Part 101Mumbai
Around 8 PM
They both remained silent as he drove…. She looked out her
window, he flipped channels on his Sirius not bothering to lower the volume
when he hit death metal channels… she did not express any irritation… her
things were in the back seat. He had picked it up from Ritwik’s house while she
said her goodbye to Mr Pai
Vrunda and Vithal had persuaded them to stay for dinner… “a
meal without meat is close to starvation for my husband” she thought but said “
I will come back later Aunty… I promise” Khanak reassured….
“I wanted to stay she whispered.
“You always do” he responded unemotional…
“Tchhh”
He completely ignored that……..
Vithal showed her husband his new laptop, Shaan commented on
speed etc…
Ritwik wanted to see the Toureg’s keys, the keyless remote
fascinated him he wanted to know if he could unlock it, Shaan nodded…. He showed
Shaan the remote control car Khanak had bought for him, Shaan taught him how to
maneuver it… not to score any points with Khanak or anything…. He really didn’t
care to make an opinion about kids….
The car smelled like him….it was cluttered with gadgets and
papers… she didn’t ride it much unless they had to be someplace together….
There was no religious symbols anywhere….
His phone buzzed and beeped… he looked but didn’t answer…
except one…
He spoke bluntly…. He expressed concern didn’t say much…
Khanak knew it was about Esteem.. her husband’s Machiavellian plans………..
winning was of supreme importance…….
“Nachiket” he said sharply handing the phone to her
She gave him a “I don’t want to talk” look
“I told him you did” he said muscle clenching his jaw
She took it
“Are you mad at me?” Nachiket asked
“Not you” she said bluntly
Nachiket laughed heartily “He is smitten with that sense of
humor”
“Only the humor?” she asked dourly
Nachiket laughed again
“Smack Gujral if he acts like a jerk”
“Jee” she said quietly
“Havent seen you in a while where are you?”
“I am on the Marine Drive Medina Project”
“Al-Taibi brothers?”
“Jee”
“You don’t sound happy Khanak”
Khanak was quiet… her tears were coming back…..
“Call me sometime we can do lunch, or I will wring Gujral’s neck for you”
“Plan B Sounds good”
she said, as Nachiket laughed hysterically….
Her husband leaned and closed his hand over her phone held
one…
She let go of the phone, he held it longer than necessary…
taking it back eventually
“Rahat is back on site in the morning, the other guys will
be there as well, may be you and I should meet at 3?”
“You should go now!” she said loudly a lil shrill
“Shaan chuckled at something Nachiket said
“She is generally pissed”
“No” he said
Listened
“I’ll try”
“Oh I insist, you must go now, I can take a cab” she was
LIVID……
He drove quietly, but breaking speed laws…….
Screeched into the parking lot…….. the guard jumped out of
his skin…..
Got out and opened her door, she took forever to gather her
dupatta, and her kurta folds……. Checked her bangles and got down slowly
He slammed the door after her, and walked to the elevator….
“Mere bags?’ she said
“HL will bring it”
“Not if you are going to work at midnite” she stomped her
feet
He walked into the elevator, gave her a long stinging look
and let the doors slide shut as she waited by the locked car
When she went up a 15 mins later waited… adamantly by the
car…, when HL didn’t show up, she found HL cleaning the dinner table
“Aapko chabi di?”
“Nahi” he said confused
“Where did he go Dadi?’ she asked a visibly tickled septuagenarian
“Ooopar gaya hai nahaane”
She went up doing three steps at a time as Dadi smiled
openly “these two will drive each other insane” she said………. Khanak, looked up
every drawer, every nook where the keys could be, stormed into the bathroom…”shantanu
chaabi kahan hai?” she yelled…..
He was finishing up on his SHAVE!
“ Don’t BOTHER…. You are wasting your time” she said
pointing to his after-shave glistening jaw…
He gave her a sullen look turned to the shower cubicle and
slammed the nozzle…
The 8 or so jets shot in every direction, icy and piercing……soaking
her.. and him and the bath mats…
thank you aditeee :D
ReplyDeleteshantanu just cannot tolerate her to be in chembur...but why is he so gussa? He should be pampering his tempered wife :D
yeh pehla couple hai who ive seen are mad as passionately as in love :D
these two are like two kinder garden kids, just cannot imagine them having kids when they are like that themselves :P lol!
LOL!! the ending was superb! seems like shantanu had the last of words in this battle :P
he just knows how how to either shut her up or simply win :)
end idhar kyon kiya now we have to wait for another day :(
wonderful update the day is not complete if shanak dont fight :D
Loved it!!! :) Liked how Shaan taught Ritwik how to maneuver!!!
ReplyDeleteKhanak and Nachiket's coversation was nice..Her wit is unbeatable!!! ShaNak fought again..Awww..She waited and he left..lol..:D
And the shower part was cool!!! But Khanak gonna get angry..Is he going to go out for the meeting???
Everything is so realistic in Casa!!! :)
Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update..:)
awesome love it :)
ReplyDeletebut why shan is so angry
hahahah nachiket is very funny
ooops khanak is so angry at shan and so is shan but khanak ka toh samaj me aata hain but shan ka nahi aa raha ? :(
eekkss the end was why u stopped it here man plz plz plzz update soon :)))
Thanks Aditee :)
ReplyDeleteHahahaha...I simply HATE rock or whatever music you call that! I cringe over it...just irritating!
I wanted a chembur stay! Why is he so irrational regarding her visiting to her parents or even chembur? I totally get that he want her to be where ever he is BUT she needs that space...sometimes its refreshing to have that freedom :P
Both are back to their trade mark...fighting and battling! I just cannot imagine them having a baby at all these two behave like brats when it comes upto arguing! Uffff!
Can khanak ignore his advances? Just for the reason he did the same last time when he was angry about the binds...a payback :P
Beautiful update Aditee.
ReplyDeleteLoved Khanak & nachiket. Nachiket is funny.
But these two are fighting again :P
thanks for wonderful part but you stopped at a wrong time
Plz update tomorrow.
iam loving them......hope Shaan stays back......Khanak ka gussa achha lag raha hai mujhe!!
ReplyDeletewonderful aditee:D
ReplyDeleteOnce again he's cooling her heat by spraying water:P
im eager to know what's awaiting..:P
Update soon:)))
Loved it :)
ReplyDeleteLoved their fight lolzzz
Last para was awesome lolz
Update soon!!!
he always gets his way.. hope Khanak fights harder.. hahaha..
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