her life............just the way she had done when last time sooraj's memories had come up between them in Ahmedabad.........it was so romantic......will have to read it again!! they are talking a lot more nowadays and iam loving it!!
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