Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Part 90


Modi Dastur
Worli Sea Face
January  12th 2012
4:10 PM
Her lunch sat in her drawer.. she couldn’t get to it… didn’t feel hungry either… her head was beginning to hurt
“Signing Shiv up is afterall not such a bad idea” she thought
Between working the numbers for M&D’s new project, they were undertaking for Axis Construction, and taking care of her money matters, every inch of her brain was filled with numbers.
Axis was small but dreamt big… they had bought a couple of old run down 1960s houses in Marine Drive… a Middle East investor was heavily betting on Axis………Khanak’s new project was  the 16 apartment luxury condo project.
Ram was upbeat about the whole thing… his eyes were set though on the Lower Parel textile mill project.
The Bangalore Builder Esteem was leaving no stone unturned in nabbing it
Rahat and Esteem’s CEOs were captured feteing Lower Parel’s Municipal Commissioner
The Mumbai TV networks were on to something… except this was nothing new for Ajmera………..
If Esteem gets it… Modi & Dastur would be hired… Ram would get a big chunk… Khanak’s next milestone it would be……..
Bai had called after a long time, curious why she hadn’t called much…
Aada was leaving tonite… with Fa
Bai worried if she gave any more money to Fa or Sonali
Khanak told her about the “money management help”
Bai was ashamed… she asked if her “var” would be paying off the loans
Khanak reassured her that it wouldn’t happen.
Mom In Law, Bhabhi and her had a spa appointment for the evening… she wasn’t sure if she would go…
“Three nites without s---, and you are in a mess” she mocked herself…
She was in bed fast asleep, he didn’t wake her… she saw his side  crumpled and tousled… and some of her clothing was undone…
She was in a hurry to get to work, so she didn’t pause to think when he left for work……….
Pradyun had texted her about Suraj Kund Crafts mela in Feb, and if she wanted to go…
“I could see Ritu” she thought…
She reached for her third glass of lemonade… as it continued to rain outside…
She wondered what was for lunch…
Her phone beeped a text…
It was a picture her husband had taken of the sunrise that morning…
“?” he asked
Orange blended with blue… as the sun sparkled in the horizon…
 she wrote back…“Awesome”
“The pic or taker?” he asked
“jpeg” she returned… mischievously
Again looked at her lunch thermos… her calendar beeped her next meeting… She checked the next week.. scrolled up and down through the month…….. and began to count…her heart skipped a beat…

She walked to the conference room… it was full, already… Axis was here everyday… they were small and untrusting….
The meeting went for 3 hours…
Khanak left the room walking back to her cube… finished her warm lemonade….
CNN-IBN’s news alert popped…
She went to their website… “Ulwe is the new multi crore project. MMC, MMDA and and builder hand in glove…” the ticker rolled
“Picketing and vandalism at Ajmera’s Ulwe Site , Union management clash”
Her face paled as she read on…



















13 comments:

  1. Loved it!!! :) Good Khanak met Shiv and everything is getting better..Thanks to Shaan!!! Pradyun never leaves any chance..lol..:D Such a cute guy..

    I loved the texting of the picture and her reply to him..;)

    OMG!!! Did she missed the date??? Is she carrying??? :D Wow!!!

    OMG!!! What happened to Shaan??? That was shocking..:O Hope he is safe and not harmed!!!

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update..:)

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  2. And can you post CASA season 1 in AIW forum??? Like daily one update..:) Miss ShaNak story there and what better than CASA!!! :D

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    1. I am not sure about that place actually... I tried it... not sure I was delighted though...
      I like it here... for now
      Thanks Pooja

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    2. Thanks for replying Aditee..:)

      I know there many people wont comment..Just wish they to get to know about casa and all read it..:) I too like it here..:) Just wish you can post Casa 1 so all new readers you couldn't comment and gush that time can do it now..But I understand..No problem..:)

      And my name is Poonkuzhali not Pooja!!! You can call me Poo..:)

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  3. hope he is all right, great job and looking forward to more from you whether it's this story or a new one

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  4. Nice update :)
    Next part sooon please.........!

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  5. This mini update was action packed :O

    Yours or Khanaks sense of humour is epic! 'JPEG'! Where do YOU come up from stuff like this?

    Did Khanak miss her cycle? OH! How is the guy going to react to this? I dont see the 'happy' reaction from him!

    Aur secondly ending left be in shock...so unexpected as usual! Bechaari Khanak she is surely going to be out of her wits such a terrifying feeling especially for her who is so careful in protecting and following customs to T for this marriage to be kept

    Aditeee...UPDATE SOON and dont leave us hanging here!

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    1. what is 'JPEG'??
      i didn't get that..sorry..
      i don't think so Khanak is pregnant, if at all that's true, even i don't see happy reaction from him!

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  6. very interesting update Aditee.....will be looking forward for the next one......update soon!!

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  7. oh no! are we supposed to be scared??
    i mean..if you inform us first itself, then may be i can make my heart stronger?!
    Loved the update aditee :))))))))
    what's that with calendar??
    i agree..bahut chotu tha :( and a wrong time to stop also..
    Please continue soon..:)
    can i expect an update after about 2or 3 hrs?? maybe??

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  8. Lovely update Aditee! :))

    The pic part was too cute! :) and Prad, I'm no more talking abt his madness! :P YES! This is 'Madness'!!!

    Oh my! Did she really miss her cycles? Shaan??? :O

    You ended it at curious notes! What new work probs now?? CANNOT wait to read further! Update soooon Aditee! and thank you! :)))

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  9. Superb update
    Wats with the date
    Good that things are goin with shiv
    The text part was super cute
    Jpeg ... I loved it
    Now some issues with the mgt and union
    Hope all us good
    Waiting for shanak moments and Lukin fwd to the new story as well
    Em pretty sure it will be as good as real
    U r a brilliant writer :-)

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  10. love the asnwer for the pic hahahahaaa
    and chandu jpeg is the pic format it means that khanak's answer was pic she love the pic indirectly she gave the answer to tease shan hahahaa
    OMG what happened ? hope everything is fine

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