Friday, March 1, 2013

Part 91


Worli Sea Face
Her hands trembled as she tried to hold the phone… her sweaty thumb wouldn’t scroll to the home page…
She went to the last text and stared at it “Jpeg” she had said
Are you OK?” she asked
And waited…
She dialed and it went to voice mail…
Called home, Dadi answered… she didn’t know…
K:Bus yoon hi call kiya
D:Ghar aane ka iraada nahi hai?
K:Abhi…
D:Usne Rishi aur uske parents ko khaane par bulaya, aur abhi tak aaya nahi
K:Oh?
D: Tujhe nahi kaha?
K:Umm..mmm
D:Get over here fast… you sound tired… lunch khaaya? Your fave sokhi paneer and moong dal was in it…
K:Abhi nahi…
D:WHY? Are you OK?
K:Hmmm.. Dadi
D:Khanak…
K:Dadi did you hear from Shaan?
D:No beta kyon?
K:I..
K:I am heading home
D:Khanak?
K:Bye Dadi..

She called Shaan again… he did not answer
Texted him “Are you OK?”
Walked up and down her cubicle
Called Pradeep “Sir ke driver ka number maloom hai aapko?”
Pradeep: Bhabhiji who sabko lekar Ulwe IG ke daftar gaya hai
Khanak is tearful
K:KYON?
P:Aap chinta mat karo… koi baat hui nahi
K:Police station?
P:Usne kaat diya, abhi foon karke aapko call karta hoon
K calls and texts Shaan, impatient… beginning to lose it
“Ritu ko karoon?” “Prolly not”
“Dad?”
Her phone beeps “I am”
He says
She dials his number, he doesn’t pick up
“WHERE are you?”she asks
“Relax Khanak” is his response!
She is FURIOUS……….
Ram walks by smiling, worried and pauses…
K:I am OK … husbands
Ram:You just have one I thought (grinning)
K:He is plenty
Her phone rings, its Dadi
Ram:Head home Mrs Gujral
K:Jee (after I find Mr Gujral” she tells herself)
K:Jee Dadi?
D:Ulwe mein kya hua? Tujhe kuch pata hai? Sunil ne phone kiya…
K:No Dadi, he is OK (sulking) kaha RELAX
Dadi laughs
K:Not funny Dadi
D:He is a brat… what can I say… I am worried how its going to unfold though
Khanak stares out the window….
D:Tu ghar nahi aayegi jab tak who lautkar nahi aata
K: Umm.. nah… I..
D:Aaja puttar
Dadi hangs up…
She texts him Where are you?”
He calls her!
S:Khanak!
K:WHERE are you? (ticked)
S:At the Navi Mumbai Commissioner’s
K:You are  DESIGN ENGINEER, why are YOU getting involved (shrill)
S:Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Khanak!
K:I mean… Sha
S:Khanak I was a… I cant talk in detail…
K:GHAR kab aayenge aap?
S is answering someone at the precinct
K:Shant
S:Khanak… can I call you back?
K:I know you wont! (tearful)
S:If I tell you I am OK, does that help?
K:NAHI! (tearing up)
S:Then I am in pain… happy?
K:You are MEAN! Main phone rakhti hoon…
S:Kha… don’t stay up..
K:Never… for you..
He laughs out loud…
She hangs up…
Packs her things and heads home…
11:07 pm
Sunil, Akshay and the rest of the crew are chatting downstairs…
Khanak is in his room… sulking and unwilling to go… she sketched… worked… changed her nail polish on three fingers… and sulked….
Her head ache had gone down since she ate…
There was loud chatter, she opened the door to look
Shantanu was home, he looked up and their eyes met
She shut the door back…
Sunil:What the hell isgoing on?
Shaan: Business as usual
A:You need to come work with us…
S:Construction is not for the faint hearted.. (laughing)
Sunil:Construction in India sounds no less dangerous than crime fighting
Dadi:Shhhh Sunil (shushing him)
Shaan:You are close! Rahat was almost arrested for getting aggressive…
Dadi:Aur tumne kya kiya?
Shaan:I would’ve punched the guy… but showed restraint
Sunil:Think about it Shaan… not tonite… but soon
Madz:Let him do what he wants
Dadi:Have you eaten?
Shaan: Nope! Whats for dinner
Dadi:Vegetarian… teri biiwi ne khaana nahi khaaya lunch waala
Shaan:WHY?
Dadi:Biwi teri hai usko pooch
Sunil:Is she OK Ma?
Dadi: Yeh usko itna pagal karta hai (in Punjabi)
Shaan:Jee asudhi saara main kitta siga (its all my fault) Where is she?
Dadi: tujhe nahi pata?
Shaan: Not home yet? (worried)
Madz:Oopar hai… she is sulking…
Sunil: She is a swthrt… she never sulks… she wanted to sketch…
Dadi: Ja… khaana bhijwati hoon
Akshay:Think abt it Shaan… there is a lot we can do together
Sunil: Rahat aur who inseperable hain… he wont
HL refills their drink
Shaan doubles up on the steps….
She is in the balcony
Hears the click and doesn’t turn…
S:Hey
K wishes she had her phone… she cud have pretended to talk… she wishes to look at him to see if he is OK
S walks up and stands by her…
S:Sulking?
K is quiet…
He laughs silently… heartily.. it enrages her…
She moves… he places one hand on rail… both sides… “Iam back now”
“A lil early don’t you think?” she asks
“Khanak” he protests…
There is a knock on the door just as she reaches for his hand……….
S:Hl?
He gets the door, HL wheels the dinner into the lounge area… sets it and leaves
K stares at the bobbing fishing vessels… HE eats ravenously… finishes his SOR
S:Khanak…(calls out from the lounge)
K:I am not hungry (she yells back)
S:There is strawberries… and choc truffle
K:Mujhe to bataya nahi Dadi ne (upset)
She walked inside to the lounge
S:Saved it for her battered grandson….
K:BATTERED? (shocked)
S: You know… (pause)
She walks up to him…
K:You think its funny…
S:It is… (not)
He drags her by her hand…
K: Nahi…
S:What do you mean nahi?
K: I said No…
He holds her close…
K:What happened…
S:Later…
He bends down scoops up some choc truffle and feeds her….
Gently kisses the drizzle…….as it soaks her chin and cleft, drips down moist and sticky between her b----
K:You think you are clever…
S:Ofcourse I am… provoking you and feeding you chocolate… I have to get l---
She pushes him angrily…
Shaan laughs heartily
K:Abhi… I want to know.. what
S:Khanak… (holding her as she wrestled…)
K: Its all over the news…Rahat’s in jail isn’t he? (gleeful)
S is serious… holds her tight… “We made design changes, announced it in the weekly meeting the Construction crew supervisor… declined to incorporate… we have a hard stop on getting them in…
K: What changes?
S: Khanak…
K: Did you negotiate a raise with them for changed plans?
S: Its not black and white like that (ofcourse we wont pay them more)(condescending)
K:They threaten u with picketing and you don’t raise the wages?
S:Rahat has the best legal team on the planet…
K:That’s wrong…(shocked)
S:Ajmera can get rid of them (arrogant)
K stared at her husband… shades of his orginal nature were beginning to unravel… her heart skipped a beat… she hated him then… she was married to him now…she fantasized about him making love to her with such a look in his eyes……..she knew what it felt like now… for real….
The haughtiness and raw sexuality came as a package……..
K: Are they militant? (looking down at her bowl of choc….hiding her thoughts from him)
S: we have been using this new contract crew for the basement job at the club house…on hindsight… may be a bad idea…
K:Sha (afraid)
S: Things quickly got out of hand… Rahat was there for the walk through… so they made a bigger deal…
K:Is the site still sealed?
S:Ofcourse not! (smug)
K:Can you take some (off?)
Chowing down on the chocolate mousse truffle thing…
S:Are you serious?!  Nope! This is not the movies Khanak…(smirked)
K is ashamed… for suggesting it… followed  by disappointment at being laughed at……….
S:Its OK… we are all good now…(dismissive)
K:you always under play every crisis…(discovery)
S:I have good training (firm, looking at her pointedly)
She is hurt………and guilty……..
S:Look… we all know how this business is…(pacifying)
K:Ajmera plays dirty… (lashing back)
S:Excuse me?
K: Esteem is working on getting Lower Parel… Rahat is too I am told…
S:Its called competition… NOT playing dirty (defensive)
K: In Rahat’s books… and (yours)
S:Esteem is trying to get out of Bangalore… they have a public interest litigation (PIL)happening at the Hebbal project (shrewd), he is out of Bangalore for good…
K:Rahat is (stops)
S: Are we taking sides now? (furious)
they fought all the time… about themselves or Ajmera or Esteem… or unionized labor……….corrupt business practices
She moves away surreptiously… from him… his khakhi Dockers are soiled at the bottom… the olive green and yellow check shirt is undone to the 3rd button… sude shoes intact as he wore boots at the site…
Tousled and soiled and conceited…  yet reeked of wealth…class
K:You…
S: No I am not taking a shower or shaving…(mad)
K turned crimson… “Good” “Coz I am sleepy too”
S:I don’t recall saying anything about not wanting sex though(savagely)
His hand busy undoing her strap at the back, while hers trying to pull her tee down….. fighting his hungry mouth…
K:Stop it! You j…(“You hate Esteem Builders so we have to call it quits”)
S chuckled reading her mind…He pushed her back on the couch… rubbing his face all over… before he inhaled… and kissed… hungrily.. sucking every morsel of chocolate from her body… sharing the tang of SOR…
K: Beard burn (she moans as his face connects with bare skin on her chest)
He heatedly  arouses her… loosening her clothing…
K:You smell like construction dirt… and gasoline
S continues his onslaught…….
K:Shantanu…
His lips close on hers… knocking her breath out… she holds his face… not letting go of the lock………
He picks her up…. Takes her to bed….









15 comments:

  1. Loved it so much!!! :) Thank God Shaan is safe!!! Liked how you penned the emotions Khanak went through..Helpless and dont know what to do!!! Perfect!!! Pradeep helped her by giving some information..Nice touch!!!

    Finally at least Shaan texted her back..Awww!!! Khanak broke down while speaking to him..:( So touching!!!

    I liked how Khanak went into a shell and sulked alone..She is so cute!!!

    Awww..Khanak saw Shaan enter the house,their eyes met but she closed the door..:D Loved this..:) In films and serials they'll show she rushing back and hugging him in front of all..But Casa is so unique and classic!!!

    Construction business is actually a mess.Lots of dealings and dirty things will be played..:x Whole Gujral family is worried about Shaan continuing in it..But he just adores his job and so passionate about it just like how he passionately loves Khanak..:D

    Awww!!! Khanak wants to turn back and see Shaan when he entered but her anger got over powered and sge didn't..:( The way he approached her and the disturbance of HL for a moment all such a awesome touch..The best thing about your writings is the reality!!!

    Ha..Ha..She just couldn't refuse the truffle..And the way he said he is battered to make her look at him is lovely..Poor Khanak!!! And both their arguments and fight is just too good..Yep..Arrogant Shaan is too hottttt..;)

    What to say about their romance!!! Its unique and so hottttt!!! :D

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an outstanding update..:)

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  2. i wished this update could never end! sigh!
    i wanted to just scroll down, so that i could read more..
    Thanks a lot for a long update..LOVED IT TO THE CORE!
    Everything was just surreal, her getting tensed about him, nervous for him..She IS mahaan Khanak!
    i seriously didn't have any idea about construction field before casa! Thanks a lot aditee, for giving an insight about it, i loved everything about your description through Shaan :)
    Even i was relieved, when he said 'i am', i seriously left out a breath!
    Loved their talk, their fight, everything..:)
    He speaking his mind and he IS seriously angel Shaan!
    He made her eat, that was too cute..
    i don't have words for these two, they are heavenly, would love to see a real couple like them..As much as i've seen, wives usually surrender to whatever husbands say..that's how it is..i think!
    Akshay and Sunil trying to bring him to their side! That wouldn't work! Shaan would never do that!
    I seriously want to know, what is jpeg is??
    what is that?? can anyone please care to tell??
    Aditee, update soon..itna intezaar mat karao yaar, everytime the class leaves, the first thing i do is to check for an update. and at home also its the same case :P
    well, i can't help it:D
    waiting:)))))))))))

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    1. The digital images are stored in system/mobile as jpeg!!! Like how one stores word documents as .doc/.txt..Its expansion is Joint Photographic Experts Group!!!You can google it to understand more clearly!!!

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    2. That was cute!
      I think what makes them special is the setbacks and flaws! The 'mahaan' Khanak and 'angel' Shaan definitely WORKS :P Atleast we relate to one or more aspects of each of these characters :)

      DITTO! I do the same, after a tedious day of Uni Casa is a relief :D

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    3. @ poo - Thank you for replying:)

      @ Sonam - HI 5 :D i totally agree to, we relate to aspects of our casa's Shanak :D

      @ aditee..update!! u know, i went back and read the whole casa season 2, and still there's no update??:( if you're awake..please post one:)

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  3. OK .
    SIGH!
    Incredible!
    SO UNEXPECTED!
    The bestest read ever :D

    Battles of work ethics! Couple ko choro your stories are never 'DEVOID' of the realism. In all honesty I don't know how much this Mumbai construction politic works BUT it did make me do my OWN little research read a few blogs and articles to get the gist :)

    Sunil is right, it won’t take too long for him to be aggressive! The sound of this ‘profession’ sounds vile to me too much filth!
    Anyways Kya banda hai...So casual about it or more like his ego is such a setback sometimes...Khanak needs to give him a blow someday...I mean she will always be in fear of his safety.

    So if Esteem gets the textile project means that the couple will be adversary professionally?! Yikes! There will be ‘sides’ soon officially! This is exciting :D

    Aab now to the couple! They go from being sulking, aggressive, illogical to the other end!
    Shantanu definitely needed the shower :P

    P.S. Some more lines should have been pink and blue
    Update SOON and happy weekend :D

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  4. WOW! I mean, really! That was a BRILLIANT update! Kudos to you Aditee! :)

    Well, I'm kind a clueless about these construction projects n stuff, but the update gave me an insight, as how this kind of business actually works, and things that comes along with it!

    Her anger, care, makes him want her more! :))

    His passion work work makes him all more desirable! And she'll always be worried for his safety! This is great Aditee, you never miss the dose of reality in ur story! :))

    And like Sonam mentioned, I can see plans being made for them to taking sides soon! :D Work is gettin lot mre thrilling than I though! ;) xD

    Continue Sooooooon!



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  5. fantastic update aditee
    beautifully penned abt khanak's emotions... how she was terrified and tearful
    when he was not responding she called dadi an pradeep... a nice touch
    finally she got some info from pradeep and em glad he replied and he is ok
    the text conv and the fone conv was superb... i loved it
    the just cant stop fighting
    everyone at home is also concerned abt his work issues.... i liked that everyone has their opinion and knows that he will do wht he feels like and he is confident
    sunil's part was very nice
    i found it cute that she was adamant and was sulking but truffles ka magic chal gaya and that was super cute
    the battered part was shoo shweet
    hl timing was urrhghh
    but he was clear that he is going to make ....
    the romantic part was hot ... shanaklicious
    loved it
    update soon

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  6. wow loved it and glad Shantanu is ok

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  7. Khanak is fighting with herself to come out of the shell.. that's good.. and Shaan as usual being a jerk and getting what he wanted... nice combo these 2..

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  8. Glad he is ok... n both r back to fighting and making out...
    awaiting the next part...

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  9. I always find Khanak worrying about Shaan very sweet and endearing and this time too it was damn cute and i also always love his reactions to it!! the update was a brilliant one and so very real !! all the Shanak parts were heavenly!! both of them have such drastically opposite point of views but the attraction and passion amongst them surpasses everything!!

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  10. Beautiful update. it was complete pack, emotions, anger, romance. u r so sweet. luv ur writing. You can start writing another story, but pls don't discontinue cas. its really close to my heart

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  11. Wohhaa Super long Update :) Thanks a bunch dear.
    Occupied My weekend super way reading Casa Season 2 & i am lost in them totally. they are so adorable. loving them totally. start a new One but PLEASE CONTINUE CASA ALONG WITH IT. loving casa soooooo much. SHanak of Casa is just amazing. i am loving the way they are sharing things, super updates Aditee. Continue soon.
    Sorry for not commenting for a Long time.

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  12. eekkksss love it
    TG shan is safe
    omg clashes aur woh bhi regarding work hmmmmm
    uufffff they dont care what happen what unka romance nahi rukta
    it was sooo hot ishhh :)

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